MAXGROWTH: Game of Bones
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Woah multibreast? Awesome!~Inappropriately commenting on random threads since...whenever I joined the site.
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MG,
This is one of those premises that has limitless possibilities and I’m rather sure we’ll see those two wizards again. It would be nice if they sounded a bit more competitive though, which would give a slightly darker feel to the story. When they’re “one upping” each other it feels rather safe, whereas in a competitive situation they would come across as more volatile and may create a more “anything can happen” vibe.
Wow, what a great choice for a shirt. The texture and stretch really highlighted the multi-breast effect. The artist behind the web comic “Grrl Power” was going to have a four breasted character but decided against it as more often than not in his sketches she just looked lumpy rather than exotic. However you succeeded and now have more options for future videos.
Also, excellent work on getting that location. It’s nice to see videos shot outside of what looks and feels like someone’s home. Locations like this (office? hotel?) tends to help the story feel like its set in the “real world” and adds a bit of tension for out-of-control inflation/transformation stories like this one as the location is out of the control of the character. Stories set in people’s home, generally speaking, have a feeling of safety as it’s a controlled location regardless of if the character is in control of the changes or not.
Cheers,
WestX
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Originally posted by West_X View PostMG,
This is one of those premises that has limitless possibilities and I’m rather sure we’ll see those two wizards again. It would be nice if they sounded a bit more competitive though, which would give a slightly darker feel to the story. When they’re “one upping” each other it feels rather safe, whereas in a competitive situation they would come across as more volatile and may create a more “anything can happen” vibe.
Wow, what a great choice for a shirt. The texture and stretch really highlighted the multi-breast effect. The artist behind the web comic “Grrl Power” was going to have a four breasted character but decided against it as more often than not in his sketches she just looked lumpy rather than exotic. However you succeeded and now have more options for future videos.
Also, excellent work on getting that location. It’s nice to see videos shot outside of what looks and feels like someone’s home. Locations like this (office? hotel?) tends to help the story feel like its set in the “real world” and adds a bit of tension for out-of-control inflation/transformation stories like this one as the location is out of the control of the character. Stories set in people’s home, generally speaking, have a feeling of safety as it’s a controlled location regardless of if the character is in control of the changes or not.
Cheers,
WestXI was really happy with the end result.
I understand what you mean about the wizards. We had intended for it to be actors that you would have seen, but couldn't get people, so we had to resort to the "magical" place effect. Your thoughts on the dialogue are duly noted and make sense.
We are VERY lucky to occasionally get to use that space. It is awesome to film there. But, often we have to use the home location either out of necessity or budgetary issues. But, I wholeheartedly agree, fresh and well appointed locations make the clips seem more realistic.
thanx for all the kind words and constructive support
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Hm, while I do agree with West X's later points, I disagree on how aggressive the wizards needed to be. With it being wizards (that are strong enough to change the appearance of someone at will), it's already implied that anything can happen. If you go with a more aggressive or darker approach, it's more like they're experimenting on their next victim. If there were all around inflation (i.e. belly, thigh, butt, et cetera), I could see the need for a darker tone but, it simply seemed like the wizards were friends and wanted to have a little fun. Although, I like what you've done with White Boards and wizards in your past clips so, if they do come back, I'd be okay with it.
Anyway, I also really liked the location and choices of clothing throughout the clip. I also liked the different scenes with the mirror and how she'd check herself out, especially with the four breasts (and the FANTASTIC purple hair!) and the mention of the club.
Lastly, the ending was pretty freaking spot on! Of course, that was one that could've gone two ways, with the way you took being the better of the two. Thanks again for a superb eye show.
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Originally posted by Bigdaddyjh2002 View PostHm, while I do agree with West X's later points, I disagree on how aggressive the wizards needed to be. With it being wizards (that are strong enough to change the appearance of someone at will), it's already implied that anything can happen. If you go with a more aggressive or darker approach, it's more like they're experimenting on their next victim. If there were all around inflation (i.e. belly, thigh, butt, et cetera), I could see the need for a darker tone but, it simply seemed like the wizards were friends and wanted to have a little fun. Although, I like what you've done with White Boards and wizards in your past clips so, if they do come back, I'd be okay with it.
Anyway, I also really liked the location and choices of clothing throughout the clip. I also liked the different scenes with the mirror and how she'd check herself out, especially with the four breasts (and the FANTASTIC purple hair!) and the mention of the club.
Lastly, the ending was pretty freaking spot on! Of course, that was one that could've gone two ways, with the way you took being the better of the two. Thanks again for a superb eye show.Glad you liked the purple hair, it was a nod to the wizard from Koa the Thief Prequel. We had wanted to use the same actor and have the same wizard be recurring, but he was no longer available.
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