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  • Roky
    Elite & Respected
    • Feb 2010
    • 4082

    #301
    dita-bagelEAT

    dita-bagelEAT 11.42

    Dita is thrilled she can eat whatever she wants and pack on some pounds for you. Solid perf, good color. She eats bagel/cream cheese, lox. Used DJs The Time Glass.

    Up in TMC ppv/vids2 with preview. Will do FBS version later.

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    • Roky
      Elite & Respected
      • Feb 2010
      • 4082

      #302
      joline-detectiveINF

      joline-detectiveINF 26.47

      Detective Joline is on the case. Missing person, she investigates a lead, ends up eating some 'weight gain' tainted food and gains a ton of weight. Belly E, some shoe destruction, to full body INF. Good perf from Joline, except in the beginning, where it took her awhile to get warmed up. Another note on those intro office scenes, the shots themselves don't follow the rule of thirds -which are not necessary to follow, totally your choice, but it is odd to have her look space so limited and the 'dead' space be about 50% of the frame (everything to the left of her). If you have any questions about this please ask. There also is not enough of a reposition between shots to make a difference, I had to digitally zoom in about 30% at least once. These shots are also a bit bright (key light too bright). Outside, first shot of mailbox exposure way off - don't forget about ND filter for outdoor shots. Crime scene lighting very good. You didn't really reposition a couple of times, especially in the beginning. Feels like you are still going handheld unnecessarily, also not a rule or anything, just feels like it would be easier on you and make the shots more steady. Despite all the above nit-picking, as a whole it turned out well I think. Used DJs Combo At Dusk, Belle Versions A and B, No No Ver B, and Without You.

      up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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      • Roky
        Elite & Respected
        • Feb 2010
        • 4082

        #303
        joline-cookiewitchVORE

        joline-cookiewitchVORE 34.13

        Joline needs young flesh to keep her going, uses fresh baked cookies to lure unsuspecting idiots to her home. Capture/cage/fatten/cook/eat. Very good perf. Good shots and audio much of the time. Used DJs Land Of Adventure, The Boathouse, After The Metal, and Dulcimer.

        Up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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        • Roky
          Elite & Respected
          • Feb 2010
          • 4082

          #304
          joline-princessINF

          joline-princessINF 34.42

          Per script with VO added (I hope in the correct places). I can move anything around if necessary. Joline offered a vacation in a far off land, turns out they want her to be their princess. A magic toe ring causes her appetite to spiral out of control and her metabolism to speed up - she gains tons of weight. A couple costume/scene changes.

          C4563 Should be on a tripod.
          C4562-66 Tough to tell what these shots are trying to accomplish. If you are simply showing off details of the room, lock the camera down and get some shots of what you find interesting/want the viewer to see. The was much of this is shot resembles a POV from someone sneaking around the room, which is useful if you want me to intercut it with the wide when Joline enters (and maybe I should have done that), but is a little confusing if there's only one small part of a 30+ minute video that uses this POV from the talent's perspective shot. I can't really tell sometimes what the intention of the shots are.
          AWESOME job on the VOs - quality great and well noted.
          C4588 First shot back indoors is 'tilted' and you are shooting off the set. Too bright.
          C4589 Shot way too short if intended as a cutaway. Should be 6 to 10 seconds.
          C4602 Too bright. Table looks like it is about to slide out of the frame - level/bead the tripod.
          C4603/04 Also too bright.
          C4616 Great shot.
          C4632/33 Shots crooked/not level. Also too similar to each other, no cut.
          C4636 'Action' then you move camera immediately.
          C4640 Rule of thirds off, Joline is looking off of the short side of the screen - and shooting light on right.
          C4648 Shot starts okay, but as it progresses the framing is off.
          C4649 Framing off - and shooting off the set/backdrop. Seems unnecessary. Not sure though, I'm not on set.
          C4651 Very nice framing.
          C4653 Watch headroom.

          Used DJs The Castle, Mountain View Madrigal, Stone Stein, The South Land, You Are The One, Caravan.

          Up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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          • Roky
            Elite & Respected
            • Feb 2010
            • 4082

            #305
            fae-fatprincessINF

            fae-fatprincessINF 14.49

            Fattening toe ring the key to weight gain for another princess eager to be the fattest in the land. 3 stages, first and second look best. Solid light throughout. This clip had very little usable audio during the process, each stage, because the pump was extremely loud. I was able to match up, more or less, popcorn munching sounds in stage one, but after that it's pretty much roomtone for much of the clip. Not sure this sort of thing is sustainable - one it takes me long in post to edit, two it makes for a potentially uninteresting clip to watch. Used Southern Prelude Ver A.

            Up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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            • Roky
              Elite & Respected
              • Feb 2010
              • 4082

              #306
              dante-tmnewspillskingINF

              dante-tmnewspillskingINF 19.20

              TMNews wraparound. Two clips, both belly INF brought on by intentional overeating. In the first, Dante loses significant other because he is not fat enough. Dante takes some weight gain pills and they work. In the second a king wants a more regal body shape but overdoes it with some help of witchcraft. Color/light good throughout - although the exposure is adjusting mid-shot on the fly. If this is an automatic setting please turn it off if possible while shooting. Used DJs Enigma Ver A, Can't Wait Ver B, In Your Face, Savannah Ver A, The Castle.

              C4862 After dialogue begins you reposition to a shot that throws off the rule of thirds.
              C4889/90 Same shot.

              Up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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              • Roky
                Elite & Respected
                • Feb 2010
                • 4082

                #307
                joline-batgirlINFBB

                joline-batgirlINFBB 34.24

                Good light and perf throughout, solid color etc. Sound a bit wonky, could be from the a/c unit being on, not sure. The kitchen was particularly loud.

                C6194/95/96/97 all pretty much the same shot. Tough to cut between them.
                C6223 rustling paper type noise - not sure. Lots of activity on this shoot while rolling throughout, can hear fingers on camera and sometimes see shadows on subject. Just direct with your voice, so much easier.

                Used DJs Rise Above, Nothing Left But Hope, Aspiration Ver A, Ivory Lizard, Buster Ver A, and Wild Pursuit.

                Up in TMC ppv/edit-workspace with preview.

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                • Roky
                  Elite & Respected
                  • Feb 2010
                  • 4082

                  #308
                  violet-peanutsWGINF

                  violet-peanutsWGINF 35.36

                  Violet gets stood up and inhales too many salty peanuts while waiting for her date not to show up. All that sodium intake set her on a path to rapid weight gain (bellyE at bar). She goes to work and keeps on eating nachos, belly gets huge. At home an ASSE, then she eats some pasta which leads to another bellyE and an ASSE. Perf okay but all over the place with regard to energy. Shooting a bit all over the place too - camera moving around a lot where it seems like it could just be on a tripod. Used DJs Hippie Trip, Every Day Ver A, Trip To Go, Sierra Mexicana, Don't You Wish Ver B, Wutai Sunset.

                  Up in TMC ppv & edit-workspace with preview.

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                  • Roky
                    Elite & Respected
                    • Feb 2010
                    • 4082

                    #309
                    cinnamon-fatdayWGINF

                    cinnamon-fatdayWGINF 22.30

                    Cinnamon psyched, she found some sort of 'Fat For A Day' medicine she's going to take to 'dress up' like a fatso for Halloween. She takes it, cannot stop eating, and gets really fat. Belly E, BE, ASSE, to full bodyE with some hip stuff. First belly E process great, BE great too. Not enough cutaways of the ASSE, meaning I had tons of her face very little isolated process. Belly E laying down rough, as you know. Sitting at desk not as bad. More individual notes like last time if you want them - most revolve around what looks to be unnecessary small camera movements mid-shot. Used DJs Lazy Daze, SWitcheroo, The Moon Ver A, Cheek 2 Cheek, By Your Side Ver A.

                    Up in TMC ppv & edit-workspace with preview.

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                    • Roky
                      Elite & Respected
                      • Feb 2010
                      • 4082

                      #310
                      kona_ruru-friendsASSEWG

                      kona_ruru-friendsASSEWG 27.15

                      A pair of friends decide to imbibe some sort of stimulant that will fill their baggy pants with a big ass. Their plan works perfectly, at first, when they both grow giant asses. But then whatever they took starts bloating their stomachs as well, at the same time making them wildly hungry. They go home to eat and eventually get so huge they are trapped in their house. Solid perfs, solid process, good light and color throughout (although a little tough to see the black outfits at times). Used DJs Hip Hop Lullaby, Graffiti, Down With That, Memory Lane, and The South Land.

                      Up in TMC ppv & edit-workspace with preview.

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