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Quick and simple romp through the world of witness protection. Another good plot idea. A bit hamstrung by an actress that wasn't particularly attractive and couldn't act, but situation strong enough to carry it. This would be great to reshoot with a better actress maybe at night. End result of process looks good - getting there was a little bumpy:
-Process for first BE was shot in possibly the most confusing, inefficient way ever. Not sure what you were going for with the multiple takes from either the exact same angle or an angle where you can't see the boobs. Only need to get clean audio once - don't make her say the same lines over and over again it serves ultimately to limit the ways I can use it.
-Waaaay too much post process posing. Especially with this girl's lack of looks and acting - maybe have her pose a bit then do something menial tasks to show the look of the new boobs in action- brush teeth, read a book, unpack, who knows?
-There's no footage to get her from all that posing (after 1st BE) to dropping the phone - maybe I'm missing a shot.
-Holy cow guys waaay too much posing after blonde wig too.
-Please attempt to repostion or change fields after a cut - specifically here from posing with blonde wig to door knocking shot.
-Process for 2nd BE much better but there's a shot when she's facing the window after the loud knock where she's framed odd to begin with then proceeds to grow breasts largely out of the frame of the shot.
-Beware the front of the backside prop (which looks great most of the time) creates another pair of "knees" above her actual knees.
All the above being said this clip was fairly easy to edit and did not take too long. Currently working on "Sleeping Boobies" which shares almost none of the above issues and is looking great so far. Sorry for all the notes and keep in mind it's easy for me to nit pick from my comfy chair after the fact - I know on set things are difficult and you are pressed for time etc - just wanted to pass on a few things that stuck out while cutting.
Up in TMC.
mg-gina-witnessHR 9.43
Quick and simple romp through the world of witness protection. Another good plot idea. A bit hamstrung by an actress that wasn't particularly attractive and couldn't act, but situation strong enough to carry it. This would be great to reshoot with a better actress maybe at night. End result of process looks good - getting there was a little bumpy:
-Process for first BE was shot in possibly the most confusing, inefficient way ever. Not sure what you were going for with the multiple takes from either the exact same angle or an angle where you can't see the boobs. Only need to get clean audio once - don't make her say the same lines over and over again it serves ultimately to limit the ways I can use it.
-Waaaay too much post process posing. Especially with this girl's lack of looks and acting - maybe have her pose a bit then do something menial tasks to show the look of the new boobs in action- brush teeth, read a book, unpack, who knows?
-There's no footage to get her from all that posing (after 1st BE) to dropping the phone - maybe I'm missing a shot.
-Holy cow guys waaay too much posing after blonde wig too.
-Please attempt to repostion or change fields after a cut - specifically here from posing with blonde wig to door knocking shot.
-Process for 2nd BE much better but there's a shot when she's facing the window after the loud knock where she's framed odd to begin with then proceeds to grow breasts largely out of the frame of the shot.
-Beware the front of the backside prop (which looks great most of the time) creates another pair of "knees" above her actual knees.
All the above being said this clip was fairly easy to edit and did not take too long. Currently working on "Sleeping Boobies" which shares almost none of the above issues and is looking great so far. Sorry for all the notes and keep in mind it's easy for me to nit pick from my comfy chair after the fact - I know on set things are difficult and you are pressed for time etc - just wanted to pass on a few things that stuck out while cutting.
Up in TMC.
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