View Full Version : What Dialogue Do you like to Hear as the Girl Inflates/Expands
Taylor
05-15-2009, 01:37 PM
Please post as much as you can as I am shooting today and the next several days and would love to hear what you want to hear.
Caffiene
05-15-2009, 04:05 PM
Personally I've always been a fan of stating the obvious, stuff like:
"what's happening to me? I'm blowing up like a balloon!" or "I'm turning into a blimp!" or "Oh, I'm getting so fat, what am I gonna do?" As well as things like: "Oh, I'm getting so big, I feel like I'm gonna burst!" and "I hope I don't explode."
I know it's hard to keep coming up with variations on those, that's kind of the problem a lot of writers in the community have run into. But the simple stuff really does work best, you don't have to reinvent the wheel each time.
As far as I'm concerned you'd have to really try to over-use that stuff. I never get tired of hearing it, the girl really can't call herself a balloon or say she's fat enough.
That's just my opinion, others' may vary.
I think Caffiene pretty much nailed it. My only exception is that I'm not crazy about the whole "fat" aspect. Blowing up like a balloon is fine, but getting fat isn't. Go figure.
As for the sensation, I don't like it when any sort of pain is mentioned. A "funny" or pleasurable sensation is what I like to hear about.
Keep up the great work!
Rei-Lin
05-15-2009, 07:03 PM
For me I have to say I love the whole panting, moaning thing the most...with maybe a "What's happening to me?" or "What's going on with my *insert body part expanding here*" I love those things that happen due to situations outside of the person's knowledge or unknown to them such as a curse or an old spell muttered. I guess I'm just a fan of those "alone when it happens" kinda transformations. :)
caffiene pretty much nailed it for me too. Love the "Oh I'm getting so fat.." type of dialogue.
Caffiene
05-15-2009, 08:48 PM
I think Caffiene pretty much nailed it. My only exception is that I'm not crazy about the whole "fat" aspect. Blowing up like a balloon is fine, but getting fat isn't. Go figure.
As for the sensation, I don't like it when any sort of pain is mentioned. A "funny" or pleasurable sensation is what I like to hear about.
Keep up the great work!
Well honestly I like to hear both ways no matter which type of expansion it is. If the girl is "getting fat" then I like her to compare herself to a balloon, if she's "blowing up" then I like it when she says she's getting fat. I don't know why, I just do.
But this post reminded me of something else, it would be cool if the girl mentioned the sensation: Something like "this feels so weird" and maybe kind of laughing about it: "don't I look silly?" Or on the other hand acting like the sensation is turning her on. That could be pretty cool.
BudapestSwope
05-16-2009, 02:04 AM
Taylor and I wanted to post this thread so we could refer to it if need be during any future shoots--not just the one we had today.
So if anyone wants to add *any* dialogue, words or phrases or even describing sounds and sound fx they like to hear PLEASE just keep posting it here.
THANKS!
clovis
05-16-2009, 04:38 AM
Honestly I think you guys have done really well so far.
What I enjoy most is when the girl comments on how she's going to show them off or one-up some other girl(s.) An example of this comes from the clip of Holly playing pool where she mentions that she bigger than all her serority sisters and that she can now get any guy at school. Saying things like this sort of widens the scope of your clips by suggesting interactions we'll never get to see with more characters and in public places. Any thing that implies competitiveness is a definite plus.
One thing I would avoid is making comments that contradict what we're seeing. An example of this would be when a girl's chest is clearly inflating like a balloon and looks as light as one, she should avoid saying that they are really heavy (if they are liquid filled, then by all means go ahead.)
Keep up the good work,
Clovis
theearl
05-17-2009, 08:33 PM
One thing which does kinda annoy me about the clips is the exposition talking that a lot of the videos have. The girl's talking to herself, like she's narrating the premise to her invisible friend, and it doesn't feel real. I want to believe, and it throws me out of the video. The big example I can think of is in the "Holly's Surprise Belly Inflation," where she soliliquises about eating chocolate. I think most of the videos could either work with the girl talking *to* someone or without any preamble and just trusting the audience to get it.
Other than that, I'm generally in favour of some well-placed moans and "Oh my god"s. I do like the sfx that are used occasionally as well.
Thank you.
The Earl
davmbar
05-17-2009, 09:13 PM
it would be good to use an explosion effect as the girl complains how tight her skin is getting.
Taylor
05-17-2009, 11:42 PM
Thank you guys these are helping me
Please keep it up.:xena_banana::xena_banana::xena_banana:
Karma666
05-22-2009, 09:16 PM
I like it when the woman looks down towards her breasts, and she is completely taken by surprise at the sight of their initial expansion. I like to hear her say "Oh my _____!", as her top is slowly being stretched to its limits. I like hearing her gasp in amazement as each button pops off her blouse in sequence, or the fabric of her shirt slowly splits from the top down the middle. What really turns me on is when she's being discriptive of what's happening. For example: "Oops. There goes a button. Oh! There went another one. Holy crap! It looks like my bra is about to rip open!" In the case of an erotic scenario, I like to hear her moan in ecstacy as her shirt rips and pant in time with each popping button.
As far as sound effects go, there doesn't need to be a lot to immerse me into the fantasy. When it comes to the clothes destruction portion, I much prefer the natural ambient sound coming from the actual clothing worn over a pre-recorded track that is inserted at the time the clothing is ripped. I've never worked with any kind of sound equipment on a set, but I think having a sensitive enough mic could really enhance (no pun intended) both the expansion and growth processes. That's all I have for right now, Mistress Taylor. I hope both you and Bud have found this information useful.
ddarko
05-25-2009, 12:22 AM
I'm a huge fan of the weight gain content. And while I like the "I'm gaining just for you" themes, I would like to see more content centered around loosing control. The ruby BE weight gain video touched on it a bit. Not being able to stop eating, and dialog centered around that. Or even situations that are out of the girl's control causing her to get fat.
smegman9
05-25-2009, 12:54 AM
I'm a huge fan of the weight gain content. And while I like the "I'm gaining just for you" themes, I would like to see more content centered around loosing control. The ruby BE weight gain video touched on it a bit. Not being able to stop eating, and dialog centered around that. Or even situations that are out of the girl's control causing her to get fat.
Yes i agree, out of control or forceable wg :D
BudapestSwope
04-20-2010, 08:16 PM
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Laughingmann
05-06-2010, 01:27 AM
Just to add a short point to this, I like when a girl mentions she feels wierd before she starts to expand. Also, the usual "what's happening to me?!" type things are good too. Not to mention the "ooohs" "aaahs" and other moans while she's expanding.
It's also really awsome when her dialogue conveys suprise at first, maybe a little fear, but as it feels better and better she begins to like it more and more, but she doesn't always admit that outloud.
For sound effects, I love the bubbling one ya'll used back in the clip with Holly and the drink. I think I like that more then the wierd "upset stomach" sounds that alot of clips employ.
I have so much to say on this topic that I should probably just email Taylor privately about it, lest it turn into an entire novel here! But Caffeine was TOTALLY correct about the fact that you can NEVER hear "I'm blowing up... Like a BALLOON" etc. too often. In fact, when I buy a video from this site (and I've bought almost 40 of them so far) I ALWAYS listen for it, and must admit to feeling a bit of 'buyers remorse" if the girl doesn't say it. Which is why I loved "Roly Poly" so much, Taylor hits all the "trigger" phrases, and even talks about turning into a blueberry... HOT!
lk_ie
05-06-2010, 05:48 PM
Would be nice to hear a lady say "I have a fetish for seeing other women in inflatable rubber suits!"
Fundudeguy99
05-06-2010, 08:31 PM
I'll add my two cents.
As a bigfan of all inflation I really enjoy expansion based phrases. Things like "I blowing up!" or any of the other classic balloon quotes for a general air based inflation are a real turn on. For breast growth, something about weight. If it's not air and actual flesh, there's got to be mass, right? Having a girl talk about how big she's getting, how heavy her breasts are...damn!
For my personal favorite, the belly expansion/WG/stuffing clips, I really like hearing about the size of the inflation. Things like "I'm f@$king huge!" are a real turn on. Of course the girl has to be feeling something too. Fear is okay(at first), but it is much more enjoyable when the girl likes it. She should be loving the expansion, wanting to get bigger, fatter, rounder...god it never fails to excite me. The bigger she gets, the more pleasure she gets.
Another thing I love is the breaking of the fourth wall. Have the girl talk straight to you. Lines like "I bet you love how fat I'm getting. So big and round. But you know what? I want to get BIGGER!"
I guess what I'm saying is the girl has to enjoy it, telling how much she love it, and in some cases how big both you and her want her to be. Lines about how big and fat/stuffed she is, how big she's gonna get, and how she's all yours.
Laughingmann
05-09-2010, 08:09 PM
I should add actually that there are a few things that I don't like to hear when a girl expands, and it might suprise you. It's cursing. I've never been a big fan of it period but there's something extra added to it when the girl is cursing up a storm as she gets bigger. It grinds my nerves to no end, I'm not really sure why...probably because I try to avoid it myself.
I mean, if a girl is like "wow, I'm getting so F-n big," thats one thing. But when she sits there and is like "Holy F F, look f how fing big I'm fing getting. F!" there's a difference. The clip where the girl (I can't remember her name but it was a 2 for 1 special) was blowing out her birthday cake, and she grew, I loved that clip but I mute the sound because most of her dialogue is a flurry of curse words.
As far as being on topic, I really like it when a girl is suprised and maybe a little scared about her breasts growing at first, but then it starts to feel good and so she starts to enjoy it. I like it when the suprise is kept there through most of the clip, and then mixed in with general enjoyment.
My favorite phrase of all, I think is "I feel kinda funny." If she giggles or has a kind of quizical look on her face when she says that, I could watch that part all day. Especially if she's growing and says "Woah, whats happening to me?!" "I'm getting bigger!" Are also great.
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