helenaprowlerFEED_w.wmv
helenaprowlerFEED_w.wmv 31.19
Watch your hair when outside - I had to crop the first couple shots because it swirled into and around the frame. Kitchen shot way too dark - the bright light coming thorough the windows was causing the iris to close down - no light on the subject. Try to stay put for entrances/beginning of scenes. You move around a bit for the tie up part and a shadow crosses Helena numerous times in the beginning. More importantly, it takes away from the exposition. At 25.20 roughly you direct with your hands, the shadow is all over her belly. Just cut.
Above just a few things I notices. All in all another good clip, though. Used Die Haut's "Breaking In Your Daydream" for the prowler music.
Up in TMC and on the way to 2119.
helenaprowlerFEED_w.wmv 31.19
Watch your hair when outside - I had to crop the first couple shots because it swirled into and around the frame. Kitchen shot way too dark - the bright light coming thorough the windows was causing the iris to close down - no light on the subject. Try to stay put for entrances/beginning of scenes. You move around a bit for the tie up part and a shadow crosses Helena numerous times in the beginning. More importantly, it takes away from the exposition. At 25.20 roughly you direct with your hands, the shadow is all over her belly. Just cut.
Above just a few things I notices. All in all another good clip, though. Used Die Haut's "Breaking In Your Daydream" for the prowler music.
Up in TMC and on the way to 2119.
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