I Want To Be A PIG
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Well, you know how long I wait on this thing, and I loved it. Here's the review I posted over at The Process forums:
You know I've had that story for years now and never knew who wrote it. I sent Taylor just the pig transformation part of the story to use as a script. They asked me for help with it and I did my best to bring across what I thought was the original feelings coming across in the story.
I got the clip and my two cents? Outstanding! This is obviously Taylor's first jump into transformation and they pulled it off in my opinion just as the story did. There's all new props in this one, and facial and head make-up, and not to mention Holly, who did a really wonderful job with the acting. The build-up to the transformation was very important to me while helping Taylor to bring it into reality, and I think they pretty much nailed it dead on to what the story was conveying emotionally. It's obvious to me that they took extra time doing the effects, editing and make-up for this and it shows. It's a short clip that wastes little time getting into the build-up unlike the story of course which had a lot more back story, but the idea was to make a clip out of just one small part of the written story, so in my eyes, it's perfect!
Overall, first time out with new special effects, new props, new idea and nailed it on the head? I got to give it 5 / 5 stars! If you guys liked the story that Mute (finally know who did it!) wrote, like some transformation, some naked Holly and would like to see more transformations being done by Taylor and crew, I suggest doing what you can to pick this clip up. It's new, unique and I don't see any other fetish sites coming close to this stuff. Now we just need to start on a werewolf clip. . . . >=D Good job!
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Agree with @Rei-Lin...outstanding work! I'd be waiting for this one for a long time...though the actual process is pretty short (about 4 minutes of a 17 minute clip), it obviously takes extra editing and effects and time to do that 4 minutes. Holly's acting is spot-on, and the transformation is everything I was hoping it would be! Overall, I think it's great, and would love to see more like it in the futureLast edited by duckboy43; 07-24-2011, 12:29 PM.
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I'm a huge fan of pig TF and I purchased this clip. It felt like a decent first stab at a TF fetish video by a non-TF fetish fan. I kind of felt it missed the key elements of the TF I would have liked to see. It's encouraging that all the pieces were in place. I think it would have been much better with a few relatively minor adjustments: First the tail was missing! The tail is one of the major turn-on tropes for pig TF fans. The character mentions wanting one in dialog several times. Second the actress' performance was more "total freak-out" than I expected after repeating dialog that she wanted to be a pig so many times. I was expecting more "shocked and surprised". The actual TF scene felt truncated. 7 minutes of the 12 minute clip was a basic lotion-up scene, granted with promising dialog. I would have preferred to see you introduce the first changes (like the nose and tail) much earlier, like during the lotion scenes, and take some time to show and discover (and feel/touch) the new parts. That may have been a prosthetic longevity issue, but it would have been amazing to see her with a tail for the last minute or so of the lotion scenes. It also would have had her a bit piggy before she had to get dressed for the inflation part. Maybe it's just me but getting naked and then getting dressed for the TF part made it feel a bit anti-climactic.
The prosthetics, with the exception of the ears, were pretty decent. I like that you went with the Miss Piggy nose rather than Penelope or a full snout. It was a good first effort and I think that all the basic elements are there, but I'm not sure that this version was worth the $25. It's a promising start, and I look forward to any additional videos.
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I'm glad your comments were much more constructive criticism than the people on The Process, who just bitched about the cost. In a way this is my fault. I used a small piece of a Pig Transformation story, a piece that I loved so much, that I thought it'd make a good clip. The build-up with Holly rubbing the lotion on herself and making her wish to become a pig was more important than the actual transformation itself, especially since the story built it up in the same way. Honestly Taylor went further than I originally wanted them to, as I was trying to save them the time and effort of trying to use Pig props to make a real transformation. I like how it turned out in every way, at least for myself. As time goes on I'm sure more transformation clips will appear and as with all the clips Taylor has been making, they'll just get better and better.
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Originally posted by Drachen View PostFirst the tail was missing! The tail is one of the major turn-on tropes for pig TF fans.
The transformation was 10 minutes longer in the first cut of the clip but that does not mean you'd be happier with it(trust me).
The ears should have been jettisoned on shoot day. That was a mistake.
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Originally posted by BudapestSwope View PostThere was stuff that was tried that just didn't work as we intended and had to be jettisoned either on the day of the shoot or when it got to editing.
The transformation was 10 minutes longer in the first cut of the clip but that does not mean you'd be happier with it(trust me).
The ears should have been jettisoned on shoot day. That was a mistake.
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Originally posted by mspclub2 View Post"It's new, unique and I don't see any other fetish sites coming close to this stuff. Now we just need to start on a werewolf clip. . . ."
I enjoyed it. Pretty good for the first time, but now...onto the werewolf clip.
i have the pieces to do it
we just need to pick an actress that will not kill us with a high rate and do it
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Who do I speak to if I'm unable to download this? I've been trying with Firefox 5, IE9, the latest version of Safari and even WGET and no matter which browser/client I use, it keeps canceling at certain points. Mostly at 21.1MB or 46.6MB but it's gotten further once. I've got a partial download of 220MB but I'd rather have the full clip. Missing the ending really sucks. Let me know if you need my order number or something.
Edit: It seems to have worked on the umpteenth time I tried. I must have cost you about a gigabyte in bandwith in doing so, but it's done.
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Forgive me if I post improperly. I'm actually new to forums.
I'm thrilled that y'all are venturing into animal transformation, and I'm blown away that you started with my personal favorite: a pig tf.
I agree with Drachen, the curly tail is crucial. I'd rather have seen her tail than even her inflation, which I felt, wasn't ultimately necessary. I hope you can get that to work someday.
Her ears, I felt, should have been larger, and stuck out from either side of her head more. Perhaps you could come up with something that covers her regular ears completely, instead of perches on top of them.
The nose was great!
I'd have preferred a little more extended, uncontrollable oinking, though Holly was brilliant with what she did offer there.
As for the hair loss, I'd say that doesn't need to happen. I know the film "Willow" is a huge influence for a lot of people with this interest, but I don't think it needs to be copied that much. I'm not much for tfs that actually go all the way; though, now that I think about it: if you could get a hold of an actual pig for your shoot... Hehe...
Very satisfying, never-the-less. It's a brilliant, and frankly, brave first step in this direction. I really hope it pays off for you.
What I wondered is, has anyone suggested a donkey tf?
You could set it on Pleasure Island; two girls goofing off, shooting pool, perhaps smoking some weed, and then getting their just desserts. Just so long as you can get the ears and tails to work, the material practically writes itself! Maybe some hooves too. You don't really need to go more complicated than that; just show the girls braying on all fours to finish with. I mean, even Disney finished Lampwick off through sillouette.
I feel that, you could show one girl from the front, play a ripping sound; she gets a look of suprise on her face, then cut to a new angle, revealing her, looking back at her newly grown tail. The ears could be revealed similarly: have them grow in off camera, but show the other girl's expression as she sees it happen.
I certainly don't expect Oscar worthy special effects (not that you aren't capable), and please forgive me if I'm being too forward. But there's a huge base for this type of tf out there. Just check DeviantArt.
Thanks again for your acknowledgement of this community, and please, keep it up! You're doing great!
And kudos to your models! They put up with a lot, and we appreciate it!
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Originally posted by grimmgears View PostWhat I wondered is, has anyone suggested a donkey tf?
You could set it on Pleasure Island; two girls goofing off, shooting pool, perhaps smoking some weed, and then getting their just desserts. Just so long as you can get the ears and tails to work, the material practically writes itself! Maybe some hooves too. You don't really need to go more complicated than that; just show the girls braying on all fours to finish with. I mean, even Disney finished Lampwick off through sillouette.
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