The Jealous Elf

[blueberryguy999]

In the North Pole inside the workshop Stephanie is one of the many elves hired to make toys for little boys and girls and for adults too. She was always jealous and getting mad. When she went to Santa to get a raised he told her that elves don't get paid they just enjoy working at the shop. She gets mad and leaves room. She returns to his office and found a bottle with a strange liquid inside it, she grabs the bottle and puts it in her pouch. She returns to work and when her shift ended she headed to the bar to grab a cold beer and then heads to her house. She arrives home and puts the strange bottle down in front of her, she starts to wonder why Santa has this type of bottle in the first but curiosity got the better of her and opened the bottle and began to drink whole in one chug. She then throws the bottle in the trash as she went to find a beer. But when she got to the fridge she started to notice a blue snowflake on her cheek, she wonders how it got there. Soon another one appear and another one and more started to appear, she screams in fright and runs to the trash to read the bottle. She realizes that it came from Krampus industries, she got scared as her cloths began to inflate and ripping off to reveal more blue. She knew that this was bad she was growing bigger and bigger and became blue. Soon she became a massive blueberry she couldn't move anymore as the blueberry began to suck her legs. She became a blueberry, she started to regret stealing the bottle from Santa as she began to cry and cry.

The End

Script:

Narrator: It was a cold December at the North Pole

Narrator: Inside Santa's workshop Stephanie the elf wasn't a normal happy elf she was a very jealous elf

Narrator: No one knows why she is jealous she just is

Stephanie: GOD I HATE THIS JOB MAKING GIFTS FOR BOYS AND GIRLS AND FOR ADULT

Stephanie: I'll ask Santa for a raise and then go home

Narrator: she heads to Santa's office to ask him for a raise

Stephanie: Mr. Claus give me a raise

Santa: Ho Ho Ho Stephanie i can't give u a raise

Stephanie: WHY THE FUCK NOT

Santa: Because elves don't get paid here they just enjoy working here

Stephanie: GODDAMMIT U FAT ASS I'M OUTTA HERE

Narrator: She leaves and waits outside hidden waiting for Santa to leave

Narrator: She goes in after Santa leaves

Stephanie: ALRIGHT WHAT DOES THAT FAT MAN GOT HERE

Stephanie: Whats that bottle doing here

Stephanie: Warning do not drink it at all

Stephanie: WHAT THE HELL, I'M GONNA TAKE IT THIS WILL SHOW HIM

Narrator: She returns to work when her shift ended she leaves right as soon the whistle blows.

Stephanie: Gimme Me a cold beer

Bar Elf: Sure Steph

Stephanie: Don't call me Steph

Bar Elf: Whatever

Narrator: She returns home and grabs the bottle out of her pouch and holds it up

Stephanie: U KNOW WHAT I'M GONNA DRINK IT NO WARNING LABEL CAN STOP ME

Opens the bottle and drinks it

Stephanie: Burp

Stephanie: Man I need a beer

Narrator: but when she went to the fridge she spots something on her cheek

Stephanie: WHAT THE FUCK WHY IS THERE A BLUE SNOWFLAKE ON MY CHEEK

Stephanie: AHHHH MORE ARE APPEARING

Stephanie: OH GOD MY CLOTHS ARE GROWING AND RIPPING

Stephanie: OMG OMG I'M GETTING EVEN MORE BLUE AND GETTING BIG

Stephanie: OH NO THIS BOTTLE CAME FROM KRAMPUS SANTA'S ARCH ENEMY NOW I KNOW WHY IT WAS THERE HE WAS GONNA DESTROY IT
I'M SUCH A BAD ELF

Stephanie: Crying and Sobbing I'M A GIANT BLUEBERRY WHY DID I TAKE THE BOTTLE WHY CONTINUES TO CRY

Narrator: And that's the story of Stephanie the Jealous Elf

Hope u all like this story this is the first one i made with a narrator happy holidays

[sleeper248]

Most of the story is good. "No one knows why she is jealous she just is" feels like writer's block. Revealing a character's motives, even partially, really helps the audience connect with that character and invest more into the story.