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Seven Minutes In Heaven-Epic Fail *Based On An Entry for TMC Scripts to Clips Contest
"Seven Minutes In Heaven - Epic Fail"
**Please note there are three possible endings to this story labeled options A, B, and C.
OPTION A - Smokey Grows and Pops.
OPTION B - Smokey Grows - Holly saves her from popping.
OPTION C - Holly Grows to Smokey's demise**
PLEASE leave a comment, especially if you would buy this as a clip and include which ending you like best.
TITLE: "Seven Minutes In Heaven - Epic Fail" - I would be happy to entertain ideas for an alternate title.
RUNNING TIME: 7 to 9 Minutes
ACTRESSES: TMC's Holly and Smokey
DESCRIPTION: Things don't go as expected when Holly and Smokey are locked together in a closet during a party game of Seven Minutes In Heaven.
SCRIPT BASIC IDEA: {NOTE: OPTION B IS MY PERSONAL FAVORITE}
THE CLOSET: A small walk-in closet with some clothes hanging on either side and some stacked boxes on the floor. Some more boxes line the upper shelves. A single small pair of pants hangs on each side of the closet between the camera and the girls so as to only slightly obscure part of the wall behind the girls. A single light bulb hangs just over the two girls heads. The two girls are facing each other. The camera sees them in profile with the closet door in view, opposite the camera position on the other side of the girls. A bright light shines from outside the slightly open door, washing out all detail beyond the door.
HOLLY: Raven black, long, straight, flat hair, parted down the middle. Black jeans and sneakers.
SMOKEY: Red hair, parted down the middle and ending in dual braids or pigtails tied just behind and below the ears. Blue jeans and sneakers.
*******Both girls are dressed in oversized white t-shirts with different colored permanent marker scribbles all over them. Names and phone numbers, Call me, little pictures and scribbles, like they were attending a graffiti party.
STORY STARTS HERE:
The clip fades in showing Holly and Smokey standing face to face. The closet door behind them is closing(already closed enough that we can't see anything beyond the doorway).
Holly had a nervous look on her face as she asked, "So why do they call this game seven minutes in heaven?"
Smokey responded with a sly smirk on her face, "From the time they close the door, we have seven minutes to do whatever we want in here away from the prying eyes of the world."
"Like what?"
"Like this..."
Smokey kissed Holly. Holly's eyes went wide with fear as she drew back and pushed Smokey away.
"You shouldn't have done that." said a worried Holly.
"Why? What's wrong?", replied Smokey, "Don't you like me?"
"I do like you. That is the problem."
"How is that a problem?"
"My mother's side of the family are casters.
People well versed in magic.
When my 136 year old great great great grandmother learned I was going to an all-girls school, she cursed me." Said Holly.
"How?"
"I call it a curse, she called it protection from the evils of the world."
"What does that mean?"
"She is set in her ways and doesn't approve of same-gender relationships. So if I ever act on those kinds of feelings, like kissing another girl that I fancy, something will happen to lead me back on what she calls the right path."
NOTE: If you chose OPTIONS A or B, continue reading. If you chose OPTION C, Scroll down and start reading from there now.
Smokey's breasts began growing, quickly taking up the limited space between her and Holly.
"What the hell?", cried Smokey.
Holly was pushed back against the boxes and hanging clothes behind her.
"Ah, is this part of the curse? How big am I going to get?"
"I don't know. This is the first time I've ever kissed a girl I fancy. I'm not sure what is going to happen."
Smokey's breasts kept growing.
Holly pressed her hands against Smokey's nipples trying to get more space between them and her in the crowded closet.
Smokey let out an orgasmic sigh. "Ooh, that feels so good. . Can you just rub your hands right there a bit more?"
"Like this?"
Upon rubbing Smokey's nipples again, Holly too felt really good and they both had a quiver in their breathing.
"Yeah, just like that. Keep going. Don't stop."
Holly rubbed her hands a little more vigorously,
getting lost in the euphoric sensations coursing through her body.
Smokey's breasts grew faster as Holly rubbed.
"Ouch!", exclaimed Smokey, her face turning to concern as she looked at her still growing breasts, "Something doesn't feel right here."
"My tits feel like they're getting tight. Holly?", Smokey tried to get Holly's attention, "Holly!"
Still lost in her euphoric state, Holly continued to rub Smokey's nipples which continued to expand.
"H O L L Y!", Shouted Smokey, "Stop!
It feels like they're going to pop!"
Holly snapped out of her state and stopped rubbing.
"Ah, you're huge."
*NOTE: If you chose OPTION A, Continue reading. If you chose OPTION B, Scroll down and go there now.
OPTION A - Smokey Grows and Pops.
Smokey's breasts continued to grow.
"I know! They feel like they're getting full." Said Smokey.
"Oh no! I stopped rubbing but they're still getting bigger." Said Holly.
"I can feel them getting tighter. If they don't stop soon, I'm gonna pop for sure!" Said Smokey.
"I'm sorry Smokey, I don't know what else to do. Take my hands. Whatever happens, I'm right here with you." Said Holly.
Holly and Smokey reached over Smokey's enormous boobs and held hands.
Holly and Smokey stared at each other for a moment.
Holly with sorrow in her eyes and Kimberly with fear and dread in hers.
Smokey shut her eyes tight, turned her head, and screamed as she felt her breasts reaching their maximum limits with no signs of stopping.
The room rumbled like a small earthquake and the overhead light bulb flashed out, plunging the scene into darkness just before the explosion.
The rumble and screaming stopped suddenly as two popping sounds were heard in the darkness.
The closet door opened, blinding the view in bright white light.
The distant screams of other girls could be heard coming from beyond the closet as the sounds and scene fade to black.
Once silent, the last thing heard is Holly's whisper, "I'm sorry Smokey"
Fade in the TMC End screen.
THE END.
OPTION B - Smokey Grows - Holly saves her from popping.
Smokey's breasts continued to grow.
"I know! They feel like they're getting full." Said Smokey.
"Oh no! I stopped rubbing but they're not stopping getting bigger." Said Holly.
"I can feel them getting tighter. If they don't stop soon, I'm gonna pop for sure!" Said Smokey
"Don't worry Smokey, I have an idea. Take my hands.
Whatever happens, I'm right here with you." Said Holly.
Holly and Smokey reached over Smokey's boobs and held hands.
"The curse is tied to my feelings.” Said Holly, “This wouldn't have happened when you kissed me if I didn't have feelings for you."
"What are you saying?" Asked Smokey.
"I have to turn my feelings against you.” Responded Holly, “In order to save you..., I have to hate you. Quick, tell me something that you know I won't like."
"Like what?” Asked Smokey.
"I don't know, anything you think might turn me against you. You need to make me believe it." Said Holly.
"You know that hundred dollars you lost last month?" Said Smokey.
"Yeah?" Asked Holly.
"I stole it and used it on concert tickets." Said Smokey.
"That's the best you can come up with?" Retorted Holly.
Creaking sounds began coming from Smokey's growing breasts.
"No.” shouted Smokey, “When you were visiting your parents back home, I took Dan, that guy you like who works at the Promenade, to the concert. When we got home, we took your last two beers in the fridge and downed your vintage bottle."
"That bottle was over two hundred years old!", scowled Holly.
Smokey winced at the pressure in her tits as Holly smacked them once for the wine.
"That's not all.” Squealed Smokey, “We humped like rabbits all night long on your bed, ruined your sheets, and I let you believe I was just being nice buying new sheets for you."
Holly's face was now red with anger.
"Is that all true?", asked Holly through gritted teeth.
Smokey felt her breasts stop swelling.
"Yes, it's all true.", Smokey teased in a sultry tone, "We even read your secret book and I showed him the pages you wrote about him."
Holly screamed and the room rumbled like a small earthquake. The overhead light bulb flashed out, plunging the scene into darkness. All went silent.
Fade in on Holly in different clothes and hair style, sitting under a tree. A caption on the bottom of the screen briefly shows, "Two Days Later".
Smokey, also in different clothes and hair style, walked into the scene and sat, leaning on the opposite side of the tree. Smokey's breasts were noticeably larger having not entirely returned to normal.
"I miss you." Said Smokey, "Can you ever forgive me?"
"Pray that I don't." sneered Holly, "It's strange. I hate and want to destroy you. But I know all I have to do to destroy you, is love you."
Fade in the TMC End screen.
THE END.
OPTION C - Holly Grows to Smokey's demise
Holly's breasts began growing, quickly taking up the limited space between her and Smokey.
Smokey was pushed back against the boxes and hanging clothes behind her.
"Ah, is this part of the curse? How big are you going to get?"
"I don't know. This is the first time I've ever kissed a girl I fancy. I'm not sure what is going to happen."
Holly's breasts kept growing.
Smokey pressed her hands against Holly's nipples trying to get more space between them and her in the crowded closet.
Holly let out an orgasmic sigh. "Ooh, that feels so good. Can you just rub your hands right there a bit more?"
"Like this?"
Upon rubbing Holly's nipples again, Smokey too felt really good and they both had a quiver in their breathing.
"Yeah, just like that. Keep going. Don't stop."
Smokey rubbed her hands a little more vigorously.
Holly's breasts grew faster as Smokey rubbed.
Holly breathed quickly and deeply as she entered a euphoric state.
Holly's breasts pinned Smokey against the closet wall.
Smokey suddenly realized how little room there was left for Holly's breasts to grow and stopped rubbing Holly's nipples.
Holly's breasts continued to grow.
"Holly?", Smokey tried to get Holly's attention, "Holly!"
"Ouch!", exclaimed Smokey as she reached back and pulled a small metal box from behind her, tossing it to the side.
Smokey's face turned to concern as she looked at Holly's still growing breasts closing in on her, "Something doesn't feel right here."
"H O L L Y!", Shouted Smokey, "Stop! It feels like they're going to smother me!"
Holly snapped out of her state and stared at her giant breasts. "Ah, I'm huge."
Holly felt the closet wall against her back. Over her still growing breasts, Holly could only see the top of Smokey's head.
"Smokey! Are you alright?" she asked.
"I'm pinned against the wall. You've got to stop grow...mmmffff" came the response.
Holly felt the pressure on her back against the wall increase as her breasts continued their expansion.
Holly heard Smokey's muffled screams soften and then go silent.
She shuddered as she felt and heard the snapping and cracking of Smokey’s bones being crushed behind her huge breasts.
The room began to shake like a small earthquake and the light bulb flashed out, plunging the scene to darkness, and then silence.
The closet door opened, blinding the view in bright white light.
The distant echoing sounds of screaming girls came from beyond the closet as the sounds and scene faded to black.
Once silent, the last thing we heard is Holly's whisper, "I'm sorry Smokey"
Fade in the TMC End screen.
THE END.
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