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sydney-geniesoloCUSTOM

sydney-geniesoloCUSTOM 18.05 4/4/5/5.04

To Louis. Good color, solid light, your shadow pops up at times. 23 audio cleans from thumping!

Up in TMC, TMC/Custom, and 2119.

[Roky]

coco-inloveGT

coco-inloveGT 26.38

Good set, nice angles at desk in very beginning. Another nice set and nice shots in Dr's office. Overall very good perf and good shooting and very strong clip. 27 audio cleans caused by camera thumping. Beware of your shadow. Beware of excessive pump noise. Mentioned in IM's already great process shooting made this an easy cut. Can't really see nut, turned out to be a good thing because it doesn't have a realistic look anyway. Good idea to blast on the pic. Used "Love Song" and "Hang Time from Digital Juice.

Up in TMC (Thanks).

[Roky]

coco-donkeyTRANS

coco-donkeyTRANS 17.45
coco-donkeyTRANSFUTA 20.45
coco-donkeyTRANSFUTAgratis 6.59 (used a gypsy song CAROVANA from a group called Municipale Balcanica)

Strap on the feedbag for this wild wild ride. Much of this I have mentioned already via IM and much of this revolves around the general theme of simplification and planning. Some is nit-pickey, sorry. Basically the overriding issue for me was, even after viewing all the footage and certain sections multiple times, I had no idea what to keep in. So once the "Assing" begins, I go from process (as much as possible) to some reaction (a mere fraction of what was shot) to process without much breathing time in between. There seemed to be way too much reaction footage that was all the same - hysterical - and didn't really build to the next change or take the viewer along on the journey to becoming a true ass. Keep camera still - do the process in close if need be - so the clip can be pieced together with more defined stop and start points for actions. If possible direct the talent's reactions more specifically, have them go from point A to point B in a take if possible, they should have a feeling for when the take is over instead of repeating the same thing over and over until you say "cut".

-Drinking tea at the office out of a tiki mug distracted me - I'm sure it isn't unheard of to do but looked funny to me (I warned you there's some nit-pickey notes)

-When you push in to create a cut point/end a shot try not to pull out of the same place - I realize you were trying to avoid the area that was going to be transformed and I picked one to use but a more traditional reposition would have worked too.

-Light and color was good throughout - office looked great with great angles too. I do think moodier lighting would have aided the transformation, though.

-Way too much time spent on feet leg and chest scratching. Especially since no real process follows - they did serve a great purpose signaling changes (feet/legs transform/chest skin changing) there just seemed to be tons of it. There's a part in her house where she scratches her foot and ankle, already covered in black make-up, for over a minute then notices the black discoloration and freaks out. She has to react to what you want your audience to react to at the same time (in this case). No big deal, I was able to cut around it, but a waste of time on set.

-Stomach tits that vanish?

-BE seemed tacked on and actually created issues because I could see the balloons throughout the remainder of the scene. Perhaps there to draw in more sales?

-Make-up looked great - long hair an odd choice to me though - most likely there so you could secure the ears better.

-Fingers started working at times after they had stopped- continuity issue. Liked the dark make-up on her hands though- nice look when she kept her digits tucked.

-Tail growth disturbing in every way. Maybe try what you tried for a shot, then get an easier to pull off side shot and call it a day. Seemed to spend a lot of time on it and I couldn't even really tell where it was.

-FUTA a little mispositioned. Also dickstick a bit too active - couldn't use much because it was jittery and looked like a stick. Her position on her back disturbing as well with the tail hanging there - balloons shined through her pants at times. Easy for me to say after the fact I know but seems it might have been easier for her to simply mount the edge of the bed (she is a donkey now) and leave a wet spot rather than stroke herself off with hooves.

Don't know how I did on this first cut. There's plenty of footage unused.


Up in TMC.

[Roky]

chrissy-spasuitinflate

chrissy-spasuitinflate 7.51

Light a bit hot, but not bad.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

gemini-clownTRANS

gemini-clownTRANS 16.57

Includes ASSE and BE. Pretty good perf - tough to judge clip in general - haven't seen a clown trans before. Clown make-up and outfit look great. Didn't repo in very beginning, but after that repo'd well. Try not to follow talent off set/out of frame. Looks amateurish and you shoot light stands, pictures on the floor, etc. You'll almost never see that on TV or in a movie. Very very good ASS process. Good BE too. Can see balloon a lot - that's why there's a bunch of cuts at the end - I hope I cropped them out/cut around them all. Used Digital Juice's Comedy Logo 07663.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

coco_jenny-FUTA

coco_jenny-FUTA 16.09

Repo more on intro shots - once the clip gets going you seem to reposition better. 5 audio cleans due to camera thumping. Good set - nice outfits look good on the couch. Good repo on the FUTA - actual process a little sparse on usable material. Maybe less in and out jabbing with the dickstick for this type of clip - the "horror in and out" jabbing worked for the clips where the focus is on the process and the "horror of it all" - but this clip doesn't really have that focus so it seems out of place and random. Also couldn't really get any of it to match anyway, so we have a little growth, a little movement, and some straining through the torn fabric. Tried to keep it as realistic as possible.

Up in TMC (sorry late on the notes).

[Roky]

allura-rabbitTRANS

allura-rabbitTRANS 11.44

Much much easier to edit. Losing her ability to speak so early on kind of limited her perf at times. Ass E and tail growth pretty successful and realistiv, although once you tied her foo her buttcheek balloons were often visible so I had to drop out or crop some footage (like her hopping onto the couch at the end). Whisker growth okay but the actual whiskers only partially successful. There's a dog wimpering throughout her discovering her whiskers. I didn't mind her ear growth - simple but got the point across. would have liked another take for safety. Nails a bit odd but added running time. I cut her tits out in the end - seemed completely random - just looked funny to me and created a need for a wipe at the very end. Let me know if you want it in there.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

allura-hulkwhore

allura-hulkwhore 7.56

Good light great color - beware of the striped pattern of her dress - the Miore Effect (a kind of trippy motion almost like the stripes are dancing) happens on occasion. Great shirt button burst. Good shoulder growth - flesh squeezing through effective.

Up in TMC and 2119 with small (small full length - didn't want to split as the hulk trans happens all in the 2nd half of clip).

[Roky]

allura-sleepGRO

allura-sleepGRO 13.18

Pretty good stuff - good shooting but watch shadows in that little room. I think I mentioned it previously for this room you may want to consider finding a good wide, pretty much as far back as possible, and use a tripod. This would maximize the room's effect (it looks pretty great at times on video). Then if you want anything in close-up cut and set up inside the room, get the shot, cut, and return to the wide tripod. First four minutes of this clip seemingly have nothing to do with the rest of the action. The rest of the action is good enough I don't think too many will care. Great chest burst. Used Digital Juice suspense texture 08372.

On the way to TMC.

[Roky]

tara-rabbitTRANS

tara-kittyTRANS 15.58

Minimal camera thumping. All in all pretty good clip, especially for being a quickie, with effective reveals. Only issue is it doesn't feature too much process- BE good, tail not so great (thing coming out of hole issue again similar to donkey clip - if you want to see more I can it just looks very unrealistic to me so I kept it to a minimum), ears not so great. For the tail if you shoot the "thing coming out of hole" style again please get a shot of growth NOT showing the hole (maybe from above like she's looking back over her shoulder at this thing growing out of her tailbone) so maybe I can mix the two. Hairballs nice touch, dog at end nice too. Good shooting and good perf. Teeth look good but we don't see them much.

Up in TMC.

[Roky]

mika-redloon

mika-redloon 9.57 4.56/5.00

Auto-inflation clip - with tank no suit. Good stuff. Well shot well lit good perf. 10 audio cleans from thumping.

Up in TMC. On the way to 2119.

[Roky]

mika-hulk

mika-hulk 11.41 5.38/6.03

First shot nice and steady but a touch low - also first two or three shots too hot especially on her face and the upper part of the wall. First shot also feautres the microphone shadow directly in center of frame when you're close and on 2nd shot you begin with the shadow directly in the center of the frame. Other than that good stuff - good perf- nice angles - good back tear. Maybe a bit heavy on stocking/shoe stuff = seemed to spend a lot of time on that. Just trying to save you time on set, but if the fans like it than it's worth it. Used ambient texture 08239 from Digital Juice.

Up in TMC and 2119.

[Roky]

helena-cowTRANS

helena-cowTRANS 19.51

21 audio cleans specifically due to camera thumping. Creepy TRANS fun here, much more organized process made this easier on my end, also as I mentioned I think Helena delivered a nice, controlled and effective perf. Nit-pickey stuff now: Remember to reposition every shot - you repo often here but not always. I'm not too fond of the look of her nose, which is no big deal, but it's one of those change elements I'd like to see occur later in the clip so she doesn't have to wear it so long. Also, another angle for the BE would have helped extend the process (I know these shoots get long and drag on forever). Used "Love Song" from Digital Juices Smooth Stacks, also DJ's suspense texture 08357. Also used "Omen" from "Scary Sounds".

Processing updated master now.

[Roky]

mika-fidoTRANS/fidoTRANSFUTA

mika-fidoTRANS 19.55 Up in TMC
mika-fidoTRANSFUTA 26.52 still processing

Hot on the hooves (ugh) of helena-cowTRANS comes Mika turning into a dog/werecanine. All in all strong stuff - camera work largely good and good perf/solid make-up. 8 audio cleans specifically from camera thumping. A few more from what I think is your e-mail alert chime on your computer - you may want to turn that off while shooting. Camera mic shadows pop up throughout dead center on subject, I avoided as many as I could. I'm still a bit baffled by the tail growth - not quite sure what you're going for with the angle, etc, maybe notes would help next time. Fingernail growth halfway worked - only when I couldn't already see her exisiting nail. Initial BE shot outstanding, much of the BE process kicks ass. I used the Poo cut aways where there were big jumps in action (in between hump styles, etc.) where I would typically use a wipe. This clip heavy on the sound design - let me know if it's in the correct direction because that's the bit that takes forever.

[Roky]

beula-wartsIB

beula-wartsIB 25.50

Light hot at times - very first shot too hot and once she's in the white half shirt too hot. Color good though. If possible please put lower wattage bulb in those giant paper lamps, they're shutting down your iris at times. Nips not so well place especially for reveal. Balloons made appearance quite a bit during her post BE frolic, I think I cut out or around all of them but please check to make sure. They're white and sometimes shine through a buttonhole. I wasn't a fan of her initial "ugly" makeup and the lips on the very last stage. Looks great the rest of the time - good before and after outfit. Beware the low angles during the BE - I'd rather not be looking up at her knees when she's sitting on the couch, it's a less flattering angle on her face mainly and it makes it seem as if the viewer is laying on the floor.

All said good stuff though, good perf, good process (BE) the rest I did a bit of a "magic dissolve" using SFX and a white color bleed transition kind of a magic glow thing. Used Digital Juice's 08229 texture.

Up in TMC shortly.