The Cursed DVD

[blueberryguy999]

Story:
On a normal peaceful day, Stella was cleaning up her attic full of old junk and shit full of old things from the 1980's. She is almost finishing up cleaning and picked up a box of old DVDs, but then she dropped the box and a DVD fell out. It was a DVD with the title DO NOT WATCH, THIS DVD IS CURSED DESTROY IT AT ONCE. She denies the warning and runs downs stairs to her TV, before putting in the DVD she called her BFF Amanda to watch the DVD and make snacks. An hour later her BFF arrive with pillows, blankets and bean bags and all got on the floor as they put the DVD in the DVD player. It begins with usual ads a DVD would have before the movie. The ads took long, so they began to talk about life until the last ad ended. It showed a FBI warning before the movie, they all got so excited to watch the movie. It starts with Taylor on screen in front of a spinning wheel as the background. She starts to tell them to empty their mind, so the girls did what she said and cleared their minds. Next Taylor moved from the spinning wheel so the girls can stare at it while she says a command, the command was that every time they say the word bigger three times something will happen. They said the word bigger three times as the screens cuts to black and the DVD ejects itself out of the player. They began to feel a pain in their body as they open their eyes they all screamed because their bodies began to inflate as well as their asses and their boobs. Soon the inflation ended, they were stuck with fat stomachs, big boobs and huge asses. So they began to laugh at each other on how they look and ended up playing around with their new bodies bouncing their boobs together and bumping each other asses together.

The End

Script:

Stella: GOD SO MANY USELESS JUNK IS IN THIS ATTIC.

Stella: k last box, oh no I dropped it, hey whats this now.

Stella: A DVD with the title: DO NOT WATCH THIS DVD IS CURSED DESTROY IT NOW.

Stella: Hell no I'm not destroying this DVD, I'm going to call the girls to come watch this with me.

Amanda: Hey!!!!!!!!!!

Amanda: i brought pillows, blankets and bean bags

Stella: I made snacks for us all, ill put the DVD in the player

Stella: GODDAMMIT THESE ADS ARE SO BORING, jeez there is a lot of ads.

Amanda: well it is a movie and movies due tend to have a lot of ads

Taylor: Stand up and empty ur mind

All: okay

Stella: guess this is it the movie

Taylor: good, now u will do as i say, ur under my command when i say bigger 3 times u will say it after me got it?

All: yes

Taylor: bigger, bigger,bigger

All: bigger, bigger, bigger

All: screams

Amanda: my boobs, my belly and my ass is inflating

Stella: Mine too, god this DVD is really curse

All: it must be!!!!!!!!

Amanda: ha ur so huge

Stella: hey this isn't bad at all we look cool with our new bodies

All: Lets party

[bigsexydylan]

This format looks familiar... lol. You should had backround story in the DVD and get it alil horror fill to it since Halloween is coming up. You need to give the character names and reduce it to 2 characters. The script seems a bit short. I like DVD idea though.

[blueberryguy999]

Originally Posted by bigsexydylan

This format looks familiar... lol. You should had backround story in the DVD and get it alil horror fill to it since Halloween is coming up. You need to give the character names and reduce it to 2 characters. The script seems a bit short. I like DVD idea though.

thanks, ik ill add the names, it sould be a Halloween we will see what happens

[bigsexydylan]

Good job on your stories. I think its great how your making them. I'm retired for now, I dont see the point in posting/making them when they won't get made into a clip. Plus its alot of work especially when I'm doing it for free.

[blueberryguy999]

Originally Posted by bigsexydylan

Good job on your stories. I think its great how your making them. I'm retired for now, I dont see the point in posting/making them when they won't get made into a clip. Plus its alot of work especially when I'm doing it for free.

Thanks it means a lot to me, ur stories are great too hope u will return to making them one day

[bigsexydylan]

Not anytime soon, I dont see the point inakimg them if they won't be made as a clip. Lately people having been reading them anyways. I notice only guests read them.

[bigsexydylan]

I noticed you made the changes, great job

[sleeper248]

Patience bigsexydylan. Taylor said she was making one of my stories/scripts last year and still has it "on the schedule" to be made.

Great story blueberryguy999. If you don't want any advice for writing scripts please stop reading after the thank you. Thank you.

Still reading? Okay, here is the advice.
I like the way you put the story and then the script. A script is more than simply dialogue between characters. A script is the writer's chance to convey their vision for what happens on the screen. I have re-written a segment of your script to show you with more industry standard formatting.

I. STELLA'S ATTIC - INT. DAY (scene heading tells us where and when the scene takes place. Is it and interior INT or exterior EXT scene , time of day and how do we enter the scene) FADE IN

Stella is moving boxes around in the attic.
(actions tell us what the characters are doing in the scene or generally what is happening in the scene.)

STELLA
God! So many usless junk is in this attic.
K, last box.
(dialogue, what the named character says on camera)

Stella picks up a box overflowing with stuff but it slips from her hands.

STELLA
Oh no, I dropped it!

The box crashes to the ground and a DVD falls out onto the floor.

STELLA
Hey what's this now?

Stella picks up the DVD and reads the title.

STELLA
*said in a mockingly slow voice
DO NOT WATCH THIS DVD IS CURSED DESTROY IT NOW.

STELLA
Hell no, I'm not destroying this DVD, I'm going to call the girls to come watch this with me.

Stella pulls out her cell phone and started dialing a number.

II. STELLA'S LIVING ROOM - INT. NIGHT FADE IN
AMANDA walks into the room carrying some pillows, blankets and bean bags.

AMANDA
Hey!
I brought pillows, blankets and bean bags

Stella enters the room with a big bowl of snacks.

[bigsexydylan]

I could be very impatient but there is no way I have the patience to wait a year lmao!!! Btw I have no idea what story to make next

[blueberryguy999]

Originally Posted by sleeper248

Patience bigsexydylan. Taylor said she was making one of my stories/scripts last year and still has it "on the schedule" to be made.

Great story blueberryguy999. If you don't want any advice for writing scripts please stop reading after the thank you. Thank you.

Still reading? Okay, here is the advice.
I like the way you put the story and then the script. A script is more than simply dialogue between characters. A script is the writer's chance to convey their vision for what happens on the screen. I have re-written a segment of your script to show you with more industry standard formatting.

I. STELLA'S ATTIC - INT. DAY (scene heading tells us where and when the scene takes place. Is it and interior INT or exterior EXT scene , time of day and how do we enter the scene) FADE IN

Stella is moving boxes around in the attic.
(actions tell us what the characters are doing in the scene or generally what is happening in the scene.)

STELLA
God! So many usless junk is in this attic.
K, last box.
(dialogue, what the named character says on camera)

Stella picks up a box overflowing with stuff but it slips from her hands.

STELLA
Oh no, I dropped it!

The box crashes to the ground and a DVD falls out onto the floor.

STELLA
Hey what's this now?

Stella picks up the DVD and reads the title.

STELLA
*said in a mockingly slow voice
DO NOT WATCH THIS DVD IS CURSED DESTROY IT NOW.

STELLA
Hell no, I'm not destroying this DVD, I'm going to call the girls to come watch this with me.

Stella pulls out her cell phone and started dialing a number.

II. STELLA'S LIVING ROOM - INT. NIGHT FADE IN
AMANDA walks into the room carrying some pillows, blankets and bean bags.

AMANDA
Hey!
I brought pillows, blankets and bean bags

Stella enters the room with a big bowl of snacks.

Thxs, i will try to write the script like that for the next story I write txs for the advice sleeper