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  • Taylor
    TaylorMadeClips
    • Jul 2008
    • 4598

    #1

    Crash Growth

    we love what you did
    i am sure that nightmare to edit
    tim had a couple tiny changes
    he said you can call him at home
    if you want


    1730
    TAKE OUT TWO LINES ABOUT BOOBS

    20:04 TO CUT / CUT BACK IN AT "ARE YOU SERIOUS AT ABOUT 20:16
    SHOT AT 20:28 ADD A LITTLE MOVEMENT AND PUSH IN A LITTLE
    CUT OUT WALKING TO GLASS JUST HAVE HER GRAB IT BECAUSE YOU CAN HEAR HER SHOES
    CAN YOU PUT A FIREBALL OR SMOKE OR SOMETHING OVER THE LIGHT IN THE GLASS
  • Roky
    Elite & Respected
    • Feb 2010
    • 4082

    #2
    Cool. So far so good - issue with fix at 20:28:00.

    Shot already 'embiggened' by 46% through two-thirds of it (to hide her thighs when she's squatting then not squatting) so the fix might not be as drastic as you're looking for because of image quality issues (it already looks fairly hinky). Was one of those shots where dutching hurts/disorients instead of making sure you see her rise/grow bigger while everything else stays the same.

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    • Taylor
      TaylorMadeClips
      • Jul 2008
      • 4598

      #3
      Originally posted by Roky View Post
      Cool. So far so good - issue with fix at 20:28:00.

      Shot already 'embiggened' by 46% through two-thirds of it (to hide her thighs when she's squatting then not squatting) so the fix might not be as drastic as you're looking for because of image quality issues (it already looks fairly hinky). Was one of those shots where dutching hurts/disorients instead of making sure you see her rise/grow bigger while everything else stays the same.
      Ok i will be more careful lwith this part of future growth
      it is not an emergency change
      i would just leave it then
      the only thing that i did not like was my stupid shot of the light in the glass
      i knew i should have reshot that
      i hate when i feel rushed through shoots and that was one of those days
      which is not a good day for that to happen
      i need to warn girls it will take forever and be really boring so take it or leave it!!!!!

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      • Roky
        Elite & Respected
        • Feb 2010
        • 4082

        #4
        All fixes already made and clip posted to ppv section of TMC. Regarding the 20:28:00 shot, I pushed in slightly more, stayed in longer, and did a slight pan up within the frame created by pushing in so much. Seemed to work okay. I did a quick job on the last shot, covering the light with a giant fireball that appears once the music kicks in again. Looks okay for the 7 minutes I spent on it. The sad thing is, I could probably spend 90 minutes on it and it would look only slightly better (because of my own limitations with that sort of thing, not the shot itself).

        I think you did a good job shooting this epic. What made it a bit much to cut wasn't the shooting but the never ending nature of the clip itself. What might have helped me with this one was a brief synopsis before cutting it on the plot. I realize these aren't too involved, but maybe a simple breakdown like:

        Day 1: white magic, wants big boobs and big ass, a little success, but ultimately fails. She's excited then disappointed then determined.

        Day 2: turns to the dark side, black magic, things go horribly wrong (she's angry/frustrated/appalled) until they go so wrong they're right, at end she's happy.

        With a clip this sprawling, believe it or not that little bit of info would help guide my general thinking as I approach each small section, helps me with overall tone and music choices, in theory helping me maximize the effect of every shot/line/effect/etc. Part of what slowed me down was not knowing where each section was going until I got there.

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        • Taylor
          TaylorMadeClips
          • Jul 2008
          • 4598

          #5
          Sorry I should have done that
          It was a long one
          I will do that from now on with those

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