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  • Roky
    Elite & Respected
    • Feb 2010
    • 4082

    #151
    mikacaptiveinflate_w.wmv

    mikacaptiveinflate_w.wmv 20.45

    Strong perfs solid concept increase the entertainment value, at least for me, over they typical body inflate clip. 1st shot good concept and nice and steady, unfortunately got your shadow. I kept it in because it sets the mood well. Easy clip to edit because of 'behind the scenes at TMC' plot and good execution.

    Up in TMC.

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    • Roky
      Elite & Respected
      • Feb 2010
      • 4082

      #152
      sammiedonutBE_w.wmv

      sammiedonutBE_w.wmv 5.39

      Long lost clip - been up for awhile, kept forgetting to tell you. Nice color. Perf eh. Used 'Lonliness of A Middle Distance Runner' as bumper music.

      Up in TMC.

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      • Roky
        Elite & Respected
        • Feb 2010
        • 4082

        #153
        CoCoASSBE_w.wmv

        CoCoASSBE_w.wmv 18.23

        Not half bad ASSBE. Great color - nice lighting much of the time. Her perf good enough, a little overdone but you can tell she tried. Expansion pretty good for both ASS and BE. Camera shakey. Gets a little long at end. Used "Black Ants in Sound-Dust" and "Space Moth" by Stereolab.

        up in TMC.

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        • Roky
          Elite & Respected
          • Feb 2010
          • 4082

          #154
          sammieASSBE_w.wmv

          sammieASSBE_w.wmv 17.19

          Best line by far, "Do I look silly? I can't tell." Beginning rough, long in parts. Lighting harsh at times too, good in other places. Let me know how you like it, I cut a decent bit out of the exposition. Some decent audio work during the expansion bits. Used Stereolab's "Gus the Mynah Bird" and "The Black Arts" from their Sound-Dust album.

          Up in TMC.
          Last edited by Roky; 04-26-2011, 02:03 PM.

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          • Roky
            Elite & Respected
            • Feb 2010
            • 4082

            #155
            goldenBE_w.wmv

            goldenBE_w.wmv 11.24

            Already up as you know. Pretty good stuff.

            UP in TMC.

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            • Roky
              Elite & Respected
              • Feb 2010
              • 4082

              #156
              Futa webster

              websterFUTA_w.wmv 25.37
              AC/Heat on in LR during phone conversation - also during stroking. Good perf. - all around awesome stuff. Used Legendary Pink Dots "And Even The Vegetables Screamed".

              Up in TMC

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              • Roky
                Elite & Respected
                • Feb 2010
                • 4082

                #157
                shay-zebraBE_w.wmv

                shay-zebraBE_w.wmv 11.30

                Pretty good quick BE with effective inflation and decent enough perf. All around good stuff for a quickie - some nit=picky BS:

                Nice steady shots - I'd like you to repo after cuts. Repostion and stay there for the entire take, you have a tendency to end up in the same position every take no matter where you start. Great getting all that coverage - try to mix up the angles more so I can use more of it without too many obvious repeats.

                The light behind her on set caused the iris to close down - you can tell because when she covers it the iris adjusts up and suddenly she's lit. When you got low and shot up into light she went almost completely black - that's two filters jacked up to pull up the video levels. Please say cut on camera, or perfect. Can see your shadow directing assistant to pump, just say "PUMP!" it's easier for me to remove your audio than a shadow across the screen at such a pivotal point in the clip.

                Up in TMC.

                ABOVE ORIGINALLY POSTED IN TMC/GENERAL BY MISTAKE

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                • Roky
                  Elite & Respected
                  • Feb 2010
                  • 4082

                  #158
                  megan-schoolBE_w.wmv

                  megan-schoolBE_w.wmv 10.00

                  Decent quick one I guess - girl not great but once she understood what you wanted did okay. Inflation very loud and squeaky, I was able to remove a lot but not everything, and a bit uneven at times but passable. Like the introduction of a more involved plot, though, and having another actor. Great shots of her stuck in her chair.

                  Cut three times during exposition/intro and didn't repostion once. You were on an OTS (over the shoulder) wide shooting Megan from across the room. On a cut just move in and get and ISO (isolated) shot of Megan (close-up or medium) for at least 20 or 30 seconds then go from there if you want to go back to your original OTS set-up. You could also flip around and get Burke, but who wants to see that?

                  Up in TMC.

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                  • Roky
                    Elite & Respected
                    • Feb 2010
                    • 4082

                    #159
                    brandimae-workoutBE_w.wmv

                    brandimae-workoutBE_w.wmv 16.24

                    Acting good. Nice lighting/color/skin tone. Inflation a bit squeaky again, I took a lot out but listen for anything offensive in case I missed some. Used older inflation sounds that I haven't used in awhile in the sound design - let me know if it is okay.

                    Up in TMC.

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                    • Taylor
                      TaylorMadeClips
                      • Jul 2008
                      • 4598

                      #160
                      Originally posted by Roky View Post
                      brandimae-workoutBE_w.wmv 16.24

                      Acting good. Nice lighting/color/skin tone. Inflation a bit squeaky again, I took a lot out but listen for anything offensive in case I missed some. Used older inflation sounds that I haven't used in awhile in the sound design - let me know if it is okay.

                      Up in TMC.
                      THank you
                      tim told me he sent you her ass expansion
                      i shot an ass expansion to tack onto this
                      i do not think it is good enough to stand alone
                      maybe we sell this and the fulll version be and ae
                      you should have it by now
                      he started sending you another new folder last night
                      of just holly

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                      • Roky
                        Elite & Respected
                        • Feb 2010
                        • 4082

                        #161
                        brandimae-workoutBEASSE_w.wmv

                        brandimae-workoutBEASSE_w.wmv 22.42

                        This it the clip that is 'brandimae-workoutBE' with an ASSE at the end. I include a title card that says "A FEW HOURS LATER..." as a transition between clips.

                        The ASSE features a slightly darker set and is more shadowy than the BE. Very squeaky inflation. I extraced a few that weren't over lines, but there's tons still in there.

                        Additional VCs up already. On the way to TMC, be there by 2pm Eastern.

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                        • Roky
                          Elite & Respected
                          • Feb 2010
                          • 4082

                          #162
                          myley-schoolBE

                          myley-schoolBE 8.24

                          You know some of the issues already, a few notes:

                          Jump in coverage just before expansion - her glasses don't get removed on screen while seated. No huge deal, a simple continuity issue we were able to gloss over by dissolving into process. Medium shots - especially of inflation - dark and flat. I also rarely hear 'cut' or 'stop' - don't be in such a hurry to turn the camera off.

                          All in all, though, not so bad as you may be expecting. Short, and the actual inflation isn't very strong - the bra seemed to float over the balloons and mess up the shape in some way or another. But perfs weren't so terrible and there's a little nudity, so I guess it qualifies as a little different for a quick BE.

                          Up in TMC.

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                          • Roky
                            Elite & Respected
                            • Feb 2010
                            • 4082

                            #163
                            holly-bigboobniteBE

                            holly-bigboobniteBE 23.08

                            Nice looking set. Could use a much dimmer bulb in the accent lamp, hurting your exposure. First shots look good. Like the MI angle during the expansion - just watch shooting during those bits - you started to move all over the place twith no real gain in shot quality - kind of only added bumps and shadows instead - may distract viewer from watching what is happening - her growing a pair. Used Barry Adamson's "A Perfectly Natural Union".

                            Up in TMC.

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                            • Roky
                              Elite & Respected
                              • Feb 2010
                              • 4082

                              #164
                              sybil-holly_madsisterBE

                              sybil-holly_madsisterBE 7.03

                              Was going to say you set up too far away to capture all the set-up dialogue and that the AC whas drowning them out but you moved and fixed all of that after the first few lines or so. After that - excellent BE. Good perfs. Good to great shooting - thanks for all the lockdown angles. Expansion looks great. A quibble at the end is the giant push pin has a less than threatening almost campy/jokey look to it instead of actually being scary, but then a again a magic laser just made tits grow so what do I know.

                              Up in TMC.

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                              • Roky
                                Elite & Respected
                                • Feb 2010
                                • 4082

                                #165
                                sybil_holly-madsisterbellyE

                                sybil_holly-madsisterbellyE 11.26

                                Sequel to 'madsisterBE'. Revenge theme. Used tiny part of "When The Sky Opened" from the Twilight Zone soundtracks. My first time ever using a laugh track - I used it sparingly and lost it after the laser bit.

                                Up in TMC.

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