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  • Roky
    Elite & Respected
    • Feb 2010
    • 4082

    #31
    robbie-monster

    robbie-monster 4.08

    Short but pretty good. Used wildly upopular song "Mother Harvest" by virtually unknown band Mumbles.

    Up in GTS3x and on the way to 2119.

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    • Roky
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      • Feb 2010
      • 4082

      #32
      karenfisher-candymonster

      karenfisher-candymonster 6.34

      Pretty good basic monster vore. Keep in mind to try not to move during an important action. Important is highly relative, but in this case the intro to the clip revolves around Karen and the candy, should she eat it, shouldn't she. Nice wide establishing shot/nice cutaway of candy (although I could use a solid 5 seconds, what you see is slow motion extreme)/nice repostion to medium shot/all more or less steady and nicely composed. She finally decides to eat a candy, takes one, and while putting it in her mouth the camera is the middle of a fly by. You cut right after and pick up with her munching on candy - my cutting point is pretty much forced to be on taking a bite of the candy which is slightly awkward because the camera is moving.

      This is nit-picky shit on my part but figured I'd let you know. Also try to throw in a monster stalking POV - I'd be able to extend these clips a little maybe with this type of cutaway. Other than that solid stuff.

      Up in GTS3x and on the way to 2119.

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      • Roky
        Elite & Respected
        • Feb 2010
        • 4082

        #33
        helena-maidmonster

        helena-maidmonster 7.29

        Good stuff - nice little set up leading to portly maid entering forbidden room. Set looks great - one quibble is that very first shot when she enters the room should be locked down - you nudge and give slight adjustments. My opinion (only an opinion, there isn't really a right or wrong with a comment like this) is if that first shot was stationary it would act to intensify the 'lurking' nature of the second shot, kind of give the impression that now we're seeing what the 'unknown' sees. Shooting throughout solid - pretty good active monster. I would still like a monster POV shot or two of what it would see while stalking, seems to be typically feet but this time maybe the upskirt shot you went to.

        Up in GTS3x and 2119.

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        • Roky
          Elite & Respected
          • Feb 2010
          • 4082

          #34
          audrina-readmonster

          audrina-readmonster 6.20

          Good stuff. Accent lamp bulb too bright and cased some iris closing at times. Lamp itself looks outstanding. At around 2.30 the annoyingly white cable cable is in the shot a few times. Cropped it out at times, chose to keep it in at times so as not to always be on a medium or close shot - felt the action carried the shot enough and the full body struggle to justify leaving the cable in. Can remove if you disagree. Kept the edit simple - let the action do the work. With this many shot choices these type of clips can be more stylized, but don't want to waste the time in post if there's no demand (yet) for fancier monster vore clips.

          Up in GTS3x and 2119.
          SMALLS 3.03/3.17
          Last edited by Roky; 12-14-2011, 12:46 PM.

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          • Roky
            Elite & Respected
            • Feb 2010
            • 4082

            #35
            kikidare-sgirlmonster

            kikidare-sgirlmonster 7.44

            Good. I was a little taken aback by neither the school girl nor the teacher reacting to her taking her shirt off, just seemed odd - like either she should be protesting or he should be shocked she'd be so bold. Other than that fine.

            UP in TMC (by accident) and 2119. On the way to GTS3x.
            SMALLS 3.31/4.13
            Last edited by Roky; 12-22-2011, 05:18 AM.

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            • Roky
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              • Feb 2010
              • 4082

              #36
              sammie-maidmonster

              sammie-maidmonster 12.35

              1st shot exposure very very dark - used footage as "monster cam" and put that green effect on it. Color and light varies a bit throughout clip - after the 1st shot being too dark much of the rest seems too bright - more exposure/iris setting rather than lighting itself but not sure. Sammie's perf lethargic at first but gets better for second attack. Nice idea of the escape/legs numb it is a bit odd that her legs can move again as soon as the monster attacks for a second time. Second attack had me chuckling. Despite the notes all around solid clip.

              Personal note - I'm not a big fan of the outfit, well, the outfit is fine, more the idea behind the outfit. Wouldn't it be 'sexier' (I know, I know) if a 'normal looking' young lady was cleaning her house dressed in a more conservative manner and then was attacked by a monster that tore some clothes off? And she was concerned about her life and her exposure?

              Up in GTS3x and 2119.

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              • Roky
                Elite & Respected
                • Feb 2010
                • 4082

                #37
                cjewel-blueleathermonster

                cjewel-blueleathermonster 7.21

                Lighting/outfit/set good. AC on for first two minutes of clip. Repositioning lax in the beginning of the clip - gets better once monter atttacks. Overall good stuff, would like some from the monster's pov stalking shots.

                Up in GTS3x and 2119.

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                • Roky
                  Elite & Respected
                  • Feb 2010
                  • 4082

                  #38
                  daisy-petmonster

                  daisy-petmonster 7.59

                  Daisy offers herself as an almost sensual snack for her pet monster thing. "Oh, I wish I could do this more than once, because I'm loving it," she says. Nice light and nice steady shots. She looks forward to the warmth she'll feel when on the 'inside'. Good concept well executed. Would still like room tone and maybe a pov monster shot or two.

                  up in GTS3x and 2119.

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                  • Roky
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                    • Feb 2010
                    • 4082

                    #39
                    stacyadams-cutemonster

                    stacyadams-cutemonster 6.23

                    'Friendly' monster Stacy thinks is cute and allows to eat her. Decent perf, solid clip. A bit dark in places because of that lamp beside the bed. VCs came out dark because of some gamma issue - figured easier for Randy to bump the gamma on the few shots he's using instead of me trying to futz with the entire batch. Sorry about that.

                    Up in AB and 2119.

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                    • Roky
                      Elite & Respected
                      • Feb 2010
                      • 4082

                      #40
                      holly-pinkmonster

                      holly-pinkmonster 5.57 2.58/3.01

                      Short with little build up or suspense but tons of good struggling, etc. Nice light and color.

                      Up in GTS3x and 2119.
                      Last edited by Roky; 03-08-2012, 07:29 AM.

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                      • Roky
                        Elite & Respected
                        • Feb 2010
                        • 4082

                        #41
                        allura-hookermonster

                        allura-hookermonster 14.26

                        Oh yeah, it eats Rick too. Nice lighting/nice set/nice shooting. Would still like to see some stalking shots from the monster's POV, would increase runningtime painlessly. Good perf from Allura, "A whore will do so much more if you're nice to her."

                        Up in GTS3x and 2119.

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                        • Roky
                          Elite & Respected
                          • Feb 2010
                          • 4082

                          #42
                          nikki-monster

                          nikki-monster 6.46 3.10/3.36

                          Good monster clip featuring slight focus on feet (her feet looked awfully dirty). Good shots, good color. Good perf and screaming. Nice reveal in the mirror. Used Digital Juice's "Masquerade" from their PowerStacks collection.

                          Up in GTS3x and on the way to 2119.
                          Last edited by Roky; 06-21-2012, 10:17 AM.

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                          • Roky
                            Elite & Respected
                            • Feb 2010
                            • 4082

                            #43
                            allura_gemini-monsterF

                            allura_gemini-monsterF 5.07

                            Good color, nice set. Bulbs a little bright in accent lamps. Good action and energy in this short Allura blasting monster clip.

                            Up in GTS3x, TFG, and 2119

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                            • Roky
                              Elite & Respected
                              • Feb 2010
                              • 4082

                              #44
                              chrissy-monster

                              chrissy-monster 6.10

                              Nice simple little monster clip that does the trick. Focus on feet. Nice light - her polka dot dress sent the file size soaring - I can make a lower quality/lower file size if you want.

                              Up in GTS3x. ON the way to 2119.

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                              • Roky
                                Elite & Respected
                                • Feb 2010
                                • 4082

                                #45
                                coco_jenny-monster

                                coco_jenny-monster 3.39

                                Up in GTS3x and 2119. Small version to follow.

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