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  • Roky
    Elite & Respected
    • Feb 2010
    • 4082

    #196
    holly-fantasyBE

    holly-fantasyBE 14.11
    Good, simple clip. Dream about BE that happened during a class at her college. Good perf. I'd like to see a little more headroom - for awhile the angle just feels too low - too much time spent looking at her bruised knees. That being said Holly herself doesn't really suffer too much from this low angle, but many girls would.

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    • Roky
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      • Feb 2010
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      #197
      chartemple-violetBE

      chartemple-violetBE 11.25

      The one where she thinks she's doing a blueberry clip, actually chews on the gum, but Evil Taylor gets impatient and sprinkles her with magic water that grows her some big-uns. Solid perfs. Light overall a little dark (1st shot expecially) but skin tone good and color good. Shooting a bit more active than normal, I guess to go with plot of her being betrayed and Evil Taylor being excited by it.

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      • Roky
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        • Feb 2010
        • 4082

        #198
        holly-justsaynoFUTA

        holly-justsaynoFUTA 24.25

        Either the most or least effect Public Service Announcement for the anti recreational drug set. Good perf, solid light - got bright for the nut only. Also that black blanket thing on the chair she's on and her shirt kind of gobbled the light up a bit in places. Good, quick birthing.

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        • Roky
          Elite & Respected
          • Feb 2010
          • 4082

          #199
          allura-nurseFUTA

          allura-nurseFUTA 17.18

          AC/Heat on. Nice repositioning throughout - really helps me out a lot and increases professional look of overall video. All sorts of muffled camera thumping throughout. Tought to see initial birthing with the inflatable, but once she's standing with dickstick the tenting is good. Painless edit. Used an ambient texture from Digital Juice (08227).

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          • Roky
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            • Feb 2010
            • 4082

            #200
            allura-gumBE

            allura-gumBE 14.40

            Pretty good inflation in beginning - great steady shots too. Remember I can only reverse shots that do not include her face (that being said, I can crop her face out within reason but not really effectively in a medium or wide shot). Thank you for the room tone - worked great. Big-uns a little rough - nipple direction inconsistent and shooting a little too active - also darker except for one shot. As I mentioned in an IM from yesterday, I can possible eek out a slightly longer clip by lengthening the first process but it would take some effort to make the growth match - there's a number of duplicate medium shots that don't quite cut together and don't look as good as the take I went with, especially when they get to be a good size (in the other takes they kind of flattened out in an odd way).

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            • Roky
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              • Feb 2010
              • 4082

              #201
              cindylou-looninflateBE

              cindylou-looninflateBE 21.55

              Overall good stuff - underwhelming performance but she's new and looks good just didn't add too much to the BE part. She warmed up a bit and the panic at the end during the suit inflation looked good to me. Excellent process- I linked together multiple takes of great swelling, etc. I left in about 2 minutes of balloon blowing up before the process and about 2 minutes after as well (she's in underwear). Used parts of Digital Juice's 'Berleo' from Smooth Stacks and also Digital Juice's 'Orchestral Set 2'.

              While doing the trailer I noticed a mistake, at 14.37 there should be a cell phone ring. I'd leave it out, but if you're in no hurry to release this I can easily pipe one in and remaster. Let me know.

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              • Roky
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                • Feb 2010
                • 4082

                #202
                cindylou-evilcheerBE

                cindylou-evilcheerBE 12.45

                Strong plot where evil cheerleader attempts to cast spell on opposing team in hopes of making their chests shrink - instead her chest expands. Good coverage of process, inflation itself okay - kind of a tough outfit and the black color doesn't help. During the spell incantation sounds like someone is moving stuff around in the next room. White balance or lighting changed after first close-up process, probably light. Used suspense texture 08370 from Digital Juice. Also used a snippet of Orchestral Set 2 from Digital Juice.

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                • Roky
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                  • Feb 2010
                  • 4082

                  #203
                  dita-paintBE

                  dita-paintBE 18.57

                  Remember to try to be close to the subject when capturing dialogue - especially if it provides key plot info (or pretty much the only plot info). Otherwise pretty good stuff. Some good quotes: "What am I gonna do? There's a pervert in the next room." "This has to be a delusion." At around 11.23 I caused a continuity error (shirt on/then off/then on again) but though the cutaway was worth it. Used Digital Juices "Sunny" from Smooth Stacks and 08340 Suspense Texture.

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                  • Roky
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                    • Feb 2010
                    • 4082

                    #204
                    cindylou_soleil-FUTA

                    cindylou_soleil-FUTA 17.33

                    Well, if you have to watch one sword fight this month it may as well be this one. Two nubile friends reunite after summer vacation and compare notes. One can virtually watch her breasts grow her hormones are going so wild, while the other can't seem to avoid chicks with dicks. Overall good stuff - not many notes really. Tough to see some of the detail of the CindyLou birthing due to a mixture of the light and the dark fabric. Her nut looks fine while gushing but the droplets look un-semenesque on Soleil's chest. There's no transition to Soleil's pop position so I just wiped. Can't see 1st position pop in beginning - streams lost in background. Camera moves so by end of shot we see it.

                    Once the girls get going amusing perfs with good reactions to CindyLou's thrusting poke-growth. I laughed at the idea that, after the second girl in the room grows a member, the first thing they decide to do is rub them together. The captured audio throughout was pretty good so, while I added process SFX, I didn't add any music or background texture like i sometimes do. If you think the soundtrack sounds to sparse I can add some.

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                    • Roky
                      Elite & Respected
                      • Feb 2010
                      • 4082

                      #205
                      cindylou-soleil-loonBE

                      cindylou-soleil-loonBE 19.39

                      Good stuff again. Following notes are fairly nit-pickey - except there was no room tone for this or the FUTA. Beginning a bit vague as to what was going on, then the girls seemed to focus on the desire to increase their bust size via the tank. Pretty good to great coverage - one small thing is on the wides there seemed to be a tendency for the camera to jiggle pretty much as soon as they started kissing, as if to compensate for them not moving (except their breasts) the camera had to. I'd prefer that part of the shot to be a solid and steady as possible, as myself and I assume the fans are watching their bumps like hawks and don't want to be bothered with a shuffling camera. Also, if there's a way to grab a few extreme close ups to show nipple growth - stiffening so they don't simply appear suddenly on a cut.

                      Like I said, all minor complaints.

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                      • Roky
                        Elite & Respected
                        • Feb 2010
                        • 4082

                        #206
                        shayla_powderBE

                        shayla_powderBE 14.13

                        One of the weaker BE's in recent memory. Process hard to see - maybe the outfit, don't know. Her perf okay enough, more kind of a bunch of little things coming together to make this kind of fall flat.

                        WB off - or maybe lighting - I don't know - something's up. Color way off and image not the best compared to normal. 1st and 2nd shot begin or pretty much stay locked down but I can still hear you on the camera. AC on very loud in the beginning, and you're wide, so she's hard to hear. Some MI at end.

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                        • Roky
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                          • Feb 2010
                          • 4082

                          #207
                          kaya-hairdryerBE

                          kaya-hairdryerBE 22.22

                          Overall good stuff. Good to great process shots. Best OTS cleavage expansion ever. Thank you for room tone. Image tons better but color still off a bit. Catch you in the mirror here and there - think I got it all. Shadowy too at times. I used a slight 'magic glow effect' on the hair dryer in the beginning, after 7 minutes or so I don't use it anymore. Visual effects like that can be increased or decreased, or changed for that matter, whenever you want, obviously. Used selections from Orchestral Set 3, 08109, 08110, 08113, 08115, from Digital Juice. Good perf from her.

                          On the way to TMC, will let you know when up.

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                          • Roky
                            Elite & Respected
                            • Feb 2010
                            • 4082

                            #208
                            sarajay-strokerBE

                            sarajay-strokerBE 13.50

                            Magic shirt as agent. Pretty good perf, overall solid simple stroker BE - only negative not too much process but the process that is there - the mediums with Sara talking through it, are well done and look good with good perfs. Nice color and skintone. Other than starting too low in the very beginning (my opinion) the remainder of the clip features good shots that make Sara and her boobs (real and newly grown) look good. End reclining shot very nice. This clip has some camera body noise, I assume you were still holding it by the body at this point, not as much as Dita but there. The microphone shadow makes an occasional appearance.

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                            • Roky
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                              • Feb 2010
                              • 4082

                              #209
                              allura-strokerBE

                              allura-strokerBE 12.30

                              Hair dryer prop. Agent magic vitamins/stroking. "The happier you make me the bigger they get," she needs to see him stroke it to grow. Pretty good perf, good plot for her. Simple process - 95% from medium with her keeping the dialogue going pretty well - only a few inserts to work with. Used file 08111 from Digital Juice's Orchestral Set 3, also Digital Juice's "Flamingo" from Smooth Stacks.

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                              • Roky
                                Elite & Respected
                                • Feb 2010
                                • 4082

                                #210
                                hotwife-hairdryerIB

                                hotwife-hairdryerIB 10.46

                                Not a strong clip largely due to the talent. She flat out seemed unwilling to participate. That being said, her perf works well in the beginning when hesitant/nervous/sheepish pre-makeover. After that she simply does not provide the appropriate reactions. Please take a look at this and let me know - maybe if I cut it down and stylize it more it would be worth it - not sure. Didn't want to spend the extra time in post if you didn't feel it was necessary. There might be a decent special effects laden sound effects heavy clip in here but don't want to waste your money without the go ahead.

                                AC loud. Seems to go off at some point. Try not to zoom out so quickly after repositioning and starting a new shot - I often can't use the close up part because there isn't enough of it and can't use the zoom out because it's too fast and shakey and looks like a mistake. Used file 08087 from Digital Juice's "Orchestral Set 2" and "Love Song" from Digital Juices Smooth Stacks.

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