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  • sleeper248
    Senior Member
    • Aug 2008
    • 229

    #1

    MAXGROWTH: Boobs Noir 2: Vengeance

    TITLE: "MAXGROWTH: Boobs Noir 2: Vengeance"

    A sequel to “MAXGROWTH: Boobs Noir”

    DESCRIPTION: Koa takes her revenge on Kirby.

    Characters:
    Kirby is in a long sleeved top with horizontal stripes. She is wearing the same shorts from the first clip. Her hair is in two pigtails tied behind and below her ears.

    Koa is wearing the same green top from the first clip but different bottoms. While not as large as at the end of the first clip, her breasts are still very large. Her hair is parted down the middle front to back and is in two braids coming down behind and below her ears.

    Treatment (Story): Kirby walks down the hallway, her footsteps echoing on the hard floor. She stops in front of a door with a keypad beside it.Kirby enters a code to unlock the door.She opens the door and enters the room.

    The interior of the dimly lit room is vacant save for a big comfy reclining chair and small desk in front of the chair. A screen on the desk shows a person’s shadowy silhouette. “Welcome Kirby.Please have a seat. Do you have the product?” asks the male voice coming from the speakers.“That depends,” says Kirby as she sits in the chair, “Do you have my money?”
    “Check your bank account, the money is already there.”

    Kirby looks at her phone, enters a few keystrokes and beams a big smile. “Logging out” as she puts the phone away, Kirby looks around the room.“Thank you.” She says, “Here is what you’ve been waiting for”, as she pulls a vial from her pocket and places it on the desk before leaning back into the big comfy chair.

    “We require a demonstration to make sure you’ve brought us the genuine article; Just a drop will do.” Says the voice.

    “No way am I trying that stuff. What’s the matter? You don’t trust me?This is the real stuff right here. I’ve already tested it.”

    “I know!” booms the angry voice. Suddenly restraints come out of the chair entrapping Kirby’s wrists and legs. “You may now proceed with the demonstration.”

    The lights come on full to reveal Koa leaning against the wall in one of the previously dark corners. Koa’s breasts are still somewhat inflated from her last encounter with Kirby.

    Koa walks up to the chair, pulls the phone from Kirby’s pocket, pushes some buttons, and stares at the screen for a moment. “41273” comes the voice from the speakers.“Thank you daddy.” quipped Koa as she enters the pin. “Transfer complete. Your money is all mine now.”

    “Daddy? You’re his daughter?” says a shocked Kirby.

    “I obviously couldn’t be seen doing jobs and getting paid off by my own father. We needed a middle man… eh, middle woman, to make the delivery. I thought we were friends but when I told daddy how you double crossed me, he decided it was time to find a new mistress.”

    “Mistress?” Kirby stammers, “You mean Mr. Big is…, but why steal from your own company?”

    “This stuff is worth billions on the black market, but would almost bankrupt the company if we brought it to the market through the proper channels.”
    Koa picks up the vial and forces some of the liquid down Kirby’s throat. “Drink up!”

    Kirby winces as her breasts grow, quickly surpassing the size of Koa’s breasts. “How much did you give me?” shrieks Kirby.

    Koa pulls the lever on the chair making it recline. “Enough”, mocking what Kirby had said in the first clip, “well, much more than enough. Even if you ever learn to walk again, you’ll never fit through the door. That is, if you don’t pop first.” Koa waves the vial and phone in front of Kirby’s face, “So long, witch.” Koa walks towards the door.

    Koa walks out the door saying, “enjoy the show, daddy,” before slamming it shut.

    “We won’t need these anymore.” Says the voice. A buzzing sound signals the release of Kirby’s restraints. Kirby tries to sit up but is now restrained by her enormous chest. Kirby winces as her shirt grows tight.

    “Please, don’t let me pop. I’ll do anything you want; just don’t let me pop.” Kirby pleads. “But, my dear, you’re already doing exactly what we want. No one has ever had a dose this big before. The staff has a betting pool going on how big you’ll get before you pop.” “You Bastard!” shrieks Kirby.

    Squeaking noises start from Kirby’s breasts. “Dear me, I think we’re nearly there.” The voice excitedly exclaims. “Help me! Please, somebody help me!” cries Kirby, “Too tight… too tight… I’m gonna pop, I’m gonna pop.”

    Kirby lets out a final scream.

    Koa is leaning against the door outside of the room, listening gleefully to Kirby’s screams while looking at her phone. Koa blows a bubble with her bubble gum. The bubble pops and Kirby’s scream is cut short by a loud explosion. The force of the explosion jolts Koa a foot from the door. She begins to stumble but catches herself.
    Koa stands up straight with a beaming smile. She looks at Kirby’s phone in one hand, the vial in the other, and let’s out an evil chuckle, “mission accomplished.” Koa walks out of frame as the scene fades to black.
    The End.

    Notes for filming:
    - Key Pad can be as simple as a smart phone attached to the wall via Velcro. Maybe there is a fake “access granted” app out there.
    - Kirby’s shirt can tear off, or not, up to you how big she can get before cutting to Koa.
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    Yes, get on this please.
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    Maybe, I'd need to see a trailer first.
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    Maybe, if it focused on a different inflation.
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  • adrianexpansion
    Senior Member
    • Mar 2011
    • 481

    #2
    Ooooh nice job i'd like this

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    • Bigdaddyjh2002
      Blast Processor
      • Sep 2008
      • 88

      #3
      I'd buy this in a heartbeat.

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      • maxgrowth
        Moderator
        • Dec 2011
        • 324

        #4
        Nice job! I don't know that I can do that story justice, but it sure would be fun to try.

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        • nreed2728
          Member
          • Nov 2014
          • 35

          #5
          What are you talking about Maxgrowth? I think you could this just fine. Location, 2 actresses, a few after market tech props and a trip to the thrift shop for a recliner. Making it look medical would be quite nominal as far as cost.

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          • nreed2728
            Member
            • Nov 2014
            • 35

            #6
            You could do it gonzo style for some of the corridor shots. Any place that looks slightly industrial or medical and just try to do the shots for free.

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            • maxgrowth
              Moderator
              • Dec 2011
              • 324

              #7
              Originally posted by nreed2728 View Post
              What are you talking about Maxgrowth? I think you could this just fine. Location, 2 actresses, a few after market tech props and a trip to the thrift shop for a recliner. Making it look medical would be quite nominal as far as cost.
              I appreciate your confidence, but I'll have to think alot by trying to pulling this one off.

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              • nreed2728
                Member
                • Nov 2014
                • 35

                #8
                Remember, you aren't in this alone. The information and inspiration is at our fingertips now more than ever. Don't let me lull into a false sense of simplicity though as you know even more than I that these kinds of shoots are hard and require prep work and diligence to achieve. What sticks in my head as I continue to go through prop after prop to find a production model (I've been working on this for 2 years) is that do I want it to be easy or do I want it to be great. Uhhhhhh I wish we were independently wealthy. Having such small pools of resources to draw from just slows all of this down. I'm just going under the assumption that a dedicated team works more efficiently than one persons trial and error. Still, keep it up brother.

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                • sleeper248
                  Senior Member
                  • Aug 2008
                  • 229

                  #9
                  Hey MaxGrowth, I have sent the script and story boards to your E-mail. I would love to know what Koa and Kirby think of it.

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