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[Roky]

shay-zebraBE_w.wmv

shay-zebraBE_w.wmv 11.30

Pretty good quick BE with effective inflation and decent enough perf. All around good stuff for a quickie - some nit=picky BS:

Nice steady shots - I'd like you to repo after cuts. Repostion and stay there for the entire take, you have a tendency to end up in the same position every take no matter where you start. Great getting all that coverage - try to mix up the angles more so I can use more of it without too many obvious repeats.

The light behind her on set caused the iris to close down - you can tell because when she covers it the iris adjusts up and suddenly she's lit. When you got low and shot up into light she went almost completely black - that's two filters jacked up to pull up the video levels. Please say cut on camera, or perfect. Can see your shadow directing assistant to pump, just say "PUMP!" it's easier for me to remove your audio than a shadow across the screen at such a pivotal point in the clip.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

brandimae-muscles_w.wmv

brandimae-muscles_w.wmv 6.14

Nice shooting and lighting. Brandi Mae posing.

Up in TMC and 2119.

[Roky]

mika-principalAR

mika-principalAR 20.14

Whoever wrote the script should be thrilled with this baby (he he)! Well executed all around, the set looks great, Mika's costumes are great, perf good, and lighting/shooting good, especially when she's the baby. Seems like you delivered the script spot on.

Minor quibble with when she first turns into a kid, you are very low, almost POVT low, for much of it. I'm not a big fan of the low angle anyway, unless it's highly motivated, but here it hurt because there is a light right over her shoulder that effectively clamped the iris down and we lose detail/light/color on Mika. When you back up and take a more standard medium shot the image is great, close up and under the chin not so much.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

sammie_helena-monster

sammie_helena-monster 11.37

Check it out - the actual eating seems to go on but you shot tons of footage so I included a lot of it. That being said, I could probably add about two more minutes of very similar but different looking footage if you want to stretch it out.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

holly-swine

holly-swine 22.40

Introduction and rub down mirror shots outstanding. In general clip solid. Color very nice - but overall image dark - used a pair of filters to radically bring up mids and darks and restore detail. Suits clip, though. Room looks great - nice and uncluttered. I may have gone a bit nuts with the music, you'll have to tell me. Used Cindytalk's "In The Flesh" and "Touched". Also used Beautiful Green Pea Boat's "Nostalgia".

Nostril flaring/nose ring ISO out of focus, that's why minimally shown. Nose ring itself barely in frame, had to watch it a few times to understand what was happening. All in all shooting nice and steady. One quibble with a plot/script like this be aware of the dialogue - realistically (I know, what's realism have to do with it?) Holly's comments would progress or cease - not just say "I'm turning into a pig" over and over and over again during every phase of transformation. A discovery by definition can happen once - a crazy discovery like "I'm turning into a pig" can happend a few times, but at some point she mentally must move on. I left as much repetition out as possible.

Up in TMC. Will wait to do the sample vid until I get feedback in case I was way off. I like the clip, but not sure I took it in the direction you wanted.

[Roky]

myley-bigassWGT

myley-bigassWGT

White balance looks a tad off. Did not repo after cutting. Decent enough, quick WGT with focus on big white ass.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

helena-hulahoopbelly

helena-hulahoopbelly 8.04

Color good outside. Your shadow on her when you're low. AC on inside. Inside whenever you move your shadow tracks across her.

Up in TMC.

SMALLS 4.01/4.03

[Roky]

honey-chatroomFUTA

honey-chatroomFUTA 26.21

AC on. Lots of movement in the camerawork (HD cam, obviously). Noise on the camera as well. I stuck with the flip footage fairly often to give the clip as much of a live feel as possible.

UP in TMC.

[Roky]

holly-pinkvelourASSE

holly-pinkvelourASSE 27.30

Nice steady angles most of the time - largely very good stuff. Nice lighting too, but I'd like a dimmer bulb in the accent light so the auto iris doesn't react so much on the camera. Shadowy during phone call. Used two very obsucre songs, "Unfolding" by Johanna's House Of Glamour and "Certain Trust" by Delirium.

UP in TMC.

[Roky]

caroline-dollTRANS

caroline-dollTRANS 32.30

Aside from the very first shot (too far away to hear well) the rest of the beginning very good - nice steady shots with good angles/good audio/good repositioning between shots. Having the pastor on speed dial a nice touch. After the stockings came off you start moving around a lot - very noticeable change in style. Your shadow appears often. Settles down again in time. Remember not to follow subjects off of/out of frame. Largely great clip I think, pretty good looking with good acting and good shooting.

Used 'Reverend's Revenge' by the Housemartins and 'Manifesto' by Roxy Music.

UP in TMC.

[Roky]

amber-WGT

amber-WGT 9.00

Did what I could with the image - original very very dark. This one has better color than the BE and chickenEAT.

Up in TMC and 2119.

[Roky]

sybil_holly-WGT

sybil_holly-WGT 9.43

Nice lighting and framing. Image gets a little dark when you move in and get lower. Close shot at end very nice (at about 9.15)

Up in TMC and 2119.

Accidentally put a partial small version up in 2119 someone will have to delete.

[Roky]

kimberly-heliuminflate

kimberly-heliuminflate 10.40

POV helium auto inflate. Lots of "I wonder what it would be like to inflate myself like a giant balloon" talk. Then she starts to do it. Focus on belly. Nice color and shooting. AC loud.

UP in TMC.

[Roky]

kami_msnicki-WGT

kami_msnicki-WGT 7.47

The girls need to get bigger for their man. Good quote- "Some Hansel And Gretel shit."

Up in TMC and 2119.

[Roky]

kimberly-labGT

kimberly-labGT 21.21 (Gender Transformation)

Solid clip. Nice shooting in beginning all the way through his BE. ASSE a little tought to see due to the black pants. I used cross dissolves a little bit during the change from him growing new girlie bits to him shrinking into a woman - to suggest a bigger change. Good quotes- "Where's my fuckin' junk!" and "I've got a bitch's ass!"

Up in TMC by 3pm Eastern today.