Kimberly Marvel: A Blueberry Gum Fantasy
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I just bought this and I really enjoyed this one. I really do love her mannerisms, her questions, and it got me thinking...what if there's a 'Weight Gain Gum' by Wonka too? Different foods over and over, blowing up the girl chewing it fatter and rounder? So many possiblities. Great stuff
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Wow, just wow! I really loved her as a potential Violet! She definitely would have that innocent, "What's happening to me, Mr. Wonka?" tone that many of us would love so much. I really enjoyed all the details that you put in to the video, such as doing her hair like Violet and having close-ups of her face to provoke suspense. Once again, terrific video, and I too support the weight gain idea!
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I love that the blueberry tease idea has caught on.
My critique of this video: Kimberly spent too much time talking about non-turn on stuff. I like that you guys went with the "I wonder what will happen" to me angle, but details like where she bought the gum and what flavors of gum she would like—do nothing for me. Everything she says should be inflation- or blueberry-related.
Any models who do this type of video in the future should watch Holly's blueberry video as a reference. Can't go wrong with that.
That said, the blue-ing effect at the end was outstanding. You guys are the best hope for blueberry fans. I hope you make more of these.
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wow!
I dl'd this a while back, but just found time to post. Great video! I always love how feminine Kimberly is. I also loved the longer bluing sequence! Yay!!!!
I thought the vid really got rolling when she started contemplating herself as a blueberry. If she were doing that while she was turning blue, that would be completely awesome.
Before that, backstory is a tricky thing. In this fetish, you can sometimes pull off a good backstory, but more often than not ppl get really impatient and just want to skip ahead to the good part. In my dumb stories (that nobody reads) I usually make the backstory as ridiculously convoluted as possible, almost like a dare to take it seriously if you want to get to the good stuff.
I thought one of the best examples of that was in Kimberly's first video (I think it was her first) where she kept encountering these classic BE scenarios. And nothing kept happening. lol! Then, suddenly Taylor's hand shot out with a squirt bottle and sprayed her with BE juice and the fun started. I thought that was great. Maybe even a little *too* subtle(In this fetish, with the viewer's brain entering bad states craving the inflation, bricks and baseball bats are a more appropriate level of subtlety.)
I think the reason I liked her rumination on turning into a blueberry is that it's the time when the viewer is hooked, and you can really use that to focus and direct their attention on the model. At that point the viewer is like this crazed little puppy that you can basically guide around the model's body at your whim. And they like it.
Kimberly is great. I was really glad to see her in this one. All's I have to say for the next one is -- MORE BLUE!
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Originally posted by Taylor View PostI will have mika watch hollies clip today and shoot one too.
I made a new suggestion on the other thread that I think would gain even wider appeal: http://taylormadeclips.com/forums/sh...0&postcount=20
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