NightMare Painting

[bigsexydylan]

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[bigsexydylan]

I hope you guys enjoy. I was working on this for a while.Let me know what you guys think. If you have any ideas or suggestion for future stories let me know.

[sleeper248]

Cool story. Thinking in terms of production as a clip though, if I may suggest a slight change. "Before Daisy can do anything her body freezes and a paint brush appears and starts painting a fat image of daisy." Instead of the paint brush appearing, maybe something along the lines of "Before Daisy can do anything her body freezes in place. small circles of color appear and swirl around on the previously black canvas, forming the painting of a fat image of daisy."

Nice use of a magical item. Reminds me of my story "DO NOT OPEN". http://taylormadeclips.com/forums/showthread.php?t=830

[bigsexydylan]

Thank you I appreciate it. Thank for your suggestion, I was struggling on that part. I'll make the change, that one sounds alot better.