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  • MrMopar5
    Preg Belly Lover
    • Sep 2013
    • 167

    #1

    The Statue of Isis

    Title: The Statue of Isis



    Cast: Dr. Sabrina Holloway (Archaeologist)
    Tracy Jennings (Dr. Holloways Assistant)



    Scene 1: Dr. Holloway’s Study

    We find ourselves in Dr. Holloways Study where she just entered the room after returning home via Egypt from her most recent dig. She has all of her luggage and a special old wooden box with hieroglyphs around the bottom of it and it has solid gold lace around the top. She sets her luggage down and pays extra attention to the box and sits down at her old Roll Top Desk, She opens the box to reveal a 8” gold statue of Isis. The statue shows a 9 month belly and huge breasts since she is the Goddess of Fertility. Sabrina is very careful to place the Statue on her desk and takes out her Notebook with her notes on what the symbols on the box mean. She gets out her small tape recorder and proceeds to dictate her findings.

    Dr. Holloway: “ Today I have just returned from Egypt with the greatest discovery of my career! I believe I have found the one and only Isis Statue of Fertility! I also have deciphered the inscriptions on the Statue itself! What I found is an incantation to bring forth Isis herself! I am nervous to read it verbatim, but I must see if I can conjure her up. If I am successful, I think I will have made the biggest discovery of all time!

    Sabrina looks at the Statue and takes off her jacket and prepares herself to read the incantation verbatim. She positions the tape recorder near and proceeds to read the incantation.



    Dr. Holloway: “Here it goes!

    She takes a deep breath and begins to read the incantation.

    Dr. Holloway: “Sands of time, Winds of Change, hear my words, Mothers of all ages, I call upon you Isis, please hear my call, Come to me and show yourself! I need your power! Come now.”

    She listens and hears nothing.

    Dr. Holloway: “I should have known this was too good to be true!

    Then all of a sudden, she hears a wind come out of nowhere and the room gets bright! Her body is engulfed in a blue-white light. The light overtakes her and when the light subsides, we find the Goddess Isis in her place! She uses the Dr.’s body to come into our plain of existence. She is wearing a white toga style short dress with gold headdress and the Egyptian make-up on her eyes and gold bracelets on her arms and laced up sandals on her feet. She also has a 9 month belly with swollen milk filled breasts ready to burst full of the life giving milk.

    Isis: “ I am here my children. I will give children to all women who come to me!” “ I transcend all time and space for all eternity to come to this place. I shall give my brood to all women who cross my path! For I am the Goddess of Fertility and I shall not be denied!”

    Just then the Dr.’s assistant shows up at her door to check up on Sabrina to see how her jet lag was doing and to see if she needed any help.

    Tracy: “Dr. Holloway, It’s me Tracy, I was wondering if I could come in?”
    Isis: “ Come in my Child.”

    The Front Door opens by itself via Isis’s command. Tracy is stunned to see the form of her boss with a 9 month tummy and huge breasts and dressed as if she is ready to go to a costume party!

    Tracy : “ Oh my God, Sabrina! I did not know you are going to a Costume Party!?!?

    Isis: “Come to me my Child, I shall give your womb what it needs.”

    Tracy: “Wow, your really scaring me Sabrina! You can stop playing with me now!”

    Isis: “What is this you speak of my Child? I am not this person you call Sabrina, I AM ISIS!! Goddess of all things fertile and magic!

    Tracy: “Are you drinking again? I can’t believe what I am seeing here!”

    Isis: “You are without child in your womb! I shall bestow my children upon your womb and nourishment for my children!”

    Isis raises her hand and a blue-white light engulfs Tracy and then dead silence.

    Tracy: What did you do to me!?!? I feel funny!


    Within moments her belly begins to grow and her breasts grow filling with milk.

    Isis: “I have given your womb life my child! Embrace it!
    Tracy grabs her belly and unfastens her jeans to allow the growth of her new body! She struggles as her bra is strained to contain her milk filled bosom!

    Tracy: “MY GOD??? I feel kicking in my belly! My breast are sore and swollen as well! What? How? Why Me?"

    Her belly is still growing outward and full of life! Tracy is now in pain as her added weight is straining her jeans fabric as it grows out futther to that of twin filled belly!


    Tracy is having trouble standing with her added weight. She feels pain and is about to give birth in a few hours! She waddels over to the wall and holds out her hand to get her balance.

    Isis: “ You shall be the first of many I shall help to conceive my brood. I am the Goddess of all things fertile and just! Embrace your womb and your womanhood!

    Tracy: “I do not believe this !!”

    Tracy has to unzip her jeans a little more to release the pressure of her expanded belly! She hears the fabric tear on her strained bra as well holding the added girth of the milk filled breasts!

    Isis: " I take my leave my Child, There are many women out there that need my brood to fill thier bellies! Take care of my children my child!"

    Tracy: "Your Children? How many do I have in here?"

    Isis: "You are with 2 of my children! One male one female to grow together and make more of my brood! I have spoken enough!! I must take my leave!"

    Isis in a flash of light Isis disappears and leaves Tracy standing there rubbing her breasts and belly in despair and disbelief. She wonders how she is going to explain this to her husband!


    Fade out…….
    Last edited by MrMopar5; 10-14-2013, 06:06 PM.
  • _R_
    His Reclusiveness
    • Dec 2012
    • 262

    #2
    Wow! This. Is. FANTASTIC! This script is actually something I could really see feasibly being made into a clip; its not too long, nor does it have too many people in it, and nor is it unrealistic in terms of required resources.
    One thing I might tweak is adding more dialogue on Tracy's behalf during her impregnation/expansion process. Perhaps something to the effect of "Oh, my breasts... they feel full... they feel like they're filling up with milk!" in regards to her swelling breasts, and "Oh my god! How many are in there?!" in regards to her pregnant belly. (I just absolutely love it when multiple babies are involved) Little things like those added into the second half of the script just to place more emphasis on the actual impregnation, because the first half is really stellar.
    Other than that, I wouldn't change anything about the writing, storyline, or dialogue; its very impressive! (Iris' character and dialogue is especially fantastic; very well done!) Out of curiosity, who did you envision performing each role?
    I would definitely send this script to Taylor if I were you; I would pay top dollar for this clip! R approves!

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    • MrMopar5
      Preg Belly Lover
      • Sep 2013
      • 167

      #3
      I would Love to see Holly play the role of the Assistant! As far as Isis goes, IDK! I know Eva Notti would be great, she kicked ass in the Month by month Accelerated Preg vid!! It's hard to get the same actresses I'm sure at a certain timeframe to shoot said vids.

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      • _R_
        His Reclusiveness
        • Dec 2012
        • 262

        #4
        Oh yeah, that new edit definitely adds some more (for lack of a better word) "oomph", to the script's second half. The new layers of detail and dialogue (which really is great) helps balance the clip. I've said it once, and I'll say it again: its a shame that there is not a division or branch here dedicated solely to producing your scripts into clips.

        P.s: Strangely enough, I envisioned Holly being Isis, and another model (Eva is great) being the assistant. O_o

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        • MrMopar5
          Preg Belly Lover
          • Sep 2013
          • 167

          #5
          Holly would be great as well for Isis! I hope to GOD they make these into clips soon. M Taylor could get an Isis like costume anywhere. They have great props anyway! Thanks again "R"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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          • _R_
            His Reclusiveness
            • Dec 2012
            • 262

            #6
            Originally posted by MrMopar5 View Post
            Holly would be great as well for Isis! I hope to GOD they make these into clips soon. M Taylor could get an Isis like costume anywhere. They have great props anyway! Thanks again "R"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
            Have you emailed/messaged any of these scripts to Taylor yet? If not, I highly recommend doing so. Perhaps Taylor is one of the exceptions, but not a great deal of people tend to venture to the story section of the forums.

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            • MrMopar5
              Preg Belly Lover
              • Sep 2013
              • 167

              #7
              Yes I have. I have actually bugged her quite a bit in the past month requesting the leotards and whatnot. Could you message her and see if you get a response? Just wondering. I am really looking foward to her response and I hope I did not get her upset! She did promise she would look into the swimsuit and leotard for props but she is waiting for the price to come down since it is the Fall.

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              • NikkTemplar
                I <3 Daenerys Targaryen
                • Aug 2008
                • 677

                #8
                Hold on there, chief.

                We don't need a billion people messaging her about a request.

                If you messaged her about it already, give it some time.

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                • MrMopar5
                  Preg Belly Lover
                  • Sep 2013
                  • 167

                  #9
                  Thanks for the advise! I get restless. Love this site!

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                  • stormr
                    Member
                    • Sep 2008
                    • 91

                    #10
                    nice story, and it would be rather easy for them to do and quickly too. This is the perfect time of year for it actually since you could pick up an egyption costume at any walmart for a couple dollars right now. That and how this story could be one that can always have sequels of isis going elsewere to make other girls have her children. And it can take a little while to get replys back about a script, theyre always pretty busy around here. Patience is the key my friend
                    Member: Knights of the Round Belly
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                    • _R_
                      His Reclusiveness
                      • Dec 2012
                      • 262

                      #11
                      Originally posted by stormr View Post
                      That and how this story could be one that can always have sequels of isis going elsewere to make other girls have her children.
                      Wow, I hadn't thought about that, but Storm is right; you could indeed actually make some pretty interesting sequel scripts with this concept! M, if for whatever reason you ever find yourself in a creative slump and in need of new ideas, a sequel to this would be fantastic! (Btw, "M" is my nickname for now Mopar; its short, rolls off the tongue easier, & sounds cool)

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                      • MrMopar5
                        Preg Belly Lover
                        • Sep 2013
                        • 167

                        #12
                        That is what I had envisioned in the back of my mind but I did not think that TMC would want to use this as a running script. I like the fact you other Belly Lovers noticed this!! Let's see what they do with these scripts. Thanks for all of your support!!!!!

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                        • Lozariah
                          Junior Member
                          • Mar 2014
                          • 6

                          #13
                          This is my favorite script on the story section by far!!! I could totally see Holly as Isis! The only thing I would change is add some more lines for Tracy while she is becoming preggo! This would make a great clip!!!

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                          • MrMopar5
                            Preg Belly Lover
                            • Sep 2013
                            • 167

                            #14
                            This would make a great new clip. Very thought out plot with room for sequels. Anyone else like this story? M

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                            • MrMopar5
                              Preg Belly Lover
                              • Sep 2013
                              • 167

                              #15
                              This could be made very easy. Still revolent.

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