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[Roky]

chloe-ASSE

chloe-ASSE 7.57

Clip starts kind of mid process. Not so strong really in any way. Cam shadow here and there as well. Used DJs "Crunk In The Trunk".

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[Roky]

cienna-mirrorBB

cienna-mirrorBB 12.23

Some issues with focus wandering during some wide shots. Direct light really hurting you with these BB's - obvious round hits on suit and your shadow cast into set. That being said, nice color. Good perf.

I'm not sure how the customers feel about seeing the suit so un-inflated but it simply looks odd to me - any way to begin actual inflate process with the suit covered with some sort of mu-mu or robe or big clothes instead of that kind of of awkward rubber suit looking phase we've been seeing a lot of recently? Not trying to make things overly complicated on your end but just thought I'd bring it up.

Also, if you want an on-screen burst shoot the last shot on a tripod to completion with the talent, then have the talent leave the set and record the set only (unchanged) for about 30 seconds.

Used DJ's Goofy Fun.

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[Roky]

chloe-barBB

chloe-barBB 16.25

Late night bar run wildly unsuccessful. Tainted water. Used DJs 'Villager Girl', 'Sierra Mexicana', 'Dune Version B', Passage.

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[Roky]

hollie_lola-labBB

hollie_lola-labBB 16.50

Like I said not as bad as you remember it in my opinion. Lola's perf helped immensely. And good use of naked boobies. Used DJs "Open Eyes" and "The Laboratory".

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[Roky]

pistol-barbellyE

pistol-barbellyE 7.20

Good perf - pretty even lighting - good color - odd lens issue you know about. Used a sharpen filter. Used DJs "In The First Of July Ver A", "Keep On Moving", "Crops Of Gold".

Up in TMC in 2119.

[Roky]

ivyred-sleepyBB

ivyred-sleepyBB 19.48

Dream sequence and explosion. The smoke coming and going seemed a bit random - maybe for beginning of dream only next time? Try to remember to repo each and every cut. Thank you for room tone. Used DJs 'Haydn Opus 76' and 'Arcanus Ver B'.

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[Roky]

har_lucy-doubleBB

har_lucy-doubleBB 28.59

Persistant focus issues - I think I recall you said there was something on the lens. Did what I could to sharpen the image. Decent perfs. Double holding hands stuff looks good. Used DJs "Tender", "Absolute Zero", and "Clumsy Villain".

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[Roky]

dita-povtankASSE

dita-povtankASSE 8.58

Good perf, good looking process at times - good idea to 'stroke' the tank with ass cheeks. Used 'Space Funk'.

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[Roky]

talulah-bimboGROW

talulah-bimboGROW 15.59

Good perf overall nice looking clip with some good shots. Use of old techniques of extreme close up ripping and tearing decent - but to me I found this most effective when what was a normal sized bra became a small one. If possible I think doing the "two identical outfits one the correct size one way too small" is a highly effective way of showing growth (mid or post process). I wouldn't underestimate the visual effectiveness of 't-shirt fits/t-shirt waaaay too tight'. Onto the notes you requested of things I noticed while cutting:

-Reposition!
-Reposition!
-No reason not to reposition - especially with this type of clip. Don't forget the viewer needs a "go to" perspective angle - meaning the medium/wide that shows most of their body/outfit from the front at roughly eye level. This is really the only way to "track" the progress of the process after some of the close-up moving/ripping.
-The shots from low straight up are okay for a quick feeling of "she's big now" but should not be part of a long take. Ultimately you can't tell how big the subject is because there is not point of reference. Toward the end of this clip you shoot multiple shots in a row from down low - once again a good cut-away for emphasis but I think the viewer needs "big girl small clothes she used to be as tall as the lamp now she's a foot over it" shots rather than the underside of her chin and the ceiling.
-Beware of end point height continuity.

Despite the detailed notes, I want to restate that overall this is a solid clip especially considering we haven't done a growth clip for awhile. Let me know if you want anything tweaked. Used DJs 'Eastern Dreaming Ver A.

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[Roky]

layla-povASSE

layla-povASSE 8.56

Pretty decent short, simple POV stroker clip. Auto focus still fucked up. Not sure what's going on but never happened before maybe three weeks ago. Mic shadow/shadow on nearly every shot. At 7.43 and 7.51 can see prop but I left in anyway.

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[Roky]

dita_lucid_lucy-wonkaBB

dita_lucid_lucy-wonkaBB 13.03

Great outfits - good set - harsh light. Lucy and Lucid's hair blown out from getting hit directly from lights that are too bright. Your shadow is all over many shots. Try bouncing light off of ceiling or jacking them as high as possible and closing the barn doors. Good job picking up dialogue, especially in beginning. White balance on lighting changed when face paint spread to nose. Or you changed the lights. Repo. Repo. Try to avoid the dreaded 'security cam' angle - you have a tendency to hoist the camera up and shot down on the subject. It looks awkward in many ways and, specifically to BB clips and BE clips, gives you the best chance at exposing the contact points between prop and skin (example - neck line for BB). Used DJs "Rhone". Overall good clip though.

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[Roky]

pistol-energyBB

pistol-energyBB 22.27

Good perf, good process, good under clothing growth, good shots. Used DJs Mr Jellybean.

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[Roky]

sandra_ivyred-accelpregBE

sandra_ivyred-accelpregBE 25.07

Impatient Sandra goes to the doctor to induce birth - giant belly and massive boobs are the result. Used DJs Aquiesce, Extricated, Arise, Charade.

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[Roky]

lola-povFUTA

lola-povFUTA 7.37

Not much process - solid perf though and nice use of boobies. Used DJs "On A Friday Night Ver A".

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[Roky]

chloe_sandra-fairyfatbellyE

chloe_sandra-fairyfatbellyE 12.18

Good perfs - good light - good shots. Belly prop looks good. Solid process. Used DJs Magical Journey.

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