INF MAXGROWTH: Ghostly Growth

[BudapestSwope]

MAXGROWTH: Ghostly Growth
Koa buys a house to flip for a quick buck, but the domineering ghost who lives there has other ideas. Lola tortures Koa with a variety of punishments including expansion. But who`s being punished when all is said and done?

[adrianexpansion]

Yay a Koa video! this looks good but I must admit im not a fan of the ghost and dark room idea but it still looks like a good hourglass video with good old Koa

[mounde12]

The trailer looks amazing. Great work. This is a buyer. Will leave a review after fully taking it in

[maxgrowth]

thanx! adriane. This is one is a little bit different from most of our clips. It has force-feeding, tickling, spanking, etc. As well as the resulting hourglass expansion. I hope you like it, despite the scenario.

[maxgrowth]

The trailer looks amazing. Great work. This is a buyer. Will leave a review after fully taking it in

I'm eager to hear what you think about it

[Forewarned76]

This would have been better if Koa couldn't have seen her, a little Dusk Maiden of Amnesia action going on

[maxgrowth]

This would have been better if Koa couldn't have seen her, a little Dusk Maiden of Amnesia action going on

Not sure what Dusk Maiden is, but I think I get what you're saying

[Forewarned76]

Not sure what Dusk Maiden is, but I think I get what you're saying

This is why I have a subscription to Crunchyroll

[sleeper248]

Ghostly Growth Review

Well done MaxGrowth. I love Koa's acting. The concept was great. The Foley effects were fantastic and really helped to sell the scenes. The scenes with the cups on the mantle are reminiscent of how I pictured the urn in my story "Do Not Open."

You did such a good job that my critique consists mostly of technical issues that will hopefully be taken as points you can try to improve upon rather than negative criticism.

SPOILER ALERT! My critique may contain spoilers so I’ve blacked it out. To see the entire post please highlight it.

I loved Koa being like she couldn’t see Lola until Lola wanted it. While I liked Lola’s altered voice, I’m glad you didn’t use it for the entire clip.

Audio: Question, Are you using a boom mic or an on camera mic? In a number of Koa’s clips, she mumbles or talks too softly when talking to herself. She needs a shotgun microphone aimed straight at her mouth, a wireless mic, or have her speak louder while acting like she is talking softly. You could also consider ADR.

4th Wall: There were a few points where each character broke the 4th wall with glances towards the camera.

Continuity1: Eye lines. The POV shot showing Lola from Koa’s point-of-view was too high. The viewer is looking slightly down onto Lola but in the next scene we can clearly see Koa is sitting lower than and looking up towards Lola.

Continuity 2: The final punishment is the same as the punishment that made Koa’s breasts grow in the first place. Yet there was no indication of growth the second time.

I’d like to imagine an extension of the clip would have Koa enjoying the final “punishment” so much that she doesn’t notice the danger she is in until she is too large to escape. Lola inflates Koa’s breasts until they explode, thus eliminating Koa’s threat to release the Diary. Next scene, Lola stands triumphant holding the neck colar chain of a ghostly defeated Koa kneeling beside her. Koa's head is down with her hair nearly covering her face.

Storyline: Koa lights a single candle on the mantle and has enough light to read the diary while sitting on the couch with the pages turned away from it. She couldn’t have used her phone as a light source?


Thank you for taking the time to read this and keep up the good work.

[maxgrowth]

Thanx, Sleeper248! Sight line, and 4th wall usually happen because we have very little time to re-shoot non-Process scenes. We have limited time with the models and these things happen. Our one struggle with Koa is getting her to not swallow her lines when she talks to herself. She does have a tendency to get "breathy" when she talks. She knows it, we know it...she's working on it
Continuity stuff you mention: Wardrobe and time limitations didn't allow us to do that one last expansion you would have liked. Our scripts are always over-ambitious and we often cut process and plot points in the interests of getting a whole clip done.
The candle...LOL...I'm an old fogey. It never occurs to me to use a phone for a light, so I never write things like that in scripts.
thanx for the taking the time to review the clip, I'm sure everybody appreciates it.

[sleeper248]

Pre-Visualization?

How much pre-visualization (storyboarding, animatics, shot list, etc) is typically done before production starts?

[maxgrowth]

How much pre-visualization (storyboarding, animatics, shot list, etc) is typically done before production starts?

I typically come up with a script that has detailed notes on how we want to do process included. We usually have a production meeting to make sure everybody is on the same page. I don't typically have the time to do storyboards or anything too fancy.

[catstone23]

Love seeing Koa in your clips! Also wanted to say that I like the Oral/tube force-feeding leading to BE part! There's gotta be a better way to say that. It's one of my more specific kinks and rarely see it. I don't enjoy weight gain and that's usually what that leads to. Really enjoyed seeing it here though I would have liked a more direct cause-effect.

Thanks for all the great work you do, Maxgrowth!

[maxgrowth]

Love seeing Koa in your clips! Also wanted to say that I like the Oral/tube force-feeding leading to BE part! There's gotta be a better way to say that. It's one of my more specific kinks and rarely see it. I don't enjoy weight gain and that's usually what that leads to. Really enjoyed seeing it here though I would have liked a more direct cause-effect.

Thanks for all the great work you do, Maxgrowth!

thanx! for the input glad you got to see something you like!