Maxgrowth: Kiki`s whiskey and whip cream adventure
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Hiya maxgrowth! I'm not sure if you wanted any feedback really with this or just in general, but if you don't mind, I'd like to throw some things out there for you. Some nitpickery is coming, just be prepared! ^_^
I bought this one (I think I've bought all your clips actually) and while I think the whole beginning is really well done and I like the girl, the over the top sizes turn me off. I know there's an inflation market out there that really love this stuff but it's just not my thing. It might be simply because going that big takes a lot of the realism away since it becomes much more obvious you're using inflatable props and having to cover the girls up in what is basically a dress made from a bed sheet makes it all seem too much.
One big suggestion that I'd like to give you is to put in some serious cloth ripping. The breasts expanding is great, but if a somewhat flat girl grows breasts 5 times their normal size, she's not going to remain clothed for long. A lot of recent breast expansion clips I've seen around here and elsewhere really don't focus much on the aspects surrounded the breast expansion, but instead focus entirely on JUST the expansion of the breasts. Part of the appeal, at least for me, is seeing the buttons popping off, the fabric tearing at the seams, the fabric pulling tight, the sounds, the effect of the body pushing the clothing far past it's limits.
Also on more of personal joy is when these things happen somewhat with the actress unaware that it's happening, such as while she's sleeping or in a daze or perhaps under the effects of some curse or something of that nature. If you're open to suggestions at all, or scripts, I could write some up for you the way I have with TMC to give you some ideas and directions on a few clips. Let me know if you'd like me to do so and tell me where to send the ideas.
Overall I can't knock your clips in any bad way at all, they're well done and do what they need to do. I hope my words haven't discouraged you in any way. Thanks for reading, take care!
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thanx!
I appreciate the honest and sincere input, and thanx for your patronage! We do tend to go big, but we try and give the intermediate sizes too and in some of our un-released clips we've tried to perfect the "realistically large/weighted" breasts. We should try and do more button popping and fabric tearing (but honestly we haven't really perfected those techniques yet) which is also in some of the un-released clips...we'll work on putting that in more though. Hopefully you'll see more variety in the future.
We steered clear of the sleeping/not realizing growth because at one point it had been done alot, even by us. But it's a premise we could probably try again soon.
I'm open to script ideas/suggestions...you can send me a note on my deviant art page...I can't promise anything, but if there's an easy way to incorporate suggestions into our clips, I will try my best.
thanx again!
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While I haven't seen the clip, I would say that I'm a big fan of the girl not directly realizing what's happening...although I don't like her to be in a daze. I like it when she's just doing something normal, and all the while her breasts are slowly getting bigger...
But anyway, I really like this clip idea (although from the Title I thought she would be getting filled with Whipped cream or something which sounded kinda interesting in itself,) and the girl is amazingly pretty! I can't wait to see it.~Inappropriately commenting on random threads since...whenever I joined the site.
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I just watched this one. I will always be a fan of Maxgrowth! Oh yeah, the vid. I liked it quite a bit. The size of the breasts at the end (really loved that part), the ass inflation, the struggling to get up, the... okay, you get it. It seemed like there was less dialogue, though.(Or maybe it's just me?) The only other downside was that she didn't really show how heavy they were when she was walking (although I did like how much walking around there was! ^_^) and on the phone in the kitchen. Those aren't really downsides, moreso my personal tastes. Thanks for this awesome and PLEASE keep em coming.
Last edited by Bigdaddyjh2002; 04-10-2013, 10:48 AM.
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maxgrowth , I have some stories in the stories section of this forum and submitted nearly a dozen scripts for the scripts to clips contest. Some of the scripts I wrote with some of your models/actresses in mind. Did you get to see scripts from the contest or was it strictly a TMC "Eyes Only" thing?
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I haven't checked out the stories section here too much. I write most of our scripts myself. Not because I don't want to do other scripts, it's just that I don't have the kind of time it would take to fairly assess submitted scripts and/or search for good scripts.
I didn't see any of the "scripts to clips" work. But, I will check out the stories section as soon as I can scrounge up some free time. And, maybe we'll be able to make one of your ideas come to life down the road.
thanx for your enthusiasm and support.
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