Nice light, a few hot spots but good overall. Solid color. Still lots of finger noise - not near as loud as before but just as frequent. Actual stomach inflation very well executed - nice steady shots from great angle.
Nice light/color and nice shooting in general but tons of mic noise especially in 2nd half (low shot where camera positioned between legs shooting up over belly).
Jiggle fest. Used a few upbeat '80s sounding generic songs in the background - tried to keep the levels low enough as to not annoy. I can strip them out if you want.
Enjoyed intro - comes off well - well lit and well shot. Good to outstanding perf, especially at end in the kitchen. Appreciate all the locations - all look good and effective. Shooting while addressing Audrina directly great - especially in kitchen again at end - her laying down is great.
Elevator stuff well done too - only little thing is maybe next time decide on some sort of "dark light" if you want to see more detail. Meaning we understand it's supposed to be dark but you need a touch of light to acutally see her features so we aren't left with a black screen. If you want a black screen, fine too, I don't really mind either way personally. An option also is a red or green lightbulb to give a security cam/creepy effect.
Light hot in places throughout. Tube makes an appearance repeatedly in 2nd shot - but pretty much gone after that. Pretty sure I caught it whenever it showed up. Shadowy throughout, both body and camera. Tried to work around it as much as possible when I noticed it. Already mentioned that particular sheet.
Other than that very good stuff- solid enough perf - she was better once she started to inflate and got big - and good shots. End floating set-up awesome. I added some ambient tones throughout the inflation. Also AC'd out any maverick pump sounds, meaning anytime I noticed a really loud one happen while she was not talking, but by necessity had to leave plenty in. I did add some deeper/resonant industrial air blasts to round the soundtrack out a bit. Any of this can be changed easily.
Good stuff in general. Features a BE at end. Largely nice lighting and color. Please try to repo after cutting - starting to stop and start on face a lot. Loved the final shot. I didn't really do much with this clip - added some SFX pre-BE then some lite BE SFX and some ambient type music.
Looks like Holly finally went and blue herself (sorry, had to.) Good lighting and color throughout. General note to keep your hands off the camera so much during these POV's, there's lots of little bumps and readjustments that don't change much with regard to the overall framing of the shot but add tons of audio cleaning and rocky bits. Some minor mic issues throughout - but largely fixable.
Good light/color. Good steady shooting. Nice perf, wants to be a balloon and inflates stomach at end with helium. I didn't add any sound effects, didn't seem necessary.
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