Mika Tan: A Blueberry Gum Fantasy
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The blueness transformation at the end of this was slightly longer than it was in the other clips. She chews the gum for the last few minutes of the clip, and the transition to blue lasts the better part of a minute.
Things I liked about this clip:
- Once she eats the gum, she talks about being able to feel the juice building up inside her. That was hot. I also liked how she got all panicky.
- That she blows some bubbles.
- How she played with the gum in her mouth.
- Mika is a really cute model, and a good talker.
- How she puffed out her cheeks at the end, as if they filling up with juice—I love that.
- Lots of other details.
What could have been improved:
- She spent most of the time talking about what her state would be like once she expanded, not as much about the process of blowing up. I like hearing more about the process of inflating. I'd say 75% the process of blowing up and 25% her final inflated state would be a good ratio for time spent talking.
But overall, a really excellent clip.
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