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Old 10-18-2013, 06:48 PM
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Belly(Preggo) Bred Like a Real Bunny!

Bred Like a Real Bunny!



Cast: Jenny McKenny
Amber St. Clair

Scene 1: In the backroom (Locker Room) of a Playboy Gentleman’s Club.

We find ourselves in the Locker Room of a local Playboy Bar. Two waitresses are getting ready for work. They are wearing the traditional Playboy Bunny Costumes with the nylons and leotard. Bunny Ears and bunny tail as well. Two different color outfits don our waitresses. Jenny is our Rising Star. She is real head turner and smart. She is up for a raise and a Promotion soon. Amber is jealous of her accomplishments to say the least! Jenny is smug towards her fellow Bunnies and Amber is sick of her attitude and wants her out of there for good!!

Jenny: “Hey Amber, welcome to work! Are you ready for another day with perverts grabbing you ass!

Jenny laughs out loud and gives Amber a look of smugness!

Amber: “Hey Jenny, how are you doing?”

Amber tries not to show her anger!

Jenny: “You know, pretty dam good since I only have a few weeks running around here serving all of these fucking pigs!!”

Amber: “It’s not that bad Jenny! We get really great tips!!”

Jenny: “Fuck the tips, I will be making way more than you dumb asses! I am moving on up to a Manager position!”

Amber: “I know, you deserve it. You work you ass off!”

Jenny: “Not only that, I AM smarter then all of you!! No offence to you Amber!”

Amber: “None taken.”

Amber is really getting pissed off now. Little does Jenny know, Amber has a plan!

Jenny: “See you later! Better get out there and serve all the Pervs!”

Amber: “Yea, Later!”

Amber thinks back a few weeks to how she prepped for this day!

Scene 2: Amber's Bedroom

We see Amber in her bedroom in which is adorned with Black Voodoo wall declorations and she performs the Ritual to make the Potion to get even with Jenny.

Amber: "Thanks to my long dead Aunt who taught me the ways of Black Voodoo Magic I can finally use it to get this Bitch!! Let's see, I just need a pinch of Rabbit's blood, a hair sample I got from the Bitch's hair bruch last week and mix slowly and wa-la. Ready to go!"

Amber knew she would be out of work for a good duration! Now this Potion was not only for one child, oh no, this was for a whole litter! This spell would give her a least 4-6 children in her unsuspecting womb!! Amber wanted this bitch gone!


Scene 2:In the Backroom (Later that night)

Amber waited until all of the patrons were gone and other co-workers before she commenced with her devilish plan....

Amber waits for Jenny to clear some tables and she has the potion ready for her. Jenny walks in exhausted from her long day serving her customers. Amber can hardly contain herself as she knows what is about to happen to her bitch co-worker!

Jenny: “I can’t believe all of the assholes are gone now! Now I can get out of this stupid Bunny outfit!”

Amber: “ Hey Jenny, I have your favorite Beer for Ya! I thought you would like it after a long day!”

Amber put the required amount of her Voodoo Pregnant Potion in the beer and had it ready for Jenny to consume it.

Jenny: “Shit yeah! Give me that fucker! Thanks!”

Jenny slams the whole beer down in a few gulps!

Jenny: “This tastes funny!, maybe I’m too tired to know the fucking diff!!

Amber: “Oh you will notice it Honey!”

Jenny: “What did you say!?!?”

Amber: “I SAID, you will notice it Honey!!”

Jenny: “What the fuck does that mean?”

Amber: “You’ll see, BITCH!”

Jenny: “WHAT, FUCK YOU! You just wait, once I get my promotion, I will FIRE your ASS!!”

Amber: “ The Hell you will!
Just then we hear a “rumble” out of Jenny’s tummy! She looks down at her tummy area and put both hands on her rumbling belly!

Jenny: “ What the hell…..

Jenny’s belly starts to grow bigger and firm, Expanding the fabric of her Bunny Costume. We see a nice round belly growing.

Jenny: “What the FUCK!! Is this gas or what?”

Amber: “ Oh it IS much more then that! Say hello to Mommyhood BITCH!!”

Jenny: “WHAT….DID…YOU…SAY????”

Amber: “ I said, Welcome to Mommyhood!! I think you have company in your womb, don’t you?”

Jenny: “ I feel something MOVING in here!!”

Amber “It’s your bunnies!!’

Jenny: “MY WHAT?”

Just then her belly grows to new limits as her breast swell as well. Her costume rips to accommodate her new body! The breast cups strain with weight also! Jenny struggles as her costume is strained to the max. Her belly moves outward slowly as her "bunnies" move ever so vigerously in her womb.

Amber: “Let’s just say I know a few tricks and I want to make sure you’re out on Maternity Leave ASAP!!”


Jenny: “WHY ME!! Oh shit how many of the little fuckers are in here??? It FUCKING HURTS!!!!!"

Amber: “You reap what you dish out bitch! I want you out of here! You make all of our lives hell around here!:

Jenny: “IM SORRY…. PLEASE make it stop!!”

Amber: “Can’t stop it now! I think it suits you! See ya!!

Jenny: “ Where are you going?? I need HELP!!.....

We see Amber walking out flipping her the bird! Jenny is left alone to bear the load of her transgressions. Her belly is swelling up to a size of multiples in her womb and her breasts are ready to rip right through the cups of her uniform! She is rubbing her belly franticly as it reaches it's full growth. She struggles to get her balance and is tubbing her swollen breasts!

Jenny: " Oh my tits! It's hurting my back!! How much milk is in HERE!?!?!?!?

Jenny grabs her breast and jiggles them to feel the added weight of thier dismise! She waddles out the breakroom door very slowly crying for help! Her Bunny Costume is still tight around her panty area but has a big belly stuck out in the center of if and we see her breasts overfilling her cups of her Uniform straining to be freed! She waddles out through the door......

Fade out……………..

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Old 10-18-2013, 07:03 PM
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Haha, I love it! Its a very character driven script, which isn't very common, but almost always interesting. I was rooting for Amber and loved her dialogue and taunting, although Jenny's dialogue was a little predictable. I also feel that there is an imbalance between the amount of character & dialogue and the amount of expansion and detail of the expansion process (similar to "The Statue of Iris"). Overall though I love this and thought it was kind of hilarious in a way, however I'd add some more 'oomph' to the expansion process.

P.s: Favorite line: “It’s your bunnies!!’ #Hilarious

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Old 10-18-2013, 10:16 PM
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I like this as a general idea. However, as a script it does pose some questions. There is a lack of description in the settings. Are the locker room and the back room the same room or two different rooms? "Jenny walks in exhausted from her long day serving her customers." What does she do next? Does she sit down? On what/where does she sit? Is she facing Amber or looking at Amber's reflection in the mirror?

"Amber has an Aunt that is a High Voodoo Priestess that was trained in the ancient Blank Art! Her Aunt gave her some lessons years ago as a child when she lived with her Aunt for 4 years while her Mother was in a Coma. She moved to Jamaica for that time. Amber had been preparing for this day for weeks! She had the spell all laid out and she already had taken Jenny’s hair sample from her brush in the Locker Room and made a spell and a potion to impregnate her bitch co-worker so she would be out of work for a good duration!"

How would you present this information to the audience in an audio/visual format (the clip)? I'd have the audience see Amber's open locker (out of Jenny's view) in the locker room with pictures, symbols, and other "magic" stuff indicating that she has some training in the old ways.

Interesting choice, I've never heard of the ancient Blank Art. Possibly a more powerful but lesser known cousin to the ancient Black Art?

If you're ok with it, this easily lends itself to include a bunny transformation: When Jenny takes the beer, she removes the uniform bunny ears. She grows bunny ears as an effect of the potion, seeing them in the mirror, she then notices the ones she took off still lying on the table/desk/chair/floor.

Amber's line, "It's your bunnies!!" could then be taken literally.

By the end of the clip, Jenny has a bunny nose and whiskers.

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Old 10-18-2013, 10:27 PM
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Thanks Sleeper248! I shall tweek the script. You have great insight!
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Old 10-26-2013, 08:52 AM
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I like the overall story, it definatly shows the degree of hatred between the two girls. I kinda felt that there was a bit too much swearing, especially the demeaning nature near the beginning because no workplace would allow it. But I also realize that its more of a dive bar type scenario, so I imagine that one would be the star and think shes better than the others. I like the revenge story behind it, getting her outa there for maternity leave, and belly swelling up full of bunnies. Like the others said it could use a little more description of the expansion though tied in around the dialogue in the scene.
I would like to see this made a clip
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Old 10-28-2013, 06:22 PM
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Great ideas Stomr!! I will tweek the story when I get some time! Your ideas are well thought out. M
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Old 10-28-2013, 06:24 PM
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Duh! Got it! Thanks Nikk!!

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I love the idea of a playboy bunny pregnancy! But I LOVE sleeper248's idea that this should be a part Bunny transformation too! She could grow bunny ears, whiskers, nose, and a tail as she becomes pregnant! Sexy!!!
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