A Blueberry Gum Fantasy
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Originally posted by sleeper248 View Postdoes she blow bubbles with the gum? If so, how many and how big?
i will do that in the next one
please let me know what i should be doing differently and i will try another one
this was the first ever shot
i am sure it could be improved
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This video is simply amazing. As the person who requested this clip I know I'm biased, but this is easily my new all-time fave of any of your clips.
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- Holly was definitely the right choice. The girl did a sublime job of sexualizing the blueberry fantasy. If you use a different model for the next video, she should watch this one as a reference for how to act.
- Things I love: her talking about how helpless she'll be, how she wants me to promise to juice her, etc.
- Bubbles: She could use bubbles as a demonstration of how the gum is going to inflate her. "I'm going to blow up just like this bubble." That would be a great way to integrate bubbles.
- Love the camera work in this clip, and the way it was edited.
- Her blue lingerie and red shoes, the blue pillows, etc., wonderful details.
- I loved how she kept licking and sucking the gum.
- Minor difference: it's subliminally effective if she uses the passive voice rather than the active voice. Example: "The juice is going to inflate me" instead of "I'm going to inflate." The idea is that the juice or the gum is forcibly inflating her rather than her body growing on its own.
- The ending was just perfect: that orgasmic shriek as the blueberry flavor hits her and she knows what's next. Just perfect.
Excellent, fabulous, wonderful clip. I hope everyone buys it.
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A note about so-called "actual inflation":
Tim Burton had an entire special effects studio at his disposal and Violet's blueberry transformation still sucked.
The best way to approach the blueberry fantasy, because it's so hard to make look "real," is to get a model who's really good at talk and get her to stimulate your imagination. CGI can't compete with a girl who knows how to work sexual energy into talking about becoming a blueberry.
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True, but...
It would be nice if the clip description could be edited to explain that there is no actual transformation other than the 5 seconds at the end. I'd bought it thinking it was an actual TF clip...if I'd known it was description-only, wouldn't have done so. Which is fine..can't like everything all the time. But because a blueberry TF has been discussed on the forums forever, I think people should be aware that this particular clip isn't that.
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I'm with privatejoker - I think this clip is great! Fantastic job. I didn't feel gyped at all by the lack of inflation because the rest of it was such a turn on. Since you've asked for feedback, here are a few suggestions:
-Maybe have a scenario where she doesn't want it to happen. Helplessness is such a big part of this fantasy for a lot of us. I might be fun to have another person tease her with it, letting her know what it's going to do to her and have her react in a frightened or confused way.
-LOVE when she talks about what it'll do to her body. I don't know how graphic you feel comfortable being, but I'd love to hear descriptions of actual body parts...
-Ending was great - if you do one where it's going to happen against her will, you might end the clip with her begging for help, panicking as she describes what's happening to her body.
-You don't have to make it as long. I love the build-up, but it doesn't need to be anywhere near 15 mins. In fact, I'd much rather you do a few 5 minute videos where you play around with the blueberry/Wonka scenario than one long one. I'd still shell out the cash!
Thanks!!! Really looking forward to the next one!!
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Originally posted by duckboy43 View PostIt would be nice if the clip description could be edited to explain that there is no actual transformation other than the 5 seconds at the end. I'd bought it thinking it was an actual TF clip...if I'd known it was description-only, wouldn't have done so. Which is fine..can't like everything all the time. But because a blueberry TF has been discussed on the forums forever, I think people should be aware that this particular clip isn't that.
I've amended the description. I believe because the script was posted here we didn't think about adding a disclaimer and also because if there is any process in a clip its always well represented in the image.
Just PM me if you want to exchange it.
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