A Inflating Nightmare Come True
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It's quite a good clip this, certainly from a process point of view. You see at least I would say the majority of the expansion... Her breasts are already quite large at the beginning, so they don't have all that much growing to do, while some of the start of her belly inflation has been cut so it goes straight to a stage where her belly is quite big, but the butt-inflation is good, and all in there. It's just a shame we don't get to see her inflated butt again at the end, but all good overall.
The sounds are excellent, lots of creaks, and her tearing clothes make great little sounds that add a lot to the clip. Also she really does talk about how she is going to explode quite a lot, which I've brought up in previous clips as being too much of a rarity... although I can't remember hearing any words beside 'explode'.
Although she smiles a little I think she mostly hits the right notes for her reaction. I'm more a fan of the 'I'm going to explode' reaction types than the 'what guy will want me now?' vanity type reactions, this has both in any case.
The only thing I would point out is that she doesn't half say 'oh my gosh' a lot... I counted and she says it 60 times in just over 11 minutes. That's once every 11 seconds on average. For the first half of the clip she says little else besides 'oh my gosh' beginning and ending each sentence with the phrase and sometimes saying it twice in a row. Towards the end she manages to fit in a few more phrases. I understand that for budget reasons, TMC doesn't normally work with scripts, just asking actresses to ad-lib using a few phrases, but I think perhaps using moans and groans as 'filler' between the more descriptive phrases would work better than 'oh my gosh'.
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I'm going to echo a lot of what Carnatic says. I enjoyed the clip. I know others have brought up the key phrases of inflation before. Add the panic noises, whimpers, groans, etc and I think you're better off than having the actresses repeat the same things over and over again. Variations on the word explode are good too (pop, burst, bust, etc). I'd also like to hear a few cries for help in inflation videos and a desperation to be deflated (please let the air out!), squeezed, juiced, or have the pressure relieved some how. Anyway, that's my constructive criticism.
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I loved the video I love the way she expandedmy only problem is how she was smiling and laughing while some of this was going on.
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Originally posted by carnatic View PostIt's quite a good clip this, certainly from a process point of view. You see at least I would say the majority of the expansion... Her breasts are already quite large at the beginning, so they don't have all that much growing to do, while some of the start of her belly inflation has been cut so it goes straight to a stage where her belly is quite big, but the butt-inflation is good, and all in there. It's just a shame we don't get to see her inflated butt again at the end, but all good overall.
The sounds are excellent, lots of creaks, and her tearing clothes make great little sounds that add a lot to the clip. Also she really does talk about how she is going to explode quite a lot, which I've brought up in previous clips as being too much of a rarity... although I can't remember hearing any words beside 'explode'.
Although she smiles a little I think she mostly hits the right notes for her reaction. I'm more a fan of the 'I'm going to explode' reaction types than the 'what guy will want me now?' vanity type reactions, this has both in any case.
The only thing I would point out is that she doesn't half say 'oh my gosh' a lot... I counted and she says it 60 times in just over 11 minutes. That's once every 11 seconds on average. For the first half of the clip she says little else besides 'oh my gosh' beginning and ending each sentence with the phrase and sometimes saying it twice in a row. Towards the end she manages to fit in a few more phrases. I understand that for budget reasons, TMC doesn't normally work with scripts, just asking actresses to ad-lib using a few phrases, but I think perhaps using moans and groans as 'filler' between the more descriptive phrases would work better than 'oh my gosh'.
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Originally posted by adrianexpansion View PostI loved the video I love the way she expandedmy only problem is how she was smiling and laughing while some of this was going on.
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Originally posted by Taylor View PostI do use scripts when I have girls that I know can act. Guys complain about the same girls I know can act being used over and over so I try to get all kinds of new girls. Some can act and some can't. This was the first time this girl has ever done anything remotely like this and she was very nervous. Thank god for the editor that chopped a ton of takes out. I will watch for girls saying the same lines over and over but with this girl I got what I can get.
While I've got your attention though, there is one thing I was hoping to bring up. It's good to see more clips ending in popping, there's been quite a few recently. I brought this up a while ago and a got some good responses from other popping fans, but most of us seem to quite like little more detail around the popping. So I was thinking of ways to do this without required expensive special effects. Rather than fading to black with a sound-effect, the camera could perhaps switch to a view of the door to the room, and then on the popping sound effect the door perhaps jumps as though containing a large blast, perhaps with the camera also jumping. If you have the ability to create smoke, either digitally or physically this would work well here, but if not then the camera could just enter the room to find a pair of shoes where the inflatee was and some shreds of fabric. Just a thought, I think it would please quite a lot of people though.
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Originally posted by carnatic View PostI'm sorry if I came across a bit over-critical. I didn't mean to make it sound like I didn't enjoy her performance and I'd be more than happy to buy future clips featuring this actress. I understand that some actresses have more experience than others, can work with scripts better, ad-lib with greater variety and give overall more polished performances, but that isn't necessarily the only factor. They each have their own way of reacting to the scenario and I thought she was pretty good overall. She's not the only actress who has repeated phrases and I just thought it might be an idea to give inexperienced actresses different things they can do such as moaning, or puffing up their cheeks and making muffled sounds, that might be a bit easier for them and also a have a better effect when they're struggling to think of new things to say.
While I've got your attention though, there is one thing I was hoping to bring up. It's good to see more clips ending in popping, there's been quite a few recently. I brought this up a while ago and a got some good responses from other popping fans, but most of us seem to quite like little more detail around the popping. So I was thinking of ways to do this without required expensive special effects. Rather than fading to black with a sound-effect, the camera could perhaps switch to a view of the door to the room, and then on the popping sound effect the door perhaps jumps as though containing a large blast, perhaps with the camera also jumping. If you have the ability to create smoke, either digitally or physically this would work well here, but if not then the camera could just enter the room to find a pair of shoes where the inflatee was and some shreds of fabric. Just a thought, I think it would please quite a lot of people though.
I hate it when I get new girls that do that but it seems like the first shoot it is always so hard to get them to really relax. I can tell them over and over but they seem to want to resort to what they r comfortable with saying. She said she was nervous but loved the shoot and will be back next week for some belly stuff. YOu could not tell in this clip because of the props but this girl is thick with the Perfect natural hourglass huge boobs and huge ass.
I will use fog machine or get some smoke bombs. Thanks for the help with that!!!!!
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Originally posted by Taylor View PostI hate it when I get new girls that do that but it seems like the first shoot it is always so hard to get them to really relax. I can tell them over and over but they seem to want to resort to what they r comfortable with saying. She said she was nervous but loved the shoot and will be back next week for some belly stuff. YOu could not tell in this clip because of the props but this girl is thick with the Perfect natural hourglass huge boobs and huge ass.
I will use fog machine or get some smoke bombs. Thanks for the help with that!!!!!
Wow I left it a long time to respond to this... time flies.Last edited by carnatic; 09-15-2014, 11:26 AM.
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