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electra-candyscienceBB

electra-candyscienceBB 20.29

Solid clip - good perf, decent lighting. Light a bit off in 'candy lab' - a little red and the exposure is changing mid-shot - which we need to avoid. Light a bit dark in the bedroom scene, but not bad, color really nice. Process not great in bedroom - tried to hide shape of suit a little while she was on her back (pointed bottom part by feet - I digitally zoomed in). Once blueberry shape still tough to intercut shots of head with body - you seem to stay with wides for an entire portion of the process (which makes sense to show the change) but then do multiple close-ups that oftentimes start with a change (belt burst/jacket coming open) that makes them impossible to intercut with the previous wides due to continuity. In a previous clip I outlined a sample shot list that should make it easier for you to shoot and me to edit - I just tried to locate it and cannot for some reason - if you need an explanation let me know. Pump very loud for this one and sounds like it is right beside you. Thank you for limiting/eliminating dialogue during pumping - I left many of these sections in - audio cleaned out the pump sound and replaced with room tone (thank you) - if you find them too long or boring let me know and I can shorten or remove some of the more stagnant parts.

C4505 Something keeps tapping the camera during the shot
C4509 Backdrop moving
C4526 'Action' then you move/adjust camera immediately
C4531/C4532 Same shot?
C4539 'Action' then you move/adjust camera immediately. Be aware of headroom.


Used DJs Here We Go Again, Buster Ver B.

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bri_fae-tmcnewsINF

bri_fae-tmcnewsINF 27.52

Three news 'stories', excellent light on news set - good light for balloons, a little dark in spots for the BE, good again for the accelPREG. Solid perfs, in places the sound is rough. For the loon scene believe it or not I added inflation hiss to balance it out (and it makes sense with regard to the exact method of inflation). Used DJs Lazy River, Haydn Opus 77, Cheeky Guy, Moody, Shivers, Fun for A Day Ver A.

C5065/66 Camera moving before you say cut - if possible let the action progress further so there's someplace to cut or back up more on the following shot.

C5079/80 Same shot?
C5080/81 Shots too similar.
C5083/84 Shots too similar.

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jaylee_eden-tmnewsINFBB

jaylee_eden-tmnewsINFBB 25.08

Great idea, combining two inflation styles involving a leprechaun and flipping the roles the talent gets to play. Outstanding color and light throughout. Outfits and makeup look good. Only quibble is the BB it feels like Jaylee runs out of things to say midway through and gets bored, hope that doesn't come through in the edit. Used DJs Inis Eoghain Ver B, Blarney Pilgrim.

C5241 'Action', you start moving and never really stop.
C5242/43 Same shot.
C5265/66 Same shot? Sometimes I cannot tell if these are intended to be retakes.

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Sorry I could have uploaded this yesterday around dinner time I just ran out of gas/got tired.

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rebecca-tmnewsghostINF

rebecca-tmnewsghostINF 27.47

TMNews wraparound with three separate clips. Ghost accelPREG, robot maid accelPREG, bovine accelPREG. Good light and color in each section. For some reason the exposure kept changing during shots both in the maid and bovine sets. Good perfs from Rebecca. Used DJs Absolute Zero, Cold Storm, Inhuman Heartbeat, Predilection, Southern Prelude Ver B.

C4963 Already told you about this one - the arm shadow directing with your hands. Just talk.
C4970 Action, then moved camera.
C4982 Framing way off - rule of thirds.
C4991/92 Same shot.

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laney-peanutBB

laney-peanutBB 9.33

Apparently Laney has a crazy allergy to peanuts she was unaware of - when she shells and eats them she turns into a blueberry. Nice color and light. Not much else going on here. Heavy on sound design as she did not say much and the pump was super loud. Used DJs Clumsy Villain and Buster VerB.

C5356 Hard, abrupt adjustment to camera a few seconds after saying action.
C5373 Framing off, rule of thirds.

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joline-tmcnewsINF2

joline-tmcnewsINF2 23.53

4 part TMNews clip with Talulah as the achorwoman (good job with regard to perf, great light and color). All testing out props.

1- Joline with blonde wig and biguns. Light a tad dark and and inconsistent. Tough to arrive at a happy medium. Used DJs Faded Memories

2- Joline as dancer, twerks it so hard her implants drop. Funny concept. A few notes regarding greenscreen you already received, one more is you do have to light her evenly as well. With a clip like this, the prop created a shadow that made it difficult to cleanly 'key' in. So specifically for this clip, kind of funny but the underside of her backside was in shadow and needed some light. One perf note of course you can ignore if not what you were looking for, but in my opinion Joline or any talent doesn't need to talk nonstop through a clip like this where there is credible 'action' - here the dancing/booty shaking. Joline's great, but after a minute or two it was odd she simply never stopped talking. Used DJs Without You, and Crunk In The Trunk.

3- Joline at first wants to gain weight and a belly to be sexy, then somehow realizes this makes her fat and wants to lose the weight. An appeal to God works apparently, and her belly goes away. Consistent light and color, just a little too dark. Used DJs Tender

4- Joline in an accelPREG. Great perf, really nice light and color and the prop looks great. Used DJs Chilled Out.

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cinnamon-tmnewsINF

cinnamon-tmnewsINF 29.37

4 part TMNews clip featuring Cinnamon with Talulah as the newswoman. Newsroom lighting great.

1- Soda causes bartender to INF. Full body suit. Good light in bar and in bedroom. Used DJs Lefty Lucy.
2- Balloon party. Good light. Used DJs Goofy Fun.
3- Overeating causes INF, burp causes deflation. Rough soundtrack and image. Used DJs Appalachia Ver A and Lazy River.
4- Eat candy, INF. Greenscreen. LIght a bit off, tough to completely drop out background, too many shadows.

C5505 Your shadow is across the side of her face/body.
C5506 Camera moving? Some of these may seem picky but feels like this could be on a tripod.
C5507/08 Shots too similar.
C5508 Action, then you move camera immediately.
C5511 Action, then you adjust shot immediately.
In general really feels like many of these shots would benefit from being on a tripod.
C5515 I think you are on a tripod here, but something keeps hitting the camera.
C5518 Your shadow is across the side of her face/body.
C5522/23 Same shot (although I think you may simply be reshooting the intro).
C5525/26 Same shot.
C5538 Prop gathered at her waist looks funky to me. Camera moving back and forth?
C5545 Close-up of belt. I realize it is tough on set, but be aware of continuity if possible. Her hands/arms were never down in the wide shot, and they are at her side here.

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lucy-hotfatdustINF

lucy-hotfatdustINF 23.09

A lit candle and some sort of 'hot fat dust' is what Lucy used for some intentional weight gain. It worked very well, but then she deflated to her dismay. Solid perf, very good light and color throughout. Solid process. Used DJs Dysphoria.

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lucy-angerINF

lucy-angerINF 12.55

Lucy Stardust stood up by a blind date (set up by her friend) at a bar. She's angry, and her anger bloats her stomach to the extreme. She meets another man, who also claims he was stood up, and brings him home with her. MI, and her happiness deflates her stomach. Deflation process okay but tough to match with regard to clothing and hand placement. Used DJs The Paize Version A, Dusty Roads, Paycheck Ver A, The One That Got Away, Love Song.

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lucy-angerhotfatdustINF

lucy-angerhotfatdustINF* 35.36

lucy-angerINF and*lucy-angerhotfatdustINF*combined.

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fae-phatpillsASSE

fae-phatpillsASSE 29.36

Fae takes some Phat Pills to expand her backside and they work. Great process in the blue pants. I did cut out some eating, I can cut out more if it feels too long. Solid perf throughout. Used DJs Open Eyes, Every Which Way, Hate On Me INST, Topaz Ver A, Pray About It NO VOX.

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rebecca-fatxferINFHR

rebecca-fatxferINFHR 26.38

Custom based on script - belly INF then fat transfer to HR. Transfer process looks pretty good. Solid perf. Pet peeve of mine, constant crinkling of chip bags is picked up extraordinarily well by the microphone - all you here is manually lowered by 3-5 decibels, which isn't much, but helps take the edge off. There's a handful of shots that are back to back and similar, you were probably dealing with the new pump, so no big deal. Color/light great in the lab, light a bit bright in the sitting/eating room (getting a big hit off the picture frame on the right), and a tad dark in the black bedroom but the results are fine. Used DJs Beach Days, Wave Rider, Tequila Brass, Grace Ver A, Without You, Walking On The Sea.

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peaches_cinnamon-clintrialsBB

peaches_cinnamon-clintrialsBB 32.21

University professor needs to complete clinical trials to get this product to market - some sort of infusion that inflates people with liquid temporarily. Good perfs by both, good light and color throughout. Please give yourself pre-roll like in the old days - hit record, wait 3 seconds or so, then say action. Very often I'm barely catching your 'go' command and we're off and running. Brief full body inf, then full BB.

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minnie_taylor-estateeggsINF

minnie_taylor-estateeggsINF 23.31

Good light and color except in dressing room - a bit dark. Remember you can cheat and 'be' the 4th wall of the room and light a space like that properly if you want. Excellent performances by both, Taylor forcing Minnie to go to an estate sale to get an outfit for Easter dinner at Grandma's. Body INF for both. Used DJs Soaring Ver B, Behold The Victor, After The Metal.

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minnie_taylor-classroomFINF

minnie_taylor-classroomFINF 18.02

Student taints apple with laxative, but is forced to eat the apple first by the teacher. Copious gas results. Nice light, good color. Perfs a bit extreme for me - too much constant hysterical talking - in my opinion every second does not have to be filled with fast chatter and reacting. But, if that's what the customers want, what can we do? Pump seems to come on at the wrong time - and almost always while they are talking. I removed the sound where I could, minimized it in other places. Used DJs Cold Storm and Family Portrait Ver A.

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