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Old 05-15-2009, 01:37 PM
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What Dialogue Do you like to Hear as the Girl Inflates/Expands

Please post as much as you can as I am shooting today and the next several days and would love to hear what you want to hear.
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Old 05-15-2009, 04:05 PM
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Personally I've always been a fan of stating the obvious, stuff like:

"what's happening to me? I'm blowing up like a balloon!" or "I'm turning into a blimp!" or "Oh, I'm getting so fat, what am I gonna do?" As well as things like: "Oh, I'm getting so big, I feel like I'm gonna burst!" and "I hope I don't explode."

I know it's hard to keep coming up with variations on those, that's kind of the problem a lot of writers in the community have run into. But the simple stuff really does work best, you don't have to reinvent the wheel each time.

As far as I'm concerned you'd have to really try to over-use that stuff. I never get tired of hearing it, the girl really can't call herself a balloon or say she's fat enough.

That's just my opinion, others' may vary.

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Old 05-15-2009, 05:03 PM
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I think Caffiene pretty much nailed it. My only exception is that I'm not crazy about the whole "fat" aspect. Blowing up like a balloon is fine, but getting fat isn't. Go figure.


As for the sensation, I don't like it when any sort of pain is mentioned. A "funny" or pleasurable sensation is what I like to hear about.

Keep up the great work!
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Old 05-15-2009, 07:03 PM
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For me I have to say I love the whole panting, moaning thing the most...with maybe a "What's happening to me?" or "What's going on with my *insert body part expanding here*" I love those things that happen due to situations outside of the person's knowledge or unknown to them such as a curse or an old spell muttered. I guess I'm just a fan of those "alone when it happens" kinda transformations.
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Old 05-15-2009, 08:02 PM
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caffiene pretty much nailed it for me too. Love the "Oh I'm getting so fat.." type of dialogue.
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Old 05-15-2009, 08:48 PM
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I think Caffiene pretty much nailed it. My only exception is that I'm not crazy about the whole "fat" aspect. Blowing up like a balloon is fine, but getting fat isn't. Go figure.


As for the sensation, I don't like it when any sort of pain is mentioned. A "funny" or pleasurable sensation is what I like to hear about.

Keep up the great work!
Well honestly I like to hear both ways no matter which type of expansion it is. If the girl is "getting fat" then I like her to compare herself to a balloon, if she's "blowing up" then I like it when she says she's getting fat. I don't know why, I just do.

But this post reminded me of something else, it would be cool if the girl mentioned the sensation: Something like "this feels so weird" and maybe kind of laughing about it: "don't I look silly?" Or on the other hand acting like the sensation is turning her on. That could be pretty cool.
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Old 05-16-2009, 02:04 AM
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Taylor and I wanted to post this thread so we could refer to it if need be during any future shoots--not just the one we had today.

So if anyone wants to add *any* dialogue, words or phrases or even describing sounds and sound fx they like to hear PLEASE just keep posting it here.


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Old 05-16-2009, 04:38 AM
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Honestly I think you guys have done really well so far.

What I enjoy most is when the girl comments on how she's going to show them off or one-up some other girl(s.) An example of this comes from the clip of Holly playing pool where she mentions that she bigger than all her serority sisters and that she can now get any guy at school. Saying things like this sort of widens the scope of your clips by suggesting interactions we'll never get to see with more characters and in public places. Any thing that implies competitiveness is a definite plus.

One thing I would avoid is making comments that contradict what we're seeing. An example of this would be when a girl's chest is clearly inflating like a balloon and looks as light as one, she should avoid saying that they are really heavy (if they are liquid filled, then by all means go ahead.)

Keep up the good work,
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Old 05-17-2009, 08:33 PM
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One thing which does kinda annoy me about the clips is the exposition talking that a lot of the videos have. The girl's talking to herself, like she's narrating the premise to her invisible friend, and it doesn't feel real. I want to believe, and it throws me out of the video. The big example I can think of is in the "Holly's Surprise Belly Inflation," where she soliliquises about eating chocolate. I think most of the videos could either work with the girl talking *to* someone or without any preamble and just trusting the audience to get it.

Other than that, I'm generally in favour of some well-placed moans and "Oh my god"s. I do like the sfx that are used occasionally as well.

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Old 05-17-2009, 09:13 PM
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it would be good to use an explosion effect as the girl complains how tight her skin is getting.
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