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Bubblegum Vengeance
"Bubblegum Vengeance"
This is my favorite of the stories I've submitted. I have included the script for it after the story.
YOUR EMAIL: Sleepwalker248248@yahoo.com
TITLE: "Bubblegum Vengeance"
RUNNING TIME: 15 - 20 Minutes
ACTRESSES: MAXGROWTH's Kiki or Ella, X-SPANDER’s Sandy, or TMC’s Holly, Smokey, Emily Austin, Deauxma, or try to find similar looking models who best fit the character descriptions.
DESCRIPTION: Sarah seeks revenge on her enemies, particularly on the lead cheerleader, who got her kicked out of school.
THE BEDROOM: A college dorm kind of room with a bed in one corner and a desk with a chair in the other corner.
The bed is near enough to the desk that the edge of it can be used as a night stand. There is a waste basket/trash can on the floor between the bed and the desk. There is a black book on the corner of the desk.
The rest of the room has average décor such as a desk lamp, geeky science fiction and band posters on the walls, etc.
SARAH PRE-MONTAGE: (Requires the model be able to blow bubbles with bubble gum such as dubble bubble, bubblicious, bubble yum, etc.)
At the begining of the script, Sarah is wearing her long, straight, flat, red hair coming down on either side of her face. Big thick rimmed glasses cover her eyes. She is wearing a loose fitting light green high crew neck t-shirt with the words "I'm Science And I Know It!" beneath her blue jean overalls. Brightly colored matching green socks finish the ensemble. Sarah's shoes are on the floor next to the bed.
As part of the montage, Sarah changes her appearance.
SARAH POST-MONTAGE: By the end of the montage, she wears her hair parted down the middle, braided into two braids coming down just behind, nearly wrapping around the back of her ears.
The braids end in about two inch long loose puffs beneath the blue hair ties. Sarah had removed her glasses during the montage and we saw her acting like she was putting in contacts. She is now ever so lightly wearing make-up and eye shadow. She is wearing a light or pastel blue, form hugging, baby doll t-shirt.
She is clearly a C or D cup and not wearing a bra (or it looks like the room might be a bit chilly).
Skinny jeans or Jean shorts adorn her legs. The socks match the shirt.
JESSICA: Long blond straight/wavy hair with some body to it. She has a couple of spirit ribbons woven into her hair. Jessica is taller than Sarah. Jessica is wearing a pastel pink long sleeve shirt with the word "CHEER" across her C cup chest. Pink Daisy Duke jean shorts and a pair of 1/2 inch flat heeled sandals complete the look.
PROPS NEEDED:
- Five square pieces of bubble gum
- At least two packs of bubble gum with five pieces in each pack
- Six 36" maximum diameter bubble gum pink balloons (as close as you can get to the color of the gum)
- Sharp knife looking letter opener
- Red Sharpie marker with large chisel or wide tip
- Black Sharpie marker with large chisel or wide tip
- 11x17 white paper
- Clamshell design cell phone
- Old looking book with black cover.
- Official looking letter with the word "EXPELLED" stamped in large red letters across the top
- Bright pink silk-like ribbons for Jessica's hair.
SCRIPT BASIC IDEA:
BACKSTORY:
Sarah was a science geek with a quiet subdued beauty about her (think Willow from Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Laney from She's All That) that most guys paid little attention to.
Sarah was the newest member of the best sorority on campus.
The sorority only wanted her membership to bring up the collective house GPA.
Jessica, the head cheerleader, was the only dissenting voice in the vote to accept Sarah into the sorority.
Sarah was tormented daily by Jessica and her gang of four loyal cheer squad subordinates.
START SCENE:
Sarah sat on her bed, staring at her computer screen on her lap. She blew a gum bubble and sucked it back in.
Next to Sarah on the bed lay open an official looking letter with the big word "EXPELLED" stamped in red across the top.
Sarah's phone rang. She picked it up and looked at the screen. With a grimace, she answered, "What do YOU want?"
After a moment listening to the caller, Sarah exclaimed angrily, "What? How did you know I got expelled?
After listing to the caller some more, Sarah put her laptop from her legs onto the bed, stood up from the bed and angrily said, "You did this!"
The caller said one last thing before Sarah closed the phone and placed the phone on top of a black book on the table next to her bed.
Sarah began to pace back and forth.
"It's all her fault!" Sarah spoke to herself before walking to the other end of the room and turning around.
"Six years of school. Gone.", Sarah shouted before walking to the other end of the room and turning around.
"She needs to pay", said Sarah with an eerie echo quietly in her voice.
Sarah in her post montage costume looked toward the bed saying, "They all have to pay."
Sarah in her original costume standing next to the bed looking towards the room nodded in agreement as she said yes.
Sarah went to pick up her phone. She stopped with her hand on the phone when she noticed the black book beneath.
Sarah started reading the black book.
{enter montage of Sarah studying the book, changing her appearance, typing on her computer, and working in the kitchen}
Sarah sat on her bed with an evil grin. Before her on the bed sat a white paper with five pieces of unwrapped pink bubble gum on it.
There were five names written on the paper. The names of Jessica's loyal subordinate squad mates who tormented Sarah at their master's request.
One name beneath each piece of gum. Jessica's name was under the center piece of gum.
Sarah opened the book, picked up a piece of gum, and read from the book, "In Fa La Tee Max Eee Mus".
She then read the name on the paper with no gum next to it, "Shayla".
Sarah chewed the gum until it was right for blowing bubbles. Sarah blew a pink bubble with the gum.
The bubble reached the size of a basketball before bursting and covering Sarah's nose.
"Wow! It feels like it worked!" Shrieked Sarah
After returning the popped gum to her mouth, Sarah took a red Sharpie and crossed off Shayla's name.
Sarah picked up the second piece of gum, uttered the same words from the book, and said the next name, "Kaylee".
Sarah added the second piece to her mouth and continued to chew. Sarah blew a small softball sized bubble that popped quickly.
"Awww", whined Sarah, "She must have been in a confined space." as she crossed off Kaylee's name on the paper.
Sarah picked up the third and fourth pieces of gum, said the words from the book, and spoke two names, "Regan" and "Megan" before popping the gum in her mouth.
After chewing a while longer, Sarah blew a bubble and then blew another bubble within the first one, a "double bubble".
The bubbles burst and Sarah crossed the two names off the paper after getting the popped gum back in her mouth.
Sarah picked up the final piece of gum from the paper. Gleefully, she repeated the ritual and said the final name, "Jessica".
Just after popping the gum in her mouth, Sarah heard a knocking at her bedroom door. The knocking continued at the same tempo until Sarah opened the door.
Sarah opened the door and saw a wide eyed Jessica standing there still making the knocking motion.
"What is it Jessica?", said Sarah with feign concern as she guided Jessica into the room, closing the door behind them.
Sarah led Jessica to the bed and sat her down on top of the paper.
Jessica continued to stare forward, stuttering and muttering a few words, "Ray, Regan", "Ka, Kay, Kaylee", "Meh, Megan",
Sarah asked, "What happened?"
Jessica responded, "Big Boobs", "Ka-boom", "all-gone"
Sarah sat in a chair on the other side of the room. "Shayla's gone too", Said Sarah.
"Shayla?", muttered Jessica, her head tilted and brow lowered. Her hand lowered to the bed, feeling the paper.
Jessica looked down as she pulled the paper from beneath her butt. Jessica studied the document and her eyes went wide as she realized the truth.
Lowering the paper and letting it slip from her fingers, she saw Sarah beginning to blow a bubble.
Jessica jumped to her feet and pointed her finger at Sarah. "You killed my fri-!", shouted Jessica.
Jessica stopped mid-sentence as she grabbed her chest in pain. She fell back onto the bed.
Jessica's breasts grew as Sarah's bubble got bigger.
Jessica did her best to lean up against the headboard. She saw Sarah's bubble growing larger than her head. Tearing could be heard from Jessica's shirt starting to give way.
Jessica's breasts continued to grow despite her protest and cries for help. Her shirt ripped open.
Sarah's bubble was now nearly three feet in diameter. Jessica begged Sarah to release her.
Sarah removed the bubble from her mouth. Holding it by the wad in one hand, "Release you?", she said with an evil grin, "As you wish."
Sarah picked up a straight letter opener from the desk next to the chair, waving it so Jessica could see, "You are hereby released."
"Nooooo-" Cried Jessica, her scream cut off mid-sentence. The gust from the explosion knocked Sarah back.
When she came to, Sarah was partially covered in gum and there was no trace of Jessica save for one of her hair ribbons that had landed on the paper.
The ribbon's tail covered part of Jessica's name, looking like it was crossing her out.
FADE OUT
THE END
SCRIPT SCENE BREAKDOWN:
[FADE IN] - TMC INTRO
I. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT
[CROSS FADE TO] - Sarah sitting cross-legged on her bed, leaning against pillows between her and the headboard. There is a laptop computer on her lap.
Next to Sarah on the bed, lay open an official looking letter with the big word "EXPELLED" stamped in read across the top.
[SLOWLY ZOOM IN] - FOCUSING ON LETTER.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in profile from head to top of bed.
Sarah blows a bubble gum bubble while staring at the computer screen.
Sarah's phone rings. She sucks in the bubble.
Sarah picks up her phone, looks at the screen, and grimaces.
Sarah answers the phone
PRODUCTION NOTES: I have included Jessica's dialog for the actress playing Sarah to react to.
You can include it if you want but my idea is to have muffled vocal sounds from the phone.
Sarah moves her laptop from her legs to the bed.
[CUT TO] - Wider shot to show Sarah getting up next to the desk.
Sarah stands up off the bed.
Sarah hears a click as Jessica hangs up on her.
Sarah closes the phone and sets it on top of a black book that is sitting on the corner of the desk.
II. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing Sarah walking across the room.
Sarah paces to the other end of the room away from the bed.
She turns facing the bed.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest.
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing Sarah walking across the room.
Sarah paces to the other end of the room towards the bed.
She turns facing the room.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest.
[CUT TO] - close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest, standing on the other end of the room looking towards the bed.
[CUT TO] - Sarah, standing next to the bed looking towards the far end of the room.
[CUT TO] - Sarah, in post montage costume, standing on the other end of the room looking towards the bed.
[CUT TO] - Sarah, in original costume, standing next to her bed looking towards the far end of the room.
Sarah nods her head in agreement as she says the last line.
Sarah reaches for her phone.
She stops with her hand on the phone as she notices the black book under the phone.
Sarah moves the phone off the book and sets the phone on the desk.
She picks up the book and sits down in her original position, putting the laptop back on her lap.
She starts thumbing through the pages of the book.
III. INT. - BEDROOM/KITCHEN - NIGHT {MONTAGE SCENE}
A montage ensues, showing scenes fading in over each other indicating the passage of time of Sarah doing the following actions.
PRODUCTION NOTE: {These are not in order, please arrange as you see best}.
I would suggest cutting each action into two clips and showing the first halfs and then the second halfs:
- Thumbing through the pages of the book while blowing a gum bubble.
- Typing on the computer with a baseball sized bubble protruding from her mouth.
- Taking the pencil from behind her ear and jotting notes on a note pad.
- In a kitchen, at a stove putting items in a pot on a burner and checking the black book before adding one more item.
- A puff of smoke erupts from the pot after Sarah tosses in the last ingredient.
- Putting drops of liquid into a vial by using a medicine dropper.
- Standing in front of a mirror, taking her glasses off and putting in contacts.
PRODUCTION NOTE: We don't need to see actual contacts being used, just the action of her putting them in.
- Braiding her hair into two pigtail braids (as described in Sarah's Post-Montage character description)
- Beginning to change clothes {however the audience does not see any nudity} with her new clothes visible in the background
PRODUCTION NOTE: The final scene of the montage fades in on a close-up of Sarah in profile from head to chest, in her new outfit sitting on her bed cross-legged.
Sarah has an evil grin on her face as she is looking down on the bed.
IV. INT. - BEDROOM – LATER THAT NIGHT
[CUT TO] - Sarah from over her shoulder looking down onto the bed.
On the bed, in front of Sarah sits a white 11" x 17" piece of paper, in landscape orientation, with five pieces of unwrapped pink bubble gum upon it.
PRODUCTION NOTES:
- The five pieces of gum are arranged in the format of the five dots on standard six-sided dice.
- Red chisel tip or wide tip marker is used for the circles.
- Black chisel tip or wide tip marker is used for the names.
- "Shayla" is written beneath the upper left piece of gum.
- "Kaylee" is written beneath the upper right piece of gum.
- "Regan" is written beneath the lower left piece of gum.
- "Megan" is written beneath the lower right piece of gum.
- "Jessica" is written slightly larger than the other names beneath the center piece of gum.
- Each name and piece of gum is circled with a line connecting the four outer circles to the larger center circle.
[ZOOM IN] - On the paper so we can see the name written under each piece of gum.
The names of Jessica's loyal subordinate squad mates who tormented Sarah at their master's request have been written beneath the four outer pieces.
One name per piece.
Jessica's name was written under the center piece of gum.
V. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wider shot showing Sarah in profile from head to top of bed.
Sarah opens the black book and picks up a piece of gum, with her right index finger and thumb, to her eye level.
Sarah looks at the book and then back at the piece of gum in her hand.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
PRODUCTION NOTE: The following [CUT TO] is for the production's benefit. So you are not waiting on set for each new piece to be chewed, you can get all the actual bubble blowing done with one prepared wad of 3 to 5 pieces.
If the actress can keep the bubble blowing wad separate in her mouth from the new pieces of gum, she can simply remove the new piece from her mouth during the cuts and continue with the ready for bubble blowing wad of gum. This will also save the actress' jaw from having to chew a lot of gum off camera.
CONTINUITY NOTE: The actress has no gum in her mouth when the first piece goes in. For all subsequent scenes where gum is added to her mouth, be sure the actress does already have gum in her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
Sarah blows a pink bubble with the gum.
The bubble reaches the size of a basketball before bursting onto her nose.
Sarah returns the popped gum to her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Close up on the piece of paper.
Sarah picks up a red marker and crosses off Shayla's name with a red X.
Sarah puts down the marker.
Sarah picks up Kaylee's piece of gum as she did with the first piece.
VI. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
PRODUCTION NOTE: This is where you would have the actress remove the new piece of gum from her mouth during the cut and continue with the prepared wad already in her mouth.
Sarah blows a smaller bubble, about the size of a softball, which quickly pops.
Sarah quickly recovers the popped bubble to her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Close up of the paper
Sarah crosses off Kaylee's name on the paper and puts the marker down.
Sarah picks up both Regan's and Megan's pieces of gum.
VII. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
Sarah blows a bubble and then blows another bubble within the first. A double bubble.
Sarah continues to blow until both bubbles have popped.
PRODUCTION NOTE: If the inside bubble pops first and/or is not visible to the audience the editor could insert a popping sound as an auditory clue.
Sarah cleans up the mess and gets the gum back in her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Close up on the paper.
Sarah crosses off the names Regan and Megan before putting the marker down.
Sarah reaches for the last piece of gum on the paper.
Sarah picked up the final piece of gum from the paper.
VIII. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
A loud constant knocking comes from the door.
Sarah looks at the door.
The knocking continues.
Sarah grunts in frustration as she gets up and walks to the door.
IX. INT. – BEDROOM DOOR - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Closed Door, framed from just over Jessica's height to doorknob.
Sarah enters the scene and opens the door...
Jessica is outside the door still making the knocking motion.
Sarah stopped mid-sentence as she saw Jessica standing there wide eyed as if in shock, still making the knocking motion.
Sarah took Jessica by the knocking arm and guided her into the room, closing the door behind them.
X. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wide shot of the bed.
Sarah leads Jessica by the arm she had been knocking with as they enter the scene.
Sarah sat Jessica on the bed, right on top of the paper.
Jessica set her hands on her lap.
Jessica continued to stare forward with her hands on her lap.
Sarah exited the scene in the direction of the chair at the desk. OR if the desk chair is already visible in the scene: Sarah sits in the chair and scoots back away from Jessica.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica from head to lower chest.
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head to waist
Sarah smiles wide but catches herself and returns to a concerned look before Jessica sees.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica
Jessica motions expanding boobs with her arms.
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head chest.
Sarah can't help herself anymore and says the last line with a huge evil grin and nearly a chuckle/snort.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica's head.
Jessica notices Sarah's grin.
Jessica's head tilts and brow lowers indicating confusion as she process Sarah's words.
[CUT TO] - Wider shot of Jessica from head to knees.
Jessica's hand lowers to the bed, feeling the paper.
Jessica pulls the paper from beneath her, holds it in both hands, and studies it.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Jessica's head and top of paper.
Jessica's eyes go wide as she realizes the truth.
[CUT TO] - From over Jessica's shoulder focusing on the paper with Sarah out of focus in the background.
Jessica lowers the paper and lets it slip from her hands.
[FOCUS CHANGE] - With the paper out of the scene, Sarah and the background come into focus.
Jessica sees Sarah beginning to blow a bubble.
XI. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Front view of Jessica sitting on the bed.
Jessica jumps to her feet and points her finger at Sarah.
Jessica stops mid-sentence and grabs her chest in pain.
She falls back onto the bed.
Jessica's breasts begin to grow.
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head to chest.
Sarah's bubble gets bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Have four pink 36" maximum diameter balloons. One inflated to each of the following approximate diameters, 10", 16", 22", and 32".
Rub a thin layer of flour on each balloon with a soft cloth to reduce shine to make them look more like gum bubbles.
If the actress holds the balloon's knot firmly behind her teeth and puts her lips on the balloon like a wide mouthed kiss it should appear like she is blowing a huge bubble.
If the actress can blow a large enough bubble, great. Otherwise you can use the 10" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped as we hear Sarah taking a deep breath from off camera.
Jessica sits up on the bed, leaning against the pillows and headboard.
Her breasts continue to grow. Her shirt begins to rip open in the front.
Jessica protests and cries for help.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair.
Sarah's bubble got bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the 16" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped.
We hear Sarah taking another deep breath inhaling.
Jessica’s breasts continue to grow, ripping her shirt completely open.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair.
Sarah's bubble got bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the 22" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped.
We hear Sarah taking another deep breath inhaling.
Jessica pleads with Sarah.
Jessica's breasts continue to grow.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair. A huge bubble on her lips.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the largest inflated balloon here. Make sure the knot is hidden or not clearly seen in the actress' hand to keep the illusion that it is a bubble.
Sarah removed the bubble from her mouth, holding it by the wad in one hand.
Sarah picked up a straight letter opener from the desk next to the chair, waving it so Jessica could see.
From off camera we hear Jessica.
Sarah pops the giant bubble {balloon}...
Immediately after, we hear two loud pops from off camera.
Sarah falls off the chair and out of the scene as if blown off the chair.
[FADE TO BLACK]
XII. INT. - BEDROOM - MORNING THE NEXT DAY
[CROSS FADE] - To Sarah lying on the floor.
Sarah sits up.
Pink stringy stuff is in her hair and on her clothes.
Sarah looks around the room and sees no trace of Jessica.
Sarah looks at the floor near the bed and smiles.
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing the piece of paper on the floor next to the bed. One of Jessica's hair ribbons is on the paper.
[SLOWLY ZOOM IN] - On the paper.
We see the tail of Jessica's hair ribbon covering part of Jessica's name, looking like it was crossing out her name.
[CROSS FADE TO] - TMC OUTRO
[FADE TO BLACK]
THE END
Sleeper248
This is my favorite of the stories I've submitted. I have included the script for it after the story.
YOUR EMAIL: Sleepwalker248248@yahoo.com
TITLE: "Bubblegum Vengeance"
RUNNING TIME: 15 - 20 Minutes
ACTRESSES: MAXGROWTH's Kiki or Ella, X-SPANDER’s Sandy, or TMC’s Holly, Smokey, Emily Austin, Deauxma, or try to find similar looking models who best fit the character descriptions.
DESCRIPTION: Sarah seeks revenge on her enemies, particularly on the lead cheerleader, who got her kicked out of school.
THE BEDROOM: A college dorm kind of room with a bed in one corner and a desk with a chair in the other corner.
The bed is near enough to the desk that the edge of it can be used as a night stand. There is a waste basket/trash can on the floor between the bed and the desk. There is a black book on the corner of the desk.
The rest of the room has average décor such as a desk lamp, geeky science fiction and band posters on the walls, etc.
SARAH PRE-MONTAGE: (Requires the model be able to blow bubbles with bubble gum such as dubble bubble, bubblicious, bubble yum, etc.)
At the begining of the script, Sarah is wearing her long, straight, flat, red hair coming down on either side of her face. Big thick rimmed glasses cover her eyes. She is wearing a loose fitting light green high crew neck t-shirt with the words "I'm Science And I Know It!" beneath her blue jean overalls. Brightly colored matching green socks finish the ensemble. Sarah's shoes are on the floor next to the bed.
As part of the montage, Sarah changes her appearance.
SARAH POST-MONTAGE: By the end of the montage, she wears her hair parted down the middle, braided into two braids coming down just behind, nearly wrapping around the back of her ears.
The braids end in about two inch long loose puffs beneath the blue hair ties. Sarah had removed her glasses during the montage and we saw her acting like she was putting in contacts. She is now ever so lightly wearing make-up and eye shadow. She is wearing a light or pastel blue, form hugging, baby doll t-shirt.
She is clearly a C or D cup and not wearing a bra (or it looks like the room might be a bit chilly).
Skinny jeans or Jean shorts adorn her legs. The socks match the shirt.
JESSICA: Long blond straight/wavy hair with some body to it. She has a couple of spirit ribbons woven into her hair. Jessica is taller than Sarah. Jessica is wearing a pastel pink long sleeve shirt with the word "CHEER" across her C cup chest. Pink Daisy Duke jean shorts and a pair of 1/2 inch flat heeled sandals complete the look.
PROPS NEEDED:
- Five square pieces of bubble gum
- At least two packs of bubble gum with five pieces in each pack
- Six 36" maximum diameter bubble gum pink balloons (as close as you can get to the color of the gum)
- Sharp knife looking letter opener
- Red Sharpie marker with large chisel or wide tip
- Black Sharpie marker with large chisel or wide tip
- 11x17 white paper
- Clamshell design cell phone
- Old looking book with black cover.
- Official looking letter with the word "EXPELLED" stamped in large red letters across the top
- Bright pink silk-like ribbons for Jessica's hair.
SCRIPT BASIC IDEA:
BACKSTORY:
Sarah was a science geek with a quiet subdued beauty about her (think Willow from Buffy the Vampire Slayer or Laney from She's All That) that most guys paid little attention to.
Sarah was the newest member of the best sorority on campus.
The sorority only wanted her membership to bring up the collective house GPA.
Jessica, the head cheerleader, was the only dissenting voice in the vote to accept Sarah into the sorority.
Sarah was tormented daily by Jessica and her gang of four loyal cheer squad subordinates.
START SCENE:
Sarah sat on her bed, staring at her computer screen on her lap. She blew a gum bubble and sucked it back in.
Next to Sarah on the bed lay open an official looking letter with the big word "EXPELLED" stamped in red across the top.
Sarah's phone rang. She picked it up and looked at the screen. With a grimace, she answered, "What do YOU want?"
After a moment listening to the caller, Sarah exclaimed angrily, "What? How did you know I got expelled?
After listing to the caller some more, Sarah put her laptop from her legs onto the bed, stood up from the bed and angrily said, "You did this!"
The caller said one last thing before Sarah closed the phone and placed the phone on top of a black book on the table next to her bed.
Sarah began to pace back and forth.
"It's all her fault!" Sarah spoke to herself before walking to the other end of the room and turning around.
"Six years of school. Gone.", Sarah shouted before walking to the other end of the room and turning around.
"She needs to pay", said Sarah with an eerie echo quietly in her voice.
Sarah in her post montage costume looked toward the bed saying, "They all have to pay."
Sarah in her original costume standing next to the bed looking towards the room nodded in agreement as she said yes.
Sarah went to pick up her phone. She stopped with her hand on the phone when she noticed the black book beneath.
Sarah started reading the black book.
{enter montage of Sarah studying the book, changing her appearance, typing on her computer, and working in the kitchen}
Sarah sat on her bed with an evil grin. Before her on the bed sat a white paper with five pieces of unwrapped pink bubble gum on it.
There were five names written on the paper. The names of Jessica's loyal subordinate squad mates who tormented Sarah at their master's request.
One name beneath each piece of gum. Jessica's name was under the center piece of gum.
Sarah opened the book, picked up a piece of gum, and read from the book, "In Fa La Tee Max Eee Mus".
She then read the name on the paper with no gum next to it, "Shayla".
Sarah chewed the gum until it was right for blowing bubbles. Sarah blew a pink bubble with the gum.
The bubble reached the size of a basketball before bursting and covering Sarah's nose.
"Wow! It feels like it worked!" Shrieked Sarah
After returning the popped gum to her mouth, Sarah took a red Sharpie and crossed off Shayla's name.
Sarah picked up the second piece of gum, uttered the same words from the book, and said the next name, "Kaylee".
Sarah added the second piece to her mouth and continued to chew. Sarah blew a small softball sized bubble that popped quickly.
"Awww", whined Sarah, "She must have been in a confined space." as she crossed off Kaylee's name on the paper.
Sarah picked up the third and fourth pieces of gum, said the words from the book, and spoke two names, "Regan" and "Megan" before popping the gum in her mouth.
After chewing a while longer, Sarah blew a bubble and then blew another bubble within the first one, a "double bubble".
The bubbles burst and Sarah crossed the two names off the paper after getting the popped gum back in her mouth.
Sarah picked up the final piece of gum from the paper. Gleefully, she repeated the ritual and said the final name, "Jessica".
Just after popping the gum in her mouth, Sarah heard a knocking at her bedroom door. The knocking continued at the same tempo until Sarah opened the door.
Sarah opened the door and saw a wide eyed Jessica standing there still making the knocking motion.
"What is it Jessica?", said Sarah with feign concern as she guided Jessica into the room, closing the door behind them.
Sarah led Jessica to the bed and sat her down on top of the paper.
Jessica continued to stare forward, stuttering and muttering a few words, "Ray, Regan", "Ka, Kay, Kaylee", "Meh, Megan",
Sarah asked, "What happened?"
Jessica responded, "Big Boobs", "Ka-boom", "all-gone"
Sarah sat in a chair on the other side of the room. "Shayla's gone too", Said Sarah.
"Shayla?", muttered Jessica, her head tilted and brow lowered. Her hand lowered to the bed, feeling the paper.
Jessica looked down as she pulled the paper from beneath her butt. Jessica studied the document and her eyes went wide as she realized the truth.
Lowering the paper and letting it slip from her fingers, she saw Sarah beginning to blow a bubble.
Jessica jumped to her feet and pointed her finger at Sarah. "You killed my fri-!", shouted Jessica.
Jessica stopped mid-sentence as she grabbed her chest in pain. She fell back onto the bed.
Jessica's breasts grew as Sarah's bubble got bigger.
Jessica did her best to lean up against the headboard. She saw Sarah's bubble growing larger than her head. Tearing could be heard from Jessica's shirt starting to give way.
Jessica's breasts continued to grow despite her protest and cries for help. Her shirt ripped open.
Sarah's bubble was now nearly three feet in diameter. Jessica begged Sarah to release her.
Sarah removed the bubble from her mouth. Holding it by the wad in one hand, "Release you?", she said with an evil grin, "As you wish."
Sarah picked up a straight letter opener from the desk next to the chair, waving it so Jessica could see, "You are hereby released."
"Nooooo-" Cried Jessica, her scream cut off mid-sentence. The gust from the explosion knocked Sarah back.
When she came to, Sarah was partially covered in gum and there was no trace of Jessica save for one of her hair ribbons that had landed on the paper.
The ribbon's tail covered part of Jessica's name, looking like it was crossing her out.
FADE OUT
THE END
SCRIPT SCENE BREAKDOWN:
[FADE IN] - TMC INTRO
I. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT
[CROSS FADE TO] - Sarah sitting cross-legged on her bed, leaning against pillows between her and the headboard. There is a laptop computer on her lap.
Next to Sarah on the bed, lay open an official looking letter with the big word "EXPELLED" stamped in read across the top.
[SLOWLY ZOOM IN] - FOCUSING ON LETTER.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in profile from head to top of bed.
Sarah blows a bubble gum bubble while staring at the computer screen.
Sarah's phone rings. She sucks in the bubble.
Sarah picks up her phone, looks at the screen, and grimaces.
Sarah answers the phone
SARAH
What do you want?
*said with malice in her voice
PRODUCTION NOTES: I have included Jessica's dialog for the actress playing Sarah to react to.
You can include it if you want but my idea is to have muffled vocal sounds from the phone.
JESSICA
I'm sooo sorry you got expelled.
*said in a condescending teasing way
SARAH
What? How did you know I got expelled?
I just got the letter.
JESSICA
Oops,
I guess I should have waited a little longer to call you.
*Jessica chuckles.
Sarah moves her laptop from her legs to the bed.
[CUT TO] - Wider shot to show Sarah getting up next to the desk.
Sarah stands up off the bed.
SARAH
You did this!
*Angrily
JESSICA
Good luck trying to prove it!
So long bitch!
*said in a confident taunting tone
Sarah hears a click as Jessica hangs up on her.
Sarah closes the phone and sets it on top of a black book that is sitting on the corner of the desk.
II. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing Sarah walking across the room.
Sarah paces to the other end of the room away from the bed.
She turns facing the bed.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest.
SARAH
It's all her fault!
*Angrily
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing Sarah walking across the room.
Sarah paces to the other end of the room towards the bed.
She turns facing the room.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest.
SARAH
Six years of schooling! Gone!
[CUT TO] - close up of Sarah from the front, head to chest, standing on the other end of the room looking towards the bed.
SARAH
She needs to pay!
[CUT TO] - Sarah, standing next to the bed looking towards the far end of the room.
SARAH
We need to make her pay.
*Sarah's voice with lower pitched copy at 25% volume playing at same time.
[CUT TO] - Sarah, in post montage costume, standing on the other end of the room looking towards the bed.
SARAH
They all need to pay!
*Sarah's voice with lower pitched copy of her voice at 50% volume playing at the same time.
[CUT TO] - Sarah, in original costume, standing next to her bed looking towards the far end of the room.
SARAH
Yes.
*Sarah's normal voice
Sarah nods her head in agreement as she says the last line.
Sarah reaches for her phone.
She stops with her hand on the phone as she notices the black book under the phone.
Sarah moves the phone off the book and sets the phone on the desk.
She picks up the book and sits down in her original position, putting the laptop back on her lap.
She starts thumbing through the pages of the book.
III. INT. - BEDROOM/KITCHEN - NIGHT {MONTAGE SCENE}
A montage ensues, showing scenes fading in over each other indicating the passage of time of Sarah doing the following actions.
PRODUCTION NOTE: {These are not in order, please arrange as you see best}.
I would suggest cutting each action into two clips and showing the first halfs and then the second halfs:
- Thumbing through the pages of the book while blowing a gum bubble.
- Typing on the computer with a baseball sized bubble protruding from her mouth.
- Taking the pencil from behind her ear and jotting notes on a note pad.
- In a kitchen, at a stove putting items in a pot on a burner and checking the black book before adding one more item.
- A puff of smoke erupts from the pot after Sarah tosses in the last ingredient.
- Putting drops of liquid into a vial by using a medicine dropper.
- Standing in front of a mirror, taking her glasses off and putting in contacts.
PRODUCTION NOTE: We don't need to see actual contacts being used, just the action of her putting them in.
- Braiding her hair into two pigtail braids (as described in Sarah's Post-Montage character description)
- Beginning to change clothes {however the audience does not see any nudity} with her new clothes visible in the background
PRODUCTION NOTE: The final scene of the montage fades in on a close-up of Sarah in profile from head to chest, in her new outfit sitting on her bed cross-legged.
Sarah has an evil grin on her face as she is looking down on the bed.
IV. INT. - BEDROOM – LATER THAT NIGHT
[CUT TO] - Sarah from over her shoulder looking down onto the bed.
On the bed, in front of Sarah sits a white 11" x 17" piece of paper, in landscape orientation, with five pieces of unwrapped pink bubble gum upon it.
PRODUCTION NOTES:
- The five pieces of gum are arranged in the format of the five dots on standard six-sided dice.
- Red chisel tip or wide tip marker is used for the circles.
- Black chisel tip or wide tip marker is used for the names.
- "Shayla" is written beneath the upper left piece of gum.
- "Kaylee" is written beneath the upper right piece of gum.
- "Regan" is written beneath the lower left piece of gum.
- "Megan" is written beneath the lower right piece of gum.
- "Jessica" is written slightly larger than the other names beneath the center piece of gum.
- Each name and piece of gum is circled with a line connecting the four outer circles to the larger center circle.
[ZOOM IN] - On the paper so we can see the name written under each piece of gum.
The names of Jessica's loyal subordinate squad mates who tormented Sarah at their master's request have been written beneath the four outer pieces.
One name per piece.
Jessica's name was written under the center piece of gum.
V. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wider shot showing Sarah in profile from head to top of bed.
Sarah opens the black book and picks up a piece of gum, with her right index finger and thumb, to her eye level.
Sarah looks at the book and then back at the piece of gum in her hand.
SARAH
In Fa La Tee, Shayla
*Said in a rhythmic cadence.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
PRODUCTION NOTE: The following [CUT TO] is for the production's benefit. So you are not waiting on set for each new piece to be chewed, you can get all the actual bubble blowing done with one prepared wad of 3 to 5 pieces.
If the actress can keep the bubble blowing wad separate in her mouth from the new pieces of gum, she can simply remove the new piece from her mouth during the cuts and continue with the ready for bubble blowing wad of gum. This will also save the actress' jaw from having to chew a lot of gum off camera.
CONTINUITY NOTE: The actress has no gum in her mouth when the first piece goes in. For all subsequent scenes where gum is added to her mouth, be sure the actress does already have gum in her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
Sarah blows a pink bubble with the gum.
The bubble reaches the size of a basketball before bursting onto her nose.
SARAH
It feels like it worked!
*said in a gleeful squeak.
Sarah returns the popped gum to her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Close up on the piece of paper.
Sarah picks up a red marker and crosses off Shayla's name with a red X.
Sarah puts down the marker.
Sarah picks up Kaylee's piece of gum as she did with the first piece.
VI. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
SARAH
In Fa La Tee, Kaylee
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
PRODUCTION NOTE: This is where you would have the actress remove the new piece of gum from her mouth during the cut and continue with the prepared wad already in her mouth.
Sarah blows a smaller bubble, about the size of a softball, which quickly pops.
Sarah quickly recovers the popped bubble to her mouth.
SARAH
Awww...
*Sarah wines
SARAH
She must have been in a confined space.
[CUT TO] - Close up of the paper
Sarah crosses off Kaylee's name on the paper and puts the marker down.
Sarah picks up both Regan's and Megan's pieces of gum.
VII. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
SARAH
In Fa La Tee, Regan.
In Fa La Tee, Megan.
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Front view of Sarah from head to chest.
Sarah blows a bubble and then blows another bubble within the first. A double bubble.
Sarah continues to blow until both bubbles have popped.
PRODUCTION NOTE: If the inside bubble pops first and/or is not visible to the audience the editor could insert a popping sound as an auditory clue.
SARAH
Wow...
I would like to have seen that one.
Sarah cleans up the mess and gets the gum back in her mouth.
[CUT TO] - Close up on the paper.
Sarah crosses off the names Regan and Megan before putting the marker down.
Sarah reaches for the last piece of gum on the paper.
SARAH
Finally!
Sarah picked up the final piece of gum from the paper.
VIII. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Profile view of Sarah from head to bed.
Sarah holds the gum up to eye level.
SARAH
In Fa La Tee, Jessica.
*Said gleefully
Sarah moves her hand to her mouth and puts the gum from her hand into her mouth.
A loud constant knocking comes from the door.
Sarah looks at the door.
SARAH
Go away! I'm busy!
The knocking continues.
Sarah grunts in frustration as she gets up and walks to the door.
IX. INT. – BEDROOM DOOR - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Closed Door, framed from just over Jessica's height to doorknob.
Sarah enters the scene and opens the door...
Jessica is outside the door still making the knocking motion.
SARAH
What!? I said I'm Bus-
Sarah stopped mid-sentence as she saw Jessica standing there wide eyed as if in shock, still making the knocking motion.
SARAH
What is it Jessica?
*Said in a concerned voice
Sarah took Jessica by the knocking arm and guided her into the room, closing the door behind them.
X. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Wide shot of the bed.
Sarah leads Jessica by the arm she had been knocking with as they enter the scene.
Sarah sat Jessica on the bed, right on top of the paper.
Jessica set her hands on her lap.
Jessica continued to stare forward with her hands on her lap.
Sarah exited the scene in the direction of the chair at the desk. OR if the desk chair is already visible in the scene: Sarah sits in the chair and scoots back away from Jessica.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica from head to lower chest.
JESSICA
Ray, Regan, Ka, Kay, Kaylee, Ma, Megan...
*Stuttering and mumbling
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head to waist
SARAH
What happened, Jessica?
Sarah smiles wide but catches herself and returns to a concerned look before Jessica sees.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica
Jessica motions expanding boobs with her arms.
JESSICA
Big,
Boobs,
Ka-boom,
all gone.
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head chest.
SARAH
Shayla's gone too.
Sarah can't help herself anymore and says the last line with a huge evil grin and nearly a chuckle/snort.
[CUT TO] - Close up on Jessica's head.
Jessica notices Sarah's grin.
JESSICA
Shayla?
Jessica's head tilts and brow lowers indicating confusion as she process Sarah's words.
[CUT TO] - Wider shot of Jessica from head to knees.
Jessica's hand lowers to the bed, feeling the paper.
Jessica pulls the paper from beneath her, holds it in both hands, and studies it.
[CUT TO] - Close up of Jessica's head and top of paper.
Jessica's eyes go wide as she realizes the truth.
[CUT TO] - From over Jessica's shoulder focusing on the paper with Sarah out of focus in the background.
Jessica lowers the paper and lets it slip from her hands.
[FOCUS CHANGE] - With the paper out of the scene, Sarah and the background come into focus.
Jessica sees Sarah beginning to blow a bubble.
XI. INT. - BEDROOM - NIGHT - CONTINUOUS
[CUT TO] - Front view of Jessica sitting on the bed.
Jessica jumps to her feet and points her finger at Sarah.
JESSICA
You Killed my fri-
*Shouted
Jessica stops mid-sentence and grabs her chest in pain.
She falls back onto the bed.
Jessica's breasts begin to grow.
[CUT TO] - Sarah sitting in the chair from head to chest.
Sarah's bubble gets bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Have four pink 36" maximum diameter balloons. One inflated to each of the following approximate diameters, 10", 16", 22", and 32".
Rub a thin layer of flour on each balloon with a soft cloth to reduce shine to make them look more like gum bubbles.
If the actress holds the balloon's knot firmly behind her teeth and puts her lips on the balloon like a wide mouthed kiss it should appear like she is blowing a huge bubble.
If the actress can blow a large enough bubble, great. Otherwise you can use the 10" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped as we hear Sarah taking a deep breath from off camera.
Jessica sits up on the bed, leaning against the pillows and headboard.
Her breasts continue to grow. Her shirt begins to rip open in the front.
Jessica protests and cries for help.
JESSICA
Help! Somebody Help!
*Screaming
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair.
Sarah's bubble got bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the 16" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped.
We hear Sarah taking another deep breath inhaling.
JESSICA
You're never going to get away with this!
*Angrily shouting
Jessica’s breasts continue to grow, ripping her shirt completely open.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair.
Sarah's bubble got bigger.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the 22" balloon here.
[CUT TO] - Jessica on the bed. Her breast growth stopped.
We hear Sarah taking another deep breath inhaling.
Jessica pleads with Sarah.
JESSICA
Please Sarah.
Please release me, I beg of you.
Jessica's breasts continue to grow.
JESSICA
I can feel them getting too tight.
Stop before I pop.
[CUT TO] - Sarah in the chair. A huge bubble on her lips.
PRODUCTION NOTE: Use the largest inflated balloon here. Make sure the knot is hidden or not clearly seen in the actress' hand to keep the illusion that it is a bubble.
Sarah removed the bubble from her mouth, holding it by the wad in one hand.
SARAH
Release you?
*said with an evil grin
SARAH
As you wish.
Sarah picked up a straight letter opener from the desk next to the chair, waving it so Jessica could see.
SARAH
You are hereby released.
From off camera we hear Jessica.
JESSICA
Nooooo-
Sarah pops the giant bubble {balloon}...
Immediately after, we hear two loud pops from off camera.
Sarah falls off the chair and out of the scene as if blown off the chair.
[FADE TO BLACK]
XII. INT. - BEDROOM - MORNING THE NEXT DAY
[CROSS FADE] - To Sarah lying on the floor.
Sarah sits up.
Pink stringy stuff is in her hair and on her clothes.
SARAH
Jessica?
Sarah looks around the room and sees no trace of Jessica.
Sarah looks at the floor near the bed and smiles.
[CUT TO] - Wide shot showing the piece of paper on the floor next to the bed. One of Jessica's hair ribbons is on the paper.
[SLOWLY ZOOM IN] - On the paper.
We see the tail of Jessica's hair ribbon covering part of Jessica's name, looking like it was crossing out her name.
[CROSS FADE TO] - TMC OUTRO
[FADE TO BLACK]
THE END
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