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  • sleeper248
    Senior Member
    • Aug 2008
    • 229

    #1

    Saw BE Parody

    A BE parody of the "Oxygen Crusher" or the "Breathing Room" trap from Saw 6.
    The scene fades in and comes into focus as Holly and Janie regain consciousness They are both bound with their hands behind their back, tied around the back of their chairs.
    They struggle against their restraints resulting in a retaining pin being pulled from the gears of the machine with two huge tanks of liquid.
    Each girl has a nebulizer mask over her mouth and nose with a connected hose/tube going from the mask, past the neck, and disappearing somewhere behind.
    2 bigger hoses wrap from behind each of them and disappear up the bottom of their shirts.
    The Television screen springs to life with the image of a masked figure (Taylor), speaking in an altered voice. "You have both competed against each other in every aspect of your lives for so long, and at the expense of everyone who cared about you that you have become more plastic than people. So many people have been hurt in your competition to out do each other that you now find yourselves here in one last competition.
    Before you is a lever connected to the tanks of liquid. As you breath, each breath will cause more and more liquid to be pumped into your new implants. As your breasts grow, they will eventually tip the lever one way or the other. The one who's breasts grow the quickest will tip the lever towards their opponent, causing all the remaining liquid to pump into the loser past their popping point, and releasing the winner from their bonds.
    If the lever has not been pushed one way or the other before the timer reaches zero then both of you will lose. The final competition has begun."
    A timer above the television begins counting down from 15 minutes.
    The whirring of gears and pumps engaging can be heard in the back ground.


    Fear is seen in both girls eyes as they begin to breath in panic. The pumps engage and their breasts grow with each pump. Janie starts breathing short and quickly causing her breasts to grow faster than Holly. Holly takes deep controlled breaths causing her growth rate to be staggered. Janie's breasts are larger and just about touching the lever, beginning to push it towards Holly. Janie passes out due to hyperventilation and Holly takes the lead. Holly's breasts press against the lever, knocking it towards Janie's side. Janie regains consciousness just in time to hear the click and see the lever fully engaged on her side. Janie screams as the full force of the remaining liquid rushes out of the tanks. Holly watches in horror as Janie's breasts grow quickly. Holly hears a creaking sound coming from Janie's chest just before the loud popping and being covered in liquid. Holly's restraints are released and she falls forward onto her oversized chest.
  • NikkTemplar
    I <3 Daenerys Targaryen
    • Aug 2008
    • 677

    #2
    Very clever.


    I like it.

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    • adrianexpansion
      Senior Member
      • Mar 2011
      • 481

      #3
      great story I love it!

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      • violet-beauregarde
        Junior Member
        • Oct 2012
        • 1

        #4

        8/10 ladies shaking boobs

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        • sleeper248
          Senior Member
          • Aug 2008
          • 229

          #5
          Please Vote

          I've entered a script titled Deep Breaths based on this story for the contest at http://www.process-productions.com/f...ad.php?t=32339 My post is Message # 16

          If you like this story please go there and tell them why you think this would make a good clip.

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